Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: July 13 2012
Title: Chapter 1: The New Law
Great Story! Suggestion: What about a follow-uop story featuring DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot? You already have the beginnings of the story right here. Sort of like WKRP in Cincinnati with tiny men and giantesses. The transition from male control to insignificant roles in the workplace. Shrunken men could not be fired, but would be easily dominated by their female co-workers. Mix in some office rivalries with the new jobs and watch the changes happen at the radio station. What do you think?
Author's Response: I actually really like that idea. I probably wouldn't include too much of DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot since I've basically outlined their entire story within this story. They would be more side characters. I'll kick this idea around, but unless multiple chapter ideas suddenly invade my mind, I probably won't end up doing it. As much as I love the concept, I have, like, 25 other projects already started. No, that's not a mistype. My folder that has all my new stories has 22 items, and I know at least one or two of them contain outlines for multiple stories. So, unless I feel the need to do it, I probably won't. Besides, if I wrote it, I think I would just focus on two DJs. Like a morning show duo or something. I think this story would be a lot better about multiple people working at the radio station. The duo, Tiny and BigFoot, the producers, and more, but I'm not the writer to bring that sort of story to life. As awesome as those stories are, it's too many characters, too many situations, and too much time on a single project for me. If anyone else wants to give it a go though, I more than welcome it! As long as the person credits me for Tiny and LB, that person can go for it. I wouldn't mind hearing those two on the air again, especially when Lady Bigfoot first joins the team. She asks him on the air how he's transitioning into his new tiny life, he comments how he's looking for a new apartment that's not so far and not so big, and she offers to let him live in one of her shoes. It's plenty of enough space for a shrunken man... except when her foots inside, but that's when it becomes a motor home!