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Summary:

A game show where one person is shrunk and has to complete some tasks while the other is left normal size and has to stop the tiny under their own conditions.

The prize? For the tiny, tons of cash. For the giant? Tons of cash... and a special secret prize.

But it's all just virtual reality, right?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7622 Read Count: 75161
[Report This] Published: July 30 2011 Updated: June 23 2012
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: March 31 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is such a great concept!  Will there be a sequel?  New contestants and new storylines could really make it interesting...

Summary:

As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)


Categories: Butt, Feet, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38469 Read Count: 308413
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: September 15 2012
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: July 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The New Law

Great Story!  Suggestion:  What about a follow-uop story featuring DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot?  You already have the beginnings of the story right here.  Sort of like WKRP in Cincinnati with tiny men and giantesses.  The transition from male control to insignificant roles in the workplace.  Shrunken men could not be fired, but would be easily dominated by their female co-workers.  Mix in some office rivalries with the new jobs and watch the changes happen at the radio station.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

I actually really like that idea. I probably wouldn't include too much of DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot since I've basically outlined their entire story within this story. They would be more side characters. I'll kick this idea around, but unless multiple chapter ideas suddenly invade my mind, I probably won't end up doing it. As much as I love the concept, I have, like, 25 other projects already started. No, that's not a mistype. My folder that has all my new stories has 22 items, and I know at least one or two of them contain outlines for multiple stories. So, unless I feel the need to do it, I probably won't. Besides, if I wrote it, I think I would just focus on two DJs. Like a morning show duo or something. I think this story would be a lot better about multiple people working at the radio station. The duo, Tiny and BigFoot, the producers, and more, but I'm not the writer to bring that sort of story to life. As awesome as those stories are, it's too many characters, too many situations, and too much time on a single project for me. If anyone else wants to give it a go though, I more than welcome it! As long as the person credits me for Tiny and LB, that person can go for it. I wouldn't mind hearing those two on the air again, especially when Lady Bigfoot first joins the team. She asks him on the air how he's transitioning into his new tiny life, he comments how he's looking for a new apartment that's not so far and not so big, and she offers to let him live in one of her shoes. It's plenty of enough space for a shrunken man... except when her foots inside, but that's when it becomes a motor home!

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: April 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The New Law

Its a geat story, but enough with the setup.  Shrink Kevin already and get the story moving.  Also bring the father back into the story.  Once he shrinks, try using more height comparisons.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Don't worry. Kevin will be shrinking VERY soon. Unfortunately, that's the sign that the story is coming to a close. Only about 6 more chapters left, and as of right now, the dad is only in one of the very last ones.

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: March 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The New Law

Great story! Can't waut until he shrinks.  When will the next chapter be ready?

Summary:

A young man inexplicably wakes up one day to an alternate world ruled by massive, powerful women. Everyday life becomes a struggle as he learns to cope with his lowly position in this new matriarchal society. Eventually, he develops a romantic relationship with his gorgeous high school teacher.

 


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40354 Read Count: 596361
[Report This] Published: June 01 2012 Updated: March 05 2015
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: June 03 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start!  Breastfeeding of all males is the right way to go because it enphasizes the control of women over men.  If males can only consume breastmilk, then they are totally dependent on all women and easier to control.  In a society where all males are the size of pets or infants, there would have of be all kinds of male-only "rules".  Things like special foods (breastmilk), transportation (cages or car seats) and classes (obedience training) would naturally exist.  Of course, special punishments would also exist for males who did not behave.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

You'll probably like what I've got planned then :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: June 04 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

In this world, are school classes separate or co-ed?  Some subjects like math and science might be reserved for females-only, but other subjects like home economics (how to care for and feed your male) would have to be co-ed.  A co-ed gym class might be interesting for the height, weight and strength comparisions.  Females would easily dominate the class and could use males like objects and free weights for their own fitness.  Males would lose and be totally humiliated in all physical competitions against women, but each side would learn about their place in the society.



Author's Response:

While technically co-ed, the alternative reality Dean wakes up in has a significantly reduced male population. The audience will find out more as the story developes. 

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: June 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is amazing.  When will the next chapters be posted?



Author's Response:

I'll try to post every few days or so. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: August 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see that you have returned to this great story!  I really enjoy your descriptions and the size comparisons.  I hope that our hero gets to interact with more people in this world to highlight the differences with his old life.  Maybe even meeting other domesticated males.

Summary:

The year is 2,300 and life for the male species has evolved them to the point that they're now the "weaker sex".


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Categories: Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14396 Read Count: 159041
[Report This] Published: July 22 2012 Updated: September 22 2015
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: July 25 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: World History

Great Start!  The frequent size comparisons (feet, breasts, etc.) made by putting Gabe close to Emily's body only emphasizes her complete dominance over him.  Keep it up!  As brother and sister, incest should be avoided, so the continuous torture angle is perfect.  Men may have some rights in this world, but at one inch tall they can still be easily controlled, humiliated and used like objects by women.  I can't wait to see what happens next in Gabe's struggle.



Author's Response:

lol Well, the incest thingi s going to be more incidental, than actual incest meaning the two are only going to love each other as brother and sister, and nothing beyond that. I am glad that you're enjoying the story, and thank you for taking the time to give me some feed back.

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: July 26 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: World History

Hmmmm...Once Emily finishes her workout, both of them will need a shower.  Being his size, Gabe could be used as her bar of soap.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

We'll see, it all depends on if the story leads that way.

Summary:

A misbehaving teenage son once again finds himself shrunken and at the mercy of his overbearing and strict disciplinarian mother, who enlists the help of her entire women’s book club to help break her son of his bad habits.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13362 Read Count: 103596
[Report This] Published: August 10 2012 Updated: August 20 2012
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: August 12 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Jill

This was a fantastic chapter, but it is looks alot like a repeat of Chapter 1.  With several women in this story they should each find a different way to punish him.  Otherwise, it is just repeating the same situation over and over.  Each woman is unique, so they should be able to use different body parts to torment him in new ways during their meeting.

Summary:

The London Olympic Games 2012...with a size-changing twist.


Categories: Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11878 Read Count: 63822
[Report This] Published: August 14 2012 Updated: September 08 2012
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: August 25 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Ceremony

Suggestion: What about a follow-up story featuring tiny male athletes in Olympic sports with giantess female referees?  The same way the Paraolympics are being held in London right after the main Olympics.



Author's Response:

I don't know. I didn't think of that. I guess the regerees aren't really involved in the sports, so I'm not sure how it'd work.

Summary:

Scott Stevens’ life becomes a living hell when his mother Judy gets her shrink ray license, giving her legal permission to use it on him and his siblings anytime she wants. 

A prequel to the Time-out stories.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10294 Read Count: 100965
[Report This] Published: October 24 2012 Updated: November 07 2012
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: October 31 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Great Story! Now that we know that Scott has siblings (Kyle and Maggie) around his own age, Mom should teach Maggie how to administer a "time-out" to her brothers when they misbehave.   A new familfy tradition passed down from every mother to their daughter.  Also, in the future, scotch tape could be used to attach Scott to everyday objects (high heels, brake pedals, exercise equipment, etc) for more serious punishments.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

It's like you read my mind.  I was planning on including Maggie in the fun near the conclusion of the story.

Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday


Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 408531
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: December 29 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Insertion

Welcome back!  Another great chapter as always.  I am still hoping that Mia will fulfill her promise (Chapter 4) to dominate Stan with her erect nipple in her bikini top.  Keep it going!

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: February 12 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Little game

This story is one of the best that I have ever read and I am glad to hear that it will continue.  Personally I feel that all the focus on mouth play has been a little repetitive.  You have hinted at so many other possibilities (in the bikini, frozen, used as an object, etc) and it would be good to explore those directions.  Mia's ability to dominate her brother while hiding him from the rest of the world is the basis of her power.  I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: January 03 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Little game

Great Story...What about "smoothing" Stan into a bar of soap and having him used by his sister in the shower?

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: April 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

It might be  time for Mia to take Stan out of her room and to  let him interact with the rest of the world.  I can't wait for her to trap him in her bikini top.



Author's Response: Thanks for the honest feedback! I agree that the story needs some diversity.. I'll try to quicken the pace a bit!

Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

 

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20734 Read Count: 436877
[Report This] Published: December 10 2012 Updated: January 30 2013
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: December 28 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Turn to Actions When Words Fail

I love the physical and psychological dominance that Alison displays over her brother.  Steve knows that he is being manipulated, but is only able to respond with hopeless rage and trapped resignation.  Excellent narrative, pace and creative details so far.  I am also still looking forward to a chapter where Steve is used like a bar of soap by a giantess in the shower.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Me too, lol. When I thought up Alison's character, I wanted her role to be forcefully cheerful and playful without being any sort of sex fiend and Chaos digs her that way with the contrast it makes to Steve's mom Kady, which we like being the loving, well-intentioned but sexually craving figure. I swear there is a shower time to come, just wait for it! It's will happen, promise ;)

Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: December 16 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Damage Report

Suggestion:  A future training lesson should be a shrunk down Steve in the shower with a giantess and used like / or attached to a bar of soap.  That would certainly test his self control.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

That would certainly test my control, lol. It's definately a good idea and I don't doubt that is an aspect we would want to leave out, so I would safely say look forward to that ;)

Summary:

This will be an interactive story in which you, the reader can help influence what happens to Jake next! Simply leave a review with a general idea of what you'd like to see Jake put through next, don't forget to actually review though!

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Follow Jake, a half inch tall teenager as he adjusts to his new home life at his new shrunken size. In a world where a rare few are shrunk by a virus, and in which the shrinkees are typically abandoned or put out of their misery, Jake thought he was "lucky" to be going home with his family from the hospital, however, his three older siblings, a brother and two sisters, and their mother, might not have his best interests at heart as they each deal with their little brother in a variety of ways.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18753 Read Count: 545784
[Report This] Published: June 25 2013 Updated: August 18 2013
Reviewer: shaka Signed
Date: June 26 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A couple of suggestions: 1. At half an inch tall, handling Jake would be a problem, so his family should use scotch tape.  It would act like fly paper and allow them to stick Jake anywhere (muscles, breasts, walls, furniture) without losing him.  2. Jake could be used as parts of jewelery (earrings, lockets, toe rings, etc) worn by his family.