What happens when an unhappy teen discovers an app on her phone which allows her to affect the world in devestating ways. This is what happens.
I'm really enjoying this so far, that much so I keep checking back to see when your next writings will be up! Your ideas and perspective are very welcome, being a fan of extreme size difference and what things appear like and how they interact at such massive or indeed tiny sizes.
I really do hope you progress with this story and find time to do so!
It's not so much the time to find writing (I'm on holiday so got plenty of that) but the daunting task of trying to convey the sheer size and effects the sock will have. There are many aspects I have to include and it's hard to try and fit them. I'm pretty much using this to improve that area of writing for me but hoefully another chapter will be up soon =)
Half the world shrinks and the orther half dose not know about it...I am sure you can see where this is going.
I started this story on my old acount, now I have a new acount and I intned to keep it going!
Firstly, I really did enjoy the read. I'd like to see you continue the work!
One caveat I do have is not about the story, it's about the way it's presented. Reading a whole block of text is disorienting and can lead to line skips.
Paragraph more, after a few sentences or the end of a scene carriage return that sucker! It'll help the read. =)
Other than that I really did enjoy, keep it up!
What would you do if you woke up to find that your best friend is a giant and is using your city, your world as her personal plaything? Every single day. Your friend seems to have the power to alter the world around her, but is it real or an illusion?
This is the story of a boy being pulled into the games his best friend plays by changing the size of herself and others. All for her pleasure.
I've read all three of your series and honestly, I thoroughly enjoyed each of them - Your writing style is great - fluid, precise in content and leaving me wanting to read more.
I'm looking forward to the rest of this, and any other series you make.
This is a short story about a guy wanting to make his giantess dreams come true. He pays to have an experience, using a new kind of VR that doesn't exist in our world.
Things don't go according to plan, obviously. Where would be the fun in that?
If you enjoy my writing and you have a spare three bucks, buy me a coffee? If you don't got it, just read and enjoy. That's what these stories are for.
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Liking the scenario and the ideas, I also like the idea that these come in different sizes and "requests"
I think the idea of shifting between people the way you are to move scenes is good, gives you some freedom between where the protagonist can be without a lofty "this is how they got there" backdrop, gives it a more concentrated approach to the story and chapters.
I'm assuming the body he's in is some kind of avatar? Gives you some freedom over where or who gets the next avatar should this one be disposed of...
Overall it was a good read, don't let lack of reviews discourage you - most of all have fun with it :) (Hell I dug out this ancient account just so I could leave this review...)
Thank you for the review. :D
I had intended this to be over after the mom chapter, but it seemed to get a lot of readers. So I'm continuing for now.
I like the idea of this being a website business. You have people paying thousands to be injected into this tiny avatars, then you have people being paid to play with toys. The whole thing is very under-the-table, illegal, but when has that ever stopped anyone from doing anything? This means that I can take detour chapters to write about other people living out their fantasies.
And I really like the idea of it not being what they wanted. I feel like that's how it would be in real life. We have this thing in our brains going, 'Ooh, that's so hot, God I want that to happen' but if it actually did, I think we would be in for a surprise. So, a guy wants to be stepped on, and it's hot until it happens, then it's just pain and agony. But there's still that tiny part of him that liked it anyways. That whole, 'What is wrong with me' flickering thought before caving into urges.
Anyways, again, thanks for the review. :D
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