Penname: banfield [Contact] Real name: Tony
Member Since: February 20 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I like vore which is the ultimate of man's destiny. I prefer cannibalism of fully-grown men best, but can happily compromise with shrunken men providing they are not too tiny. Better by far that they be 6 inches plus.
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Reviews by banfield
Summary: Nick is guilty of a serious crime. What will his punishment be?
Categories: New World Order, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3487 Read Count: 16222
[Report This] Published: December 08 2010 Updated: December 08 2010
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 12 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Well, Sil, I really enjoyed this short yarn! It happens to be one of my favourite fantasies - to be inserted as Nick was, and by a seemingly young girl.   Very well done!

Author's Response: Why thank you

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 29 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 This is my second review, Sil, to see whether you receive it as you asked me to do. I re-read this story and still became excited by the daughter's actions.  Head first would have "blown my top" as they say.    You write jolly good yarns! 

Author's Response: Thanks again. Head first could lead to suffocation, and i didn't want him to die. In case you were wondering, no I didn't get an e-mail like i should've.

Summary: A diminutive man gets more than what he wished for when he meets a supertall supermodel.
Categories: Body Exploration, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12170 Read Count: 142163
[Report This] Published: December 31 2010 Updated: February 07 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 01 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 O dear, now we're left in limbo and probably awaiting the next chapter; so let's hope it is exciting. BTW: it's "giantess" not 'giant' as you put it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I know the difference between giant and giantess, lol! But it's a first-person narrator, so I like to describe everything in his words. Next chapter should be on in about a week or so.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Of course you knew the diff. between giantess/giant, but a lot of "authors" get the error of blonde and blond in their works as well.

Thank you for your reply to mine and hope, as said, there'll be some exciting words such as the scenes you promised in your intro, viz: insertions.   Jolly good luck to you - for the New Year!



Author's Response: Ah, I see what you mean now. Thanks! The first few chapters will be pretty slow (set-up and all that), but after that I'll get to the insertions, lol!

Summary: See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Giantess, Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 560 Read Count: 6966
[Report This] Published: January 04 2011 Updated: January 04 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 05 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ja, eine gut aber einfach Geschichter, mein Freund,  und verleicht if it had been in English, you might have expanded on it, und das Frau nicht so alt!    So, danke sehr! 

Author's Response: Sie sprechen Deutsch! Und ein Frau dich nicht gegessen jetzt.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 06 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bitte konnen mein Freund, ich das letzte Stuck Ihrer Antwort nicht verstehen: und eine Frau isst nicht jetzt.

  Entschuligen mein schlecht Deutsch.



Author's Response: Translated I said, "And a woman hasn't eaten you yet?" LOL

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 07 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Danke sehr, Timescribe. I shall revert to English because of my difficulty of German sprache.  It is always thrilling to imagine a lady preparing to gobble you up - either chewing or swallowing. It is a pity one cannot send pics to illustrate such stories as was possible at that now defunct site known as Femcanns - short for Female Cannibals to which I sent many stories portaying giantesses as well as fully-grown male victims.  Thanks for the translation.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 08 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Mein Lieber Freund, Timescribe, Ich habe mir der wunschen Ihre kleiner Geschichte auf Englisch zu schreiben  -  Would you be happy with that? 

Author's Response: Ja. Das ist gut. Aber es ist sehr wie meine andere Geschichten in Englisch. (You can post it as a translation of my story under your name, if that's what you meant).

Voracious by Silhouette Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A series of short nameless vore based stories
Categories: Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2300 Read Count: 17370
[Report This] Published: January 09 2011 Updated: January 19 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: January 16 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: At The Beach

 What a delightful, fresh story!  Well done, Silhouette.  Such a yarn must have been in many an ancient seaman's thoughts.

Author's Response: Maybe not just ancient seamen, why not todays as well. My e-mail seems to be working again, in case you were wondering.

Summary:

Teachers pet can be a dangerous position to be in.


Categories: Watersports, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4130 Read Count: 49543
[Report This] Published: February 19 2011 Updated: March 19 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: March 20 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, yet another exciting and stimulating yarn from you, Amanda, from your active and provocative mind; but alas, as always, littered with ungrammatical errors which, quite happily, I corrected.  However, so good to see you returned from your Far Eastern sojourn.  I am yet to read the 2nd part of this recent little story, and shall, beforehand, thank you very much.  It WAS most stimulating.   XXX All over, of course.

Reviewer: banfield Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAVE NOW JUST READ THE 2ND PART AND WAS RATHER DISAPPOINTED THAT NO MENTION OF THE PUPIL'S "PRIZED POSSESSIONS" WAS WRITTEN DURING THE EATING PROCESS. NEVER MIND, WHEN I GO THROUGH THE CORRECTION I SHALL ADD WHAT SURELY MUST BE, THE MOST DELECTABLE MORSEL FOR ONE SUCH AS YOU. 

Other than that, it is a good, refreshing and stimulating story. I was glad the pupil was 5 inches and no smaller.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Oooh Banfield you are a nuisance with the way i express my self...yes i know i infuriate you with my gramma..lol...but..mmm well i'm sure you will enjoy correcting my error's hehe ...besides its much more fun for me knowing that you are doing what's expected of you...hopefully you will be as obliging if i ever get the chance to dine upon you....look after yourself for me won't you...Amanda xxx     

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: March 22 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Many, many thanks for your reply, Amanda. Sorry to be a "nuisance" as you put it, but one must, as a teacher, make instructive critisms as well as complimentary.

  Along with your many admirers, I would be awfully excited to be dined upon by you, but rather terrified at the same time - especially if eaten as your pupil/victim.  BTW: I do hope you reply to my other 'direct' message.  Re: the rewritten piece in that yarn. 



Author's Response:

MMM you have my e-mail address so if you would like me to read over your additions then  i shall, so please send me your version of a tale that has lingered for ever such a long while in my minds eye.xx

 

Amanda xx 

Awakening by amanda Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

maybe i should remove this one don't think this forum is suitable for this tale....its ..to tame i feel....need time to decide so may not post any more chapters until i have decided...xx Amanda. MMMM maybe not lol think my wicked minds going to turn this a bit nasty yummy yummy in my tummy xx


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12067 Read Count: 146102
[Report This] Published: March 27 2011 Updated: May 11 2013
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: March 28 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, Amanda, you ought to continue regardless of your faults of grammar. It's intriguing. I found it good that the "predator" was so young, but then, in the 2nd part, she's suddenly much older. Never mind, as gentle though it be, it's definitely worth reading, and it's different.   BTW: I presume you don't wish to see the changes/additions I have made to your previous yarn - "Apple for the Teacher."   Ho-hum...

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: April 13 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Re: chapter 5...yet another inspiring piece that excels all others by way of its prose. Of course, the main theme remains the same as the others - yours as well - but the words you put into your work makes it so unique.  Do hope you continue, Amanda; it's so intriguing.  Well done that girl!



Author's Response:

Hello again Banfield sorry i have been slow in responding to your e-mails i have had a busy time here so my freedom has been compromised slightly but please be patient i shall reply to your comments....thank you for positive reviews i am ....intrigued  at the moment the story seems to change perspectives within my own minds eye....i am as you know governed by an inner urge to satisfy an age old desire to feed upon the males in our society.......curious really as to the real reason behind this passion i have to eat from the male sex.....lol

Amanda xx 

Dinner for two by girlfood Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Two women on a date have a dinner of a dozen men.


Categories: New World Order, Giantess, Vore, Couples , Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1822 Read Count: 12669
[Report This] Published: May 30 2011 Updated: May 30 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: May 31 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I say, Bob, it's good to see you are continuing submitting a yarn. However, this one "Dinner for two" seemed to lack any eroticism such as the more revealing description of the two diners. The story simply read like any other yarn - rather mundane and offering no form of excitement.   I rather feel that it was a rush job.

One thing I'd like to point out is that the act of swallowing can hardly give the girls the essence/flavour of taste.   Perhaps it's me, Bob, having read so many stories of this type.  So please forgive my criticisms.



Author's Response:

This was a bit of a rush. Not my best work but I wanted to submit something so I was left with this. Best wishes.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: September 19 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello Bob.  Yes, I'm still around and would like to thank you for many of your yarns...which are quite stimulating! 

  I don't supose you'll reply to this after so long, but, if you do, you'll be so welcomed.

 

BTW: MY EMAIL ADDRESS IS banfield18@blueyinder.co.uk

Summary:

Continuation of the School of Civil Service story. Brooke has graduated and about to get her shrinking device. Just as a warning there is talk of vore, but not a whole lot of it in the this chapter. I wanted to describe the Republic in more detail and I hope I have done that successfully. Enjoy!


Categories: New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2022 Read Count: 6330
[Report This] Published: December 11 2011 Updated: December 11 2011
Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello Doorknob, I have just read the two parts of The Women's Republic and found the story very good indeed. I would comment on several grammatical errors - one in particular that I see quite often - is the word "wiggling" which should be WRIGGLING with an 'r'.   However, would you let me know if there is a 2nd part to your interesting yarn because you have jumped to "Chapter 3"

I copied the two parts onto my documents and changed Mrs Jane to Miss Jane as being married in your futuristic novel would be quite inappropriate.

I do hope you will reply.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, Doorknob, I have just found pt 2. Again, a good yarn, but I feel I must comment again; this time, about the swallowing act.  I've spoken about this to other members of the GTS Fraternity - that swallowing anything, like an oyster or a tablet, one cannot acqire any taste whatsoever, so where does the "taste" come from? So, in my opinion, and most of my stories, the shrunken victims are EATEN - that is, sucked and chewed up (masticated) and therefore TASTED.

  I also find that the lack of describing the females' appearance tends to lose a lot of excitement in a story, plus the erotica.  So there, may I invite you to read one or two of my stories - in particular, "Nothing goes to Waste"?

P.S. Don't forget, it should be Miss Jane, not Mrs. 

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 15 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I see that you are ignoring my previous 2 messages which means you do not like being advised. I don't really care. However, I'm rewriting the best chapter so that the girl will shrink her "purchase" to only 2 to 3 feet in oder to obtain some sexual satisfaction and therefore make the story more exciting than it is.



Author's Response:

Banfield, I was not ignoring your comments, I did not get a chance to read them until tonight. Your comments are very helpful and I appreciate the constructive criticisms immensely. I'm still fairly new to writing stories so I appreciate the learning curve that goes into it. In fact, I understand the shortfalls these stories may have, and you pointed them out correctly. There are areas where I am looking to improve so any advice is very welcome.

Reviewer: banfield Signed
Date: December 16 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, my friend, I must apologise for my impetuousness. I'm so glad you did not take offence.  I really did enjoy the first part as it had that certain piquancy that others do not contain. My intention of rewriting that chapter is for my pleasure, and mayhap I shall send to a couple of my acquaintances, and perhaps even to yourself if you are acceptable.

The subject of vore (only practiced by females of course) is so terribly exciting - something that puzzles me, and yet there are so many opinions thereof.

If you are interested, or merely curious, you may like to contact me at:- as015b1810@blueyonder.co.uk   You would be most welcomed.

In the meanwhile, I wish you a merry Christmas and a prosperous New Year.