Penname: Amateur Wordsmith [Contact] Real name: Jared
Member Since: February 09 2013
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Summary:

[COMPLETE] All Thomas wanted was a date with a cute girl. What he gets is more than he bargained for as he enters a fight for his life. Can he make it out alive?


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: FutureTech Saga
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181765 Read Count: 295958
[Report This] Published: February 27 2008 Updated: August 18 2010
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lucky Day

Hey Solar Crimson I just wanted to stop by and pay my respects to one of the best stories I have read on this site.

This story is absolutely perfect in every way. You have created a truly epic work here my friend.

10/10. 100%. A++.

Go out and buy you favorite drink and put it on my tab because you sir have earned it.

Summary:

What was suppose to be a time for happiness turns to time a anguish when after selling his old car, he finds himself shrunk inside of it. Normally that would be enough constitute a bad day, however things turn for the worst when the young college student he sold it to swung by to pick up the car and unknown to her, the cars old owner as well.

Now, in a battle of survival against nature, man, woman, and now gigantic everyday objects his only hope for survival is a girl he hardly knows.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13403 Read Count: 92186
[Report This] Published: July 03 2008 Updated: March 28 2011
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

the sense of scope in this story is incredible, and the fact that the pacing of the story remains in my opinion fairly stable serves to help that

Summary:

Nami was on her way to a business meeting back in Japan, however her plane is caught in a freak storm and crash lands in a strange kind of jungle.


Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4838 Read Count: 41163
[Report This] Published: June 02 2009 Updated: September 28 2009
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Survival

My god I can't believe it! after reading one of your storys I stumbled on this one. This was the first story I ever read on this site way back in my lurker days and I have been looking for this one for a while.

Just gonna put this on my favorites so I don't lose it again.



Author's Response:

Awesome ^_^  Cant believe the coincedence in this haha! Really glad your found this both enjoyable and memorable though, it does mean a lot to hear that people enjoy reading my work because of how much i enjoy writing it :)

 

thanks for rating!

Summary:

It's a normal Christmas Eve that you spend every year at your aunts holiday party, that is until your hot cousin decides she wants to see what you feel like under her feet.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Mature (40-49), Body Part, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Toilet, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37845 Read Count: 1142642
[Report This] Published: January 27 2010 Updated: October 03 2011
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the Middle of the End at the Bottom of Bianca's Feet

After you reviewed my story I figured I would check out yours and then I realized that you were the guy who wrote one of my favorite stories on this site. oh man I remember when I was a lurker I would read this story.

Now that I joined I figured i'd give this story a review and a rate



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

We write the year 2059 and our planet lies in ruins. Giant aliens hunt down the last survivors of the human race but is there more about these aliens as we may think?


Categories: Giantess, Gentle, Giant, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38745 Read Count: 41648
[Report This] Published: July 09 2011 Updated: November 29 2017
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: One step at a time

I can see your writing skills have improved Greyfox, and although I cannot tell which parts were re-written I felt that this version is better than the one you originally posted.

However I do have a sugestion. I believe the story would flow much smoother if you Condensed your sentences into structured paragraphs.

 

Welcome back Greyfox also known as Strongkobayashi85



Author's Response:

I will keep it in mind ^^

 

Well I overworked the entire first chapter added several things and kept some as it was just yeah wrote it again ^^

The other parts will follow soon and then I continue it then. I want to write in a few scenes I hadnt thought on before :)

Summary:

An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life.  When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Couples, Giant, Legwear, Odor, Unaware, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 82 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 179462 Read Count: 833349
[Report This] Published: September 01 2011 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Project Uncoupling

I for one don't mind that you take long breaks, however I can see why that would bother people.

As for the story, I felt this chapter was overall very good.

Lisa is developing into a superb passive giantess. However, it's Amy, Sharon, and Kimmy that steal this chapter. They're behavior is situated in that uncanny valley between sadism and possessiveness and I found it quite effective given the situation.

They clearly see him as a person, but also as a object to be dominated and used for leverage. This pattern of interaction towards Peter is precisely what I'd expect from a group of high school girls.

*sigh*

Oh Jacksmith. If only I had your level of writing expertise. *wishes hopefully*

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the review good sir. I really appreciate what you're saying about Amy, Sharon, and Kimmy; I've been putting effort into making them be manipulative giantess characters without forgetting that they're also just teens.

Summary:

The sadistic tales of Carly Arton as she abuses and toys with her shrunken brother Jack.

Set between A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother and A Little Blackmail 3: Life of a Toy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40786 Read Count: 208317
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: May 30 2015
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams

I had been reading your stories as a guest for a while and now that im registered I want to let you know that your stories are the BEST on this site.

your use of descriptive language is perfect, and your ability to create a realistic giantess has never ceased to amaze me.

10/10 this entire series was just epic



Author's Response:

thanks very much, i'm glad you enjoy the stories

Summary: Sometimes you're looking for love in all the wrong places, but it finds you anyway. Life is funny like that.
Categories: Humiliation, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Friends and Family
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 1221018
[Report This] Published: March 25 2012 Updated: June 16 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2013 Title: Friends With Benefits

I am leaving this comment as a notice to both you and to myself. I have decided to finally take the plunge and read the entire story.

Of course this story is so damn arrousing I can only read like 3 chapters at a time

Now where the hell did I put that lotion bottle.

 



Author's Response: I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors. Fair warning, this story will not be the last of its kind.

Toy Teacher by Jacksmith Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A mean-spirited and emotionally abusive school teacher finds herself shrinking due to a classroom gas leak and suddenly at the mercy of her vengeful students.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39021 Read Count: 336868
[Report This] Published: May 20 2012 Updated: February 14 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Former Mrs. Myrna Treacle

Not much of an older woman fan myself, but its scary how realistically portrayed this woman is. I swear jacksmith i really don't know how you do it.

Btw how do you develop dialogue for your stories? does it flow naturaly or do you draw from real experiences? I'd love to find out how.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing, i'm glad you enjoyed it.  dialogue for me is about 80% just winging it and the rest i try to draw from mannerisms and phrasings i hear from people with similar personalities to the characters.

Double Trouble by UHF Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 262]
Summary: This tale is about two unusual sisters, with very different personalities. They get along well enough, but rarely see eye to eye. When people cross their paths, willingly or otherwise, "interesting" things tend to happen.
Categories: Animal, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1 Read Count: 428362
[Report This] Published: June 13 2012 Updated: October 30 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2013 Title: Double Trouble

 I'm loving Samantha so far, it seems as though she truly cares for the main character instead of just pitying him.

I hope there is some extended interaction with Tabitha as well.

 



Author's Response: "I hope there is some extended interaction with Tabitha as well."

Ha, keep reading.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2013 Title: Double Trouble

Just started reading this and I'm already hooked. I love the duel nature of this story seeing as I enjoy both gentle and sadisic giantesses.

 



Author's Response: That theme will continue throughout. Witches are just people at their core. There's an entire spectrum of good and evil. Some people fall on the good side, others on the evil end, and still others all along the middle.

Summary:

2 brothers, 2 sisters, 1 freaky night.

After an arguement, older sister Roxy shrinks her twin brothers Mikey and Sam, keeping Mikey as a slave, and leaving Sam at the unaware mercy of her younger sister, Zoe.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2185 Read Count: 76546
[Report This] Published: June 20 2012 Updated: June 20 2012
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: March 08 2013 Title: Chapter 1: 4 Siblings

I don't know if im to late for the party but i figured I'd leave a comment anyways.

I think Roxy would make a good character in another story theres not many emo/goth giantesses on this site why throw a perfectly good one away



Author's Response:

By another story with an Emo/Gothic giantess, do you mean on the same fasion of saddism and tourture shown by her in this story?
Glad you liked her by the way, she is one of my favourite characters too.

Adela by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36380 Read Count: 238848
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Afterword

This story needs a 50th review, and I will humbly accept the honor of giving it.

You created something quite special here my friend. I remember before I signed up for this site, I would often check in to see if this story was updated.

Adela is by far one of the most effective giantesses I've seen in a while. She's manipulative, brutal, and uncaring at times; however, she also legitimately cares for the main character and wants to spend time with him. This made her much more realistic, and appealing as a character.

Definetely worth every view. Good job scrymgeour.



Author's Response:

Appreciate it. I began this story with one aim: to devote space, at least one chapter, to each and every kink. That didn't last long (stories sometimes take on a life of their own). 

I do like this story, especially after Chapter 13, where it really kicks off. I'll just have to trust the readers on this one.  

The Toy Boy by Julianz Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Shrunken by his friend, Julian is forced to spend a week with each of his 6 friends, that are girls. He is doing fine, until he is kidnapped and tortured by his biggest crush ever, and her 2 evil friends. Until, he escapes and tries to find help.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7207 Read Count: 52517
[Report This] Published: September 26 2012 Updated: October 19 2012
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: September 13 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not bad for a first story. There is a lot of action which I like.

If I could make one suggestion it is that you put something after the dialogue to tell us who is speaking.

For example if you have a line like...

"Oh. Your turn Julissa."

make sure to add something like "said Valerie" or something to tell the reader who is speaking at any given time.

 

Broken Sky by lfcfan Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The destruction of a civilization at the hands of a goddess. A sci-fi fantasy tale.


Categories: Destruction, Giantess, Crush, Insertion, New World Order, Violent, Vore, Sci Fi / Fantasy
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46161 Read Count: 157567
[Report This] Published: December 04 2012 Updated: September 15 2014
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: February 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an excelent story I love your use of descriptive language and the city destruction was... well amazing



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope to continue with some city-destruction scenes in a few chapters.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am saddened to see this story end it really was quite a ride. anyways I really like what you did with this character I hope you make her revolution suceed perhaps have her go one an intergalactic killing spree against those who took over earth.

Look foward to reading more from you.



Author's Response:

The story isn't really ending here, it's just that I'm done with Broken Sky itself, the story about the end of a civilization. I'll explain myself a lot more on the end notes in the next, and last chapter.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is an excellent story! Its well made and has a lot of potential. count me in for any future additions to this series. Also are you planning on making a godzilla style showdown in one of the cities between Aria and Mae?

 

The only criticism I can think of is that there is a lot of big ideas presented here and that can potentially backfire.



Author's Response:

I plan do something like a Godzilla showdown, yes. But I'll think about it for a long time though. There are indeed a lot of big ideas presented, the main reason why I'm pausing with this because I don't want to rush it, but for most of them I've already got a resolution, just have to think how to fit this all in.

Summary:

Would you do anything for your family? Anything?


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18897 Read Count: 83052
[Report This] Published: January 02 2013 Updated: April 01 2013
Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Meet The Griffins

Hey dudemanguy I didn't know any other way to get your attention other than a comment so yeah.

anyways you should get on Egiantess.com chat whenever your on as chances are I'll be there and we can discuss storys and stuff.

 



Author's Response:

Sure! I can do that sometime.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Meet The Griffins

How did this story excape my gaze... no matter I will post a review every couple of chapters I read and since this story has 10 chapters ill read five today and five tommorow



Author's Response:

Looking forward to it!

It probably escaped your gaze because I slacked off for a month or two on it. Oops...

Also, it's my most popular story, earning 25000 views in 9 chapters. I think that's pretty good for me!

But anyway, looking forward to your reviews! My dialogue was shaky on this one though, so don't hesitate for criticism.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Differences in Love?

Your dialogue problems have gone away by around this chapter and I don't see any visible flaws in your writing.

I love how innocent his girlfriend is and how realistic the characters are rendered. Just in case I went back and checked my psychology textbook and sure enough their reactions fit well with typical human reactions so job extremely well done

Btw its funny how gentle your Angela is compared to mine



Author's Response:

Of course you haven't read the next chapter, then your view of Angela will flip upside down.