Inside were a glass cutter, a taser, bribing money, lock picks, false Id's, a mini-thermal camera capable of seeing through certain walls, a beaker for living animals, plus a few more high costing items his bosses in Iran had... very reluctantly supplied him with.

Omg...I can't. I just can't. Ok, I can. Bribing money?! Like...money specifically for bribing? It can only serve that one purpose? Wooow.

Abbas had learned from a bribe where Sarah Al-Nassar's room was.

And now we know how he found her room. Because before I thought he was clairvoyant or something.

Gah, fine. It was a good chapter. I enjoyed it. Though, the fact that I laughed for like a full minute after seeing the contents of his duffle bag helped make up my mind. 10 stars...and I'll forgive the spelling errors because of your mangled hand. :P

@Nostory

The bio says 36c...which is basically the same as Ds.

Could be a typo, but they're far from small. ;)

Also, what's this about a cure? We tiny men never wish for such a thing! Unless we were to have a very large amount of both the shrinking agent(or rather...sugar) and cure. Now THAT would be awesome.

All caught up on this! Though I have to say, I'm a tad bit confused. You didn't mention in the previous chapter that Abbas had learned Jack's name, but he appeared to recognize it when he heard Sarah talking. Also, I find it strange that he was able to find Sarah's room so easily. Did he visit the conscierge desk first and bribe them for her room number? Yes, I know I'm picky like that and can be annoying, but I had to ask.

And to answer your question...I think Mallika's current lipstick in her bio looks good, but I'd almost prefer to see her with something darker, as she suggested to the make-up artist.

Obviously authors like yourself who contribute don't get payed, so I won't complain about grammar or proper paragraph structuring and so forth. But it definitely helps people stay interested when they can keep up(unless it's a smutty story, than I don't think we're as particular).

Also, I noticed you described her fingers as the size a tree trunks. A lot of people like to use this phrase, but I don't think it applies here considering Jack's size. Probably more like tractor trailer size. But I'm probably just overthinking it. Sorry.

I've enjoyed what I've read so far and will definitely keep reading.

I'm not one for the cruel giantess crowd, but the insertion and soft vore scenes were great...as well as the butt crush scene. Feet just aren't my thing. Sorry.

When starting the story I had no idea that Kaila was going to be such an exhibitionist. Quiet and shy. But give her a bit of power and she's a goddess. Thanks for the good read.

Life was the same height as Death.

Interesting. Very Interesting. I only mention this, because in chapter 3 Death told Aidan she was a few inches taller than Life. Why would she lie?

Huh. I expected Aidan to have a pretty slender build. He's an accountant, who slaves away at work all day. He's also a bit of a coward, so I'm surprised he takes time to maintain physical fitness.

Uhh...the Angel of Death is named Maverick? The slayer of the Egyptians' first born sons in Hebrews? Well I'll be damned. I would've never had guessed it.

So you made Gaea spunky and full of life! But Life is a total bitch, I guess. Diana seemed real friendly though.

Ha...I thought that 'Eyrn's Finest Coffee' seemed strange when I saw it.

I'm not sure that the Irishman deserved to die and have a date with Death's stomach.  Especially if all the meth head got was a few seconds of pain. But that's just my compassionate side getting the better of me, I'm sure.

Poor old Lenny. Sounds like he's lead a horrible life so far. Hopefully he'll be able to forget about the past and enjoy his future.

Hmm...it seems like Aidan and Death are moving a bit fast, eh? The kiss was definitely warranted after all the time they've spent together and because of their chemistry.

I suppose that neither of them have been sexually active for quite a while, so maybe that's why. Then again...there is some unknown reason as to why she's so attracted to him. Can't wait to learn what that is!

Also, I've never heard of a tanktop groaning before. Must've been pretty damn  tight.

I was going over this chapter in my head today and remembered this:

"Have you ever heard the term: 'Nothing is bigger than life?" She asked. Aiden nodded.

"That's a lie. I'm a few inches taller."

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Wow. Death must have some sort of super competitive streak. She seems awful proud of those 'few inches', considering that she's somewhere between 101-500ft tall.

And just incase you're wondering...I will never tire of criticizing your work. You've brought this out of me. I claim no responsibility whatsoever. Haha

I like it. His life sounded quite horrible, but I hope that's about to change.

Aidan has quite the ego it seems. Best accountant in the world(or very close)? Unless...does Death need an accountant? She's interested in him for some reason.

I really hope it was poison. If not, then how dare he waste a perfectly good bottle of whiskey like that?

I hope to see more soon. Review this people!

Oh, and I'll definitely check out Vacation Abroad. Amazons aren't really my thing so I'll try the first chapter of Marooned and see how it goes. So many stories I haven't read yet!

I half expected Amy to say: "Let me take care of that." And rip the stump out of the ground before they left. Ah, well. Digging builds muscle.

Wow...Katelyn is just completely adorable. You've got the cute little sister dynamic in the bag.

And the relationship begins! But the story ends. :( Damn. I guess I'll just have to imagine the rest. Vividly imagine it, that is. Wow...that's so lame.