Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed
Date: February 07 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 The Powder
Man Tom has got to be the Un-luckiest guy ever, pretty much every female, whether fully grown or not wants him as a toy, even Sarah is no better. If I was him I think Id kill myself...Great chapter wildcat and the fact that I can place myself in Tom's shoes and imagine what I'd do in his situation only proves that this is a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really enjoy hearing that, and the fact that you can 'Imagine' what is playing out tells me that I'm doing somthing right! The vividness of the discriptions, are sometimes difficult to discribe, and after rewriting several-times, and deleting whole chapters, Im starting to get the wheels turning in the right direction....
Again, Thanks! and, keep reviewing! Always look forward to your views Gadget!