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Shrinkuccino by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

I am asked to sample a new espresso called "Shrinkuccino" at work, which is measured to shrink me down to half my normal height for four hours. How will I manage myself at that height, especially with so many curious girls around, both customers and co-workers?

UPDATE: Due to popular demand, as well as my overactive imagination, a second and third chapter have been written!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26602 Read Count: 31248
[Report This] Published: January 04 2014 Updated: January 26 2014
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinkuccino

Your premise is excellent and you've scratched the surface of what it can do. What happens when people actually start to buy Shrinkuccinos? What if people doubled or tripled the dose? This is something to consider revisiting while you upload Shrinking Show 2.

I thought I wasn't into half height, but you wrote it really well and I quite enjoyed all the interaction, in both Chapter 1 and 2.



Author's Response:

Funny you should mention that because I am beginning to write a spin-off where some of these possibilities occur. The premise is that somebody accidentaly put Shrinkuccino beans into the expresso machine instead of regular beans and mayhem insues. Putting Shrinkuccino in different drinks will cause it to have different effects which will open up almost infinite possibilities. Each chapter wilil be a stand-alone short story about a different person or people who buy the drinks and I'll be taking suggestions for people and/or drink combinations to write about. Glad you like the story!

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Date: January 26 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Next Morning

That's a nice way to end it, and your idea for a sequel sounds interesting. If you can balance that with Shrinking Show 2, then we have a lot to look forward to.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! It won't be an issue balancing a sequel with Season Two, seeing that Season Two has already been written and just needs to be uploaded.

Summary:

Three girls must face the consequences of their actions after they assault a member of a smaller race.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94864 Read Count: 205906
[Report This] Published: January 10 2014 Updated: July 03 2015
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Date: June 22 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Sisters - Part 3

The scene in the fridge was a nice bit of worldbuilding. The rest of the chapter is clearly building to something big. Can't wait for Part 4.

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Date: June 02 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Sisters - Part 1

This was a very well written character moment. The story is an excellent counterpoint to his fate, and the end of the chapter did a good job of describing her thoughts.

Summary: Stacy uses her wish to have bigger breasts than her friends, but what happens when her friend Rachel made an even better wish? Can Stacy keep the title of the biggest chest or will Rachel out grow the competition?
Categories: Giantess, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2872 Read Count: 46823
[Report This] Published: February 06 2014 Updated: February 09 2014
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Date: April 19 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Damn, this was a fun one.

Control by Bianca Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A woman has shrunk various people in the course of her day and plans to have fun with them. But what she sees as fun, they may not. Will they survive the night?

 

This is a departure from my normal style and not my normal gentle fare. it will only be two or three chapters and the chapters will be fairly long. I hope you like it!


Categories: Violent, Crush, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4350 Read Count: 7312
[Report This] Published: February 23 2014 Updated: February 23 2014
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Date: February 24 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Workout

Well this a change from your previous fare. I don't like this quite as much because it veers away from my own preferences, but it's still well written and it shows that you can write a broader range of stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your honesty as well as your kind words. I won't stray too far but there are only three tinies left. I'm pretty sure one will make it.....

Summary:

The story of After Shrink High continues. Hope seems to have been all but lost with the ending of Act 1.

 

But there are still those who fight the Society's corruption. Outside Atlanta, men and women struggle to survive in the new shrunken world all while fighting against the titanic giantesses of the Society. The shrunken world is a harsh place, but such a cruel world may just temper the only hope of stopping the Society.

 

Act 2 assumes you have read Act 1 so make sure to read it first.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing Woman, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277997 Read Count: 144153
[Report This] Published: February 26 2014 Updated: December 29 2014
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Date: November 13 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27: Need a Hero

Wham! I'm not surprised that monsters are former humans - we were beginning to see that with Flonne. But it was a surprise to find out that Pyrrha was someone Samantha knew well. Now it's starting to look like we'll see Pyrrha talk and act like a human, and if Pyrrha recovers her memories, they'll have to come to terms with their old friendship.

As for Jacob, my concern now is that he'll get overconfident and falter in the future, or even get killed. Having said that, he fought like a magnificient badass today.

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Date: March 28 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Can't Escape the Past

Take all the time you need. You can't go deep enough into this world and its characters.

@Carycomic: Analyze all you want. It's interesting to read.



Author's Response:

Don't tempt me. We will never get to Act 3 if I went as deep as I could go. Be deeper than Sanders will be in Lutic- I MEAN.

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Date: March 14 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: In Vain

It's pretty clear that the Resistance (at least this group) isn't a bunch of heroes themselves, though they're still not as bad as the Society. The Phoenixes are coldly pragmatic whereas the Society is properly evil. Also, it's good to see Sanders back. It would be good to see how he got here.

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Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18: Old Friends, New Circumstances

*reads the last bit* AAAAAAHHHHH!!!

Good work on the story. You make good use of multiple close third person, the characters have great depth, and you describe a good action scene.

And good move bringing Gabriella back. She's a great character, and Samantha's girl crush was fun to read about. It seems that Samantha always needs a woman to idolize.



Author's Response:

heheheh.

 

Thanks, I take pride in my action scenes, what I think I do best.

 

Yeah we needed a new resident badass and Samantha needed a new role model. Let's just hope Samantha doesn't put her on too high a pedestal.

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Date: October 02 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24: Fury of the Present, Curse of the Past

Jacob is the new Jason, it seems. Let's see if Jacob meets the same fate, or if he changes in time to survive.

It's also good to get a bit more info on Darius' sister, and well done on the rest of the chapter.



Author's Response:

It seems that way and we can only hope. Perhaps Samantha will save him from that fate...if she is alive to do that anyway.

 

I want to do more on her, but its hard to without just sidelining the entire story. Thanks either way.

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Date: May 20 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11: New Allies, Old Friends, New Threats

Is that the beginning of a new character arc I sense? Perhaps Samantha will grow into the new Lindsey.

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Date: May 11 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10: Heroes are Made

@Carycomic: I like your use of the word 'pyrrhic'.

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Date: May 03 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9: Welcome to the Resistance

It's sad to see Lindsey go, but you made her death very useful to the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. It will come back to haunt more than just Sanders.

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Date: September 17 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23: Sacrifice and Legacies

This is one of the best stories on this site. Your willingness to do bad things to characters makes Samantha's situation that much tenser.

And soon a key piece of backstory will be revealed. Can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks and yes I have no regards offing people if I feel its warrented.

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Date: April 26 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8: Enemy Mine

I feel sorry for Jacob. He takes a chance to prove himself competent, and screws up royally. It seems clear now what his character arc will be about

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Date: February 26 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Welcome back. This is off to a good start. It'll be good to get a closer look at the Resistance, and to learn about some new Society characters.



Author's Response:

Thanks, but we won't be seeing much of the Society in this act. They had their turn in the lime light and now we are going to focus on the Resistance.

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Date: March 21 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Lena's Gift

Good chapter. I like seeing just how Sanders escaped. Now, though, I'm curious about who that woman is, how she got that way, and what becomes of her after this.



Author's Response:

We will learn more about Lena and how she wound up where she is, though its going to be awhile before we get back to her.

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Date: April 05 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5: The Shrink Device

Great chapter. We got to see more of Lutice's character, and got an excellent sex scene. Don't worry too much about getting back to the Resistance. I want to see how Sanders gets out, and what happens before during and after that.

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Date: October 17 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

And the big reveal...is something we were introduced to ages ago. With some new information, about the pipe. I want to see how they react to it, and what else is on there first, then Samantha and William. After that, Aviel and Fionne would be nice too.



Author's Response:

Well its a big reveal to the characters and while I could have keep it a secret, anyone who played the game would know it so I figured everyone should be on the same playing field.