Penname: FreemanCD [Contact] Real name: Drake Doe
Member Since: February 09 2014
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A Macrophile with a dream


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Summary:

Jack and the Giants live in contemporary homes in close proximity with each other.  Cloud castles are a thing of the past. 

Jack is a thief however, and a bully who likes to steal other people's things..  This is what happens when two worlds are too close to each other for safe keeping.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Maternal, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4149 Read Count: 30109
[Report This] Published: April 30 2016 Updated: July 21 2016
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 30 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Starting off with some suspense, we still wait in build up for the thief to starting theivering. Jack's ever growing perverseness gets to develop in this chapter, but we see nothing of the family aside from their scattered cloths. The wait kills, and their isn't quite as much going on as the first chapter, making Chapter Two feel a little slower. Jack's character is what redeems The Burglar, however, as we get to see him messing around with giant objects. Ultimately The Burglar is a fine chapter, though the anticipation for contact is killing me. The Burglar recieves: 3.5 Stars. (Which is still 7/10)

Author's Response:

I promise not to tease you much longer.  But a story must have build up and background in order to orient the reader and satiate his or her wise subconcious which demands such food..  And please forgive my hesitation to throw that reader directly into gratification of some sort until the above requirements have been met.  Otherwise, I'm just giving you fetish tripe which I wish to avoid at all costs.. 

The reward is usually worth the wait.  And the story must go from point A to B to C and never jump from A to C lest I disrespectfully rob you of the substance that you are entitled to, which I am not prepared to do.

Thank you once again for a thoughtful review FreemanCD as I'm beginning to look forward to the next one. :)

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 21 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Glad to see you're back. I love this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks Freeman.

Summary:

When the GiantessWorld community attends one school together where your size reflects your current grade percentage in whatever classroom you're in, naturally things wind up being one big festival of fetish fun between classes . . . especially considering the existence of the little black cards, known as "death cards", that act essentially as extra lives.

 

This is a community story- You guys can add yourselves, suggest chapter material, or simply request something you think I should write. Here's a few basic ground rules for how this works, should you want something to happen: 

1. I won't accept suggestions unless you offer yourself as a student. Name, appearance, personality, and anything you are/aren't up for, in case I need background extras in other people's requests. You don't have to be honest about your appearance, and honestly I expect a fake name- just give me a real person's name and we're all good XD

2. You're normal size outside classrooms/the gym, and you will shrink (or sometimes grow, if you're a special little extra credit student) to reflect your grade percentage. For example, if you have 10 points in the class out of 100, you'll be a tenth your normal size, etc. 

3. Black "death cards" shrink/grow with their holder, and getting killed burns up the card and teleports you to the front office. The office will give extra cards to students they feel would want/need them, and sometimes teachers distribute them if they want to kill as punishment. Dying without a card is permanent, but let's not discuss that for now. 

4. Class of Giantess is a very weird private college. We're all adults here, unless you specifically request to not be.

5. Class of Giantess gives no fucks. The teachers can flunk you into the ground if you don't do the work or particularly suck at it.


Categories: Entrapment, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13382 Read Count: 90557
[Report This] Published: August 31 2016 Updated: January 04 2017
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: September 09 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Simple Statistical Superiority

Loved it. Thanks for writing George well.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: April 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Profiles

To everyone that's leaving suggestions on this story: The author passed away. So, sadly, this story is discontinued.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 11 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Profiles

Pretty good last chapter! As for the whole hubbub concerning the other chapters, I say that if you find yourself in a rut with this setting, really try to push yourself. Who knows, maybe go for a chapter arc focussing in on a plot, or maybe go for a genre inside CoG, like a mystery or an adventure. I don't know. Keep up with the goods.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 26 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Halloween Party

Still great at portraying Lutz just the way I thought. I can't wait to see Luna and Classmates at a Halloween Party, and seeing what they're dressed as.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: September 05 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Luna's Birthday

It would be cool to see like an index of all the characters. Just so we know who everyone is. 

Also, are you planning on having a limit of characters? And if so, how many?



Author's Response:

I'll try to put one up once the sign-up requests stop coming in, don't worry.

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: August 31 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Luna's Birthday

(Oh, and because this is your story, don't think I want you to make George and Luna a couple. It will be better if he never gets his shot for George, believe me, I know.)

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 31 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Luna's Birthday

Hey, Silent One. I was excited to see this interesting concept and even more excited to see who was helming it. I, an unabashed Naomi and Lorelai fan, have been looking forward to more from you. 

 

Anyway, here's a little profile I have done:

George Lutz

Male, 21

Black, short, bang-less hair

Brown eyes w/ glasses

Pale skin

5'6"

Scrawny/Lanky

Schedule- Drama: 10%; English:40%; Biology: 100%; Mathematics: 1%; History: 70%; Physical Education: 1%

Submissive, Neurotic. Prone to anxiety. Intelligent in fields, but unable to ratchet up grades to due his lack of punctuality, often ending in tardies as well. Dating No one. Madly In Love w/ Luna. When approaching her, he often thinks he's saying the wrong thing at every time, and ultimtely is depressed about himself. I envision him constanly wearing a brown tux, red tie and matching pants. 

 

I have one interesting story idea:

Character is pressured into helping a bully get a better grade, and ends up spending so much time, xe lowers xir own grade, letting the bully over power xir. Every time xe tries to get their grade up, the bully beats xir. I could see George doing this, hat is my self insert, but your characters could work in the situation. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Your self-insert is madly in love with mine? That's . . . actually pretty funny. 

Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the dynamic between Naomi and Lorelei. They're fun to write, but I'm loath to write them when I'm not either making a present for Choreo or collaborating with him.

Also, it's gotta sting for little George that it's the two classes Luna is at her best that he's flea-size . . . heck, Tanya, her/my ever-possessive girlfriend, is taller than him/you in almost every class!

You suggested it, George will be in it. Unfortunately, without anyone making themselves into a bully, I may have to dip into my well of characters . . .

Summary:

So, I'll occasionally be posting little one-offs (Perhaps some with a few chapters if I feel like it) relating to the Class of Giantess series created by Silent One which can be found here: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6186

 

Summary: Gina Evans happens to be a student who attends a college where students heights are altered by their grades. Not the most dominate woman in the dorms, yet, hell hath no fury like Ms. Evans scorned. 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4716 Read Count: 21321
[Report This] Published: September 10 2016 Updated: November 26 2016
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Gina's Revenge

Love the way you implemented George!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I thought that George might be the best example since they had similiar height in at least one class. Plus his flaws gave me the perfect excuse for what I used. Many thanks for the review and the five stars!

Summary:

Class of Giantess can be a petrifying experience for those who are ill-equipped to enter the semester. For those who struggle in their studies, they'll soon find themselves in a struggle for their life.

This is my first story, and I'll be storing my Class of Giantess shorts here! I'll mostly focus on females with the occasional male victim, and my core characters are Lily (narcissism is a fun thing), Michelle and possibly Madeline, she interests me~ Though I'm totally up for experimenting with the rest of the cast too.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Class of Giantess
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6272 Read Count: 30344
[Report This] Published: November 22 2016 Updated: April 28 2017
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Heart-to-heart

I don't know, I liked it. It was good at introducing us to a character. I'd like to see more.

Author's Response: And there will be more, when I whip out my phone at midnight and am a rare mix of bored and horny (oops). More to come for sure.

Summary:

A young teenager finds himself shrunken to a centimeter in his bedroom and is forced to find help before it's too late.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1704 Read Count: 56076
[Report This] Published: December 13 2016 Updated: December 13 2016
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: December 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (Back story)

I'm waiting for the next chapter to really get a handle on your writing style.

Summary:

After a birthday party of particular importance, it seems like some attention is necessary . . .

Warning: Not for the faint of heart, and likely for a different reason than you're expecting. 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3805 Read Count: 10834
[Report This] Published: January 10 2017 Updated: January 10 2017
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Birthday Gift

Loved it. Great short story, with an unpredictable, satisfying and well-lead-up-to twist. You wow me, yet again Silent One, this being your third story to enter my "Favorites", after Poor Communication and of course, Class of Giantess.


My three ideas, none of which I want to push onto you in any way, are probably the following:

A story arc in Class of Giantess

More stuff in the Naomi and Lorelai story


And my personal idea:

A family of tinies and a family of giants brought together during some party because of a recent marriage.
(Honestly, as innocent as it sounds, innocence with dashes of horrid fucked-up ness is always a good pursuit for you.)



Feel free to use that idea as freely as you'd like, and otherwise, good job on that story, Silent One, you are one of my favorite authors

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. I own nothing but my own characters, plot, and not here to infringe on anyone. Enjoy!

 

My first ever story.  Inspired by jacksmith's  amazing “Julia”.  When 3 best friends get shrunk by an insane socialite. Will they survive their torture or die trying to get help?

  

 


Categories: Adult 30-39, Young Adult 20-29, Unaware, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1121 Read Count: 7802
[Report This] Published: January 10 2017 Updated: January 15 2017
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstar
Date: January 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: ACT I FOREVER Chapter 1 Hurt

Julia is great, I have to agree.

One question: why are you showing us the three acts? Wouldn't it keep interest more if we didn't know when it would end?

As a forewarning, most readers in GiantessWorld like a long chapter that they can skim through, as I've found in my time on here.

The three main characters might be a little too similar. What part of what made Julia interesting was the idea of five strangers being imprisoned together, and how they bonded over the course of time.

I'd say if you could, run the story through Microsoft Word, because there are a couple spelling errors (*Oy Vey) and grammatical errors ("What?" *Was the First Word).

I think you could really make this story your own from here on, but if you follow Jacksmith's footsteps to closely, you'll have the impossible job of bearing constant comparisons to his work

Author's Response:

thank you very much for your harsh consturtive critism, like I said this si my firist story and for soem reason it hasn't been taking my other chapters in.  the plan was to make this story 10 chapters and the basic idea of crazy ritch girl shrinking people is were it would of ended, like I said julia inspired this story. the difference well biggest differece is that each chapter usually would have each protaginest's point of view on the events they are experiencing, i.e. in chapter 2,  it would take paul's perspective who isn't the brightest guy in the shed,etc.

 

I guess that would be a better case, However liek is aid first story and time on here.  if longer chapters ar ebetter i guess i could add chapter 2 into chapter 1. thank you :)

Summary:

Zac is alone in a creepy haunted house, hiding from Giantesses dressed as monsters. they are meant to terrorize giant patrons can Zac survive and find his giant girlfriend and get out in time?


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11501 Read Count: 56760
[Report This] Published: February 02 2017 Updated: February 18 2017
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Turn in Richfield

Cool concept. I'm interested to see more.

Author's Response:

I'm interested in writing more

Summary: A young tiny named James lives a painful lonely life. The object of his affection, Leah Scarlett, is his best friend's mom. He hopes to eventually get the opportunity to act on his impulses, immoral as they may be. Will everything go according to his plan?
Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38443 Read Count: 330451
[Report This] Published: June 02 2017 Updated: February 26 2018
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Lusting for Leah

Surprisingly well written. I'm excited for future chapters.

Summary:

Alex is just trying to have a real college experience, he only has one problem: Like one in every 10 people he's 2 inches tall. In trying to live a normal life he will quickly find that being the life of the party is not all it's cracked up to be. 


Categories: Unaware, Butt, Couples, Crush, Humiliation, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Insertion, Legwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4915 Read Count: 62672
[Report This] Published: September 18 2018 Updated: January 02 2019
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: November 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Invitation

10 percent of all people are tiny, and they don’t build to support them? That’s 753 million people!

Summary:

I have brought back the character Abbie Miller the short and petite woman from "Abbie." She's physically fragile but her mental powers are off the charts. In the future all prisons in the world were put into a micro center where the inmates were shrunk to 1/20th of an inch tall. There they could be controlled by avatars. These robot avatars would take on the personality of warden Abbie. This fragile, short, and petite women would soon change the world. 

Abbie would also use her hypnotic powers for world domination and put women in charge.


Categories: Giantess, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7265 Read Count: 21857
[Report This] Published: September 22 2018 Updated: December 16 2018
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: September 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So, you see that little bird symbol? That means your story is a Round Robin. What that means, is, any person with an account can add to your story pretty easily. If this is on purpose, then don't mind this, but just know, anyone can add a chapter.

Summary:

189 years ago the world was ravaged by the Shrining Virus. 99.5% of humanity was shrunk within a matter of days. Since then, the world has adapted to the existence of Big and Small people. While some Smalls are free others are owned.

However, the Bigs are not safe, because the shrinking virus still lingers in the blood of all humans. One out of every 15 Bigs will shrink during their lives.

Paul is the son of a powerful woman: a Senator who fights for the rights of Smalls. However, when Paul shrinks, will he be treated fairly by the women in his life or will he learn that all those lofty ideals are just for show?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55686 Read Count: 219093
[Report This] Published: December 23 2019 Updated: June 25 2020
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is such a fucking good story because it’s so unpleasant to read. I just really want Paul to get a leg up but the degradation and pain feels so visceral, it’s great

The writing makes the size of characters feel so much more real than most of the other stories on this site and I’m not sure what it is, but it’s super effective.

Omega: Keeper by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A professor and her tiny former student, now lovers, face domestic consequences when she brings him home to meet her children.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Couples, Gentle, Giant, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14275 Read Count: 37234
[Report This] Published: June 13 2020 Updated: December 10 2020
Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed
Date: June 13 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Look

Ayyyy Omega series!

 

Love your work, Jack.



Author's Response:

Yep, it's still here. Thanks for reviewing