omg to me that was the best story i have read in along time and i diddnt want it to end. fantastic work, i loved how his mum  turned from this fantastic caring sweet mother into this menacing evil unemotional woman who tortured him in amazing brutal ways. I couldnt help feeling really sorry for timmy though.  i would love to see  you do 2 sequals to this, the 1st sequal would be where she does the same thing to the guy shes getting with. Also he could be a player and is secretly married with a teenage son tht reminds her of timmy so she tortures him too and eventually kiss them both. The 2nd sequal i would like to see is say 10 years in the future where she regrets killing timmy as shes to old to have kids and finds a way to go back in time to save her son from herself, perhaps before the 3 years she tortured him or maybe a week before she killed him. would be nice to maybe see timmy get rescued. lol please dont stop writing the best story, i think it could be a great series ;)

I think tht was an amazing story, a little confusing in parts but an awesome read so far, i have an idea, she has an idea, allison escapes while there alseep and is able to meet a great powerful wizard, witch, sngel ect who grants her a power greater than either of them and is able to get her revenge some how. tht wud be cool

i really liked it but would you be able to change or edit the ending so tht we get to see what its like from his point of view to finally and slowly get eaten by his sister

i think the story is really good but i would really like to see this hero suffer a little, maybe some pain. I would like to see him unknown to her suffer inside her nylons or shoes while she actually is thinking about him as a 1 of past ex bf tht she liked alot. Plus i also think tht when she takes tht guy home she decides not go with him coz deep dwn she likes the hero deep down, and when he leaves she plays with herself and the hero gets trapped between her fingers and her vagina, as he suffers he could get pulled in.  whatever you decide im sure your story would be great but ust passing sum grea ideas tht id like to see this story go into. ;)

as well as that it would be nice to see the dad come into it with the same fate as the son as the mother doesn't remeber either of them and they could both end up in her shoe togother.

great, getting tense now, id love to see after hies picked his torture and completed it instead of the maid curing him she gives a memory potion to his mum to make her forget hies shrunk or that shes even got a son, and then he goes into her shoe/stocking and stays there getting tortured without her knowing. ;)

think you should do a part 2, good story, but would like to read more. Do a part 2 but make it alot longer. Have it from her pov and her victims plus have her barefoot.