Reviewer: Gtslover4 Signed
Date: October 05 2013
Title: Chapter 29: A New Delivery Method
I liked the idea of this story ending with Nick going back to his tall self and Michelle going back to her short nerdy self but instead of going back to being mean to her Nick would end up dating her anyway much to the surprise of his friends due to learning the error of his ways. Obviously you didn't choose that path. Anyway it's been a nice read. Hoping Michelle sees justice for her behavior but that's just how I feel.
Author's Response:
Errr ... sorry, it's taking me a few read-throughs to parse that first sentence there. It's a doozy, lol, and I'm up too late as it is :P
Yeah, I don't think I'm spoiling much at this point in saying it's too late now to completely reverse everything (height-wise) and return to normalcy given their current emotional states and the irreversible damage that's been done -- which I could understand possibly being partly reversed had the 'regrowth' potion worked, but even still I feel like the domination she put him through was too intense to simply undo in that fashion (in my opinion anyway) (plus, too, I enjoy darker stories anyway).
How's THAT for a long sentence, lol.