A shrinking device in the wrong hands can be a dangerous thing.
I can't believe this story hasn't had any reviews yet. It's brilliant!
'Feet' is definately needed in the categories section, as it's a main part of the humiliation element. This story has the perfect balance of smut and plot. It's well written and a bit creepy. Good characters, too.
Hopefully we'll see some more stories from Edmund.
Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?
Holy Crap! Great descriptions so far (3 chapters), just the right amount of detail, events are unfolding just quickly enough. Keep it up!
Thanks!
Chapter 19 is probably the single best chapter of gts fiction I've ever read, keep up the amazing work! Also, maybe stick to infrequent but long chapters (hate it when it's just an update of 500 words in a story).
WOW, Thanks!
I agree, long chapters are great, as long as the author can keep things interesting.
With the exception of the very first one, I don't think this story has any other chapters under 2,000 words. I don't even mean for them to be so long, it just happens, haha. Sometimes I'm writing a new chapter for this story and it gets so lengthy that I just split it into two separate updates. I almost did that for this latest one, but I thought people have been waiting a while to see an update, I might as well finish it up and release it all as a single post.
I remember you reviewing one of the very early chapters, great to see you're still enjoying the story!
After being cut off by her parents and forced to get by on her own, the childish and irreverent Alice puts out an advert for a roommate to help cover the bills. Although initially annoyed at the prospect of having to share her apartment, and despite clashing with the bookish and aloof Louise who answers her ad, Alice begins to enjoy the company of her new friend.
But there's more to Louise than meets the eye, and Alice soon finds herself both fascinated and terrified by the strange ability this odd student from the nearby university has...
Very well written, you've definitely got talent. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
However, that joke about Louise's cooch was weird.
Stephen used to be your average college student. But one night at a party with his friends on the school drumline he suddenly is transported to a parallel universe where he stands a height of just of nine inches tall, while everyone around him carries on as this is normal. How will Stephen adjust to the new giant world he has been thrown into?
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Good stuff so far, some tension already and well written.
Thank you for the feedback!
A couple explores their new mundane after mutually agreeing to undertake a Diminishing, whereby one's height is reduced to around one foot. Primarily set weeks after his new size sets in, the couple works to maintain the rhythms of a happy, healthy relationship in the wake of an enormous, if welcome, change.
You are a very skilled stylist, it really brings the interactions to life. Please keep it up!
Thank you so much! I'm excited to continue sharing this, so I plan to! Hope you'll keep enjoying it! =)
Tiffany Standish is supposed to be Immune. So why the hell did she shrink? And what's going to happen to her now?
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This is very very good so far, please keep up the great work!