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A Matter of Taste by DollsizeHarlequin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

!Furry Story!

Two ex-school pals meet up to see if they can spark up their old friendship and decide to do it over lunch at one of the friend's workplaces. Things don't go so well between them however.

The first part of an experimental story idea, kind of like a Choose Your Own Adventure kinda story. The next chapters will be split between TWO stories because you will get to choose who is shrunk, Harley or Aylia!

Now Finished with ALL options available - up to 6 unique stories in one, you get to decide which one you read! :D


Categories: Furry, Teenager (13-19), BBW, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22101 Read Count: 81315
[Report This] Published: November 16 2012 Updated: November 24 2014
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Aylia Shrinks!

Loved them both! I really can't pick, both were awesome, love how you draw out the discomfort in both sceanrios. Can't wait to see the next part!

Time-Out 4: Boot Camp by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 125940
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: Maximus Signed
Date: November 29 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)

Great opening Jack. If I recall, you're not a fan of insertion anyway so as long as you don't go there, I don't see that there should be a problem. I can't get into mom/son stories so I'd actually like to see the sister get a chance at the shrinkees. 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. you are correct; there will be no insertion to be found in this story.  hope you like the upcoming chapters

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Date: December 06 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unnecessary Roughness

Love love love the ol kidnapped scenario, you really do craft excellent stories. Always great characters and believable dialogue. Keep up the good work!

 



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

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Date: December 06 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Infidelity

Another great chapter! I'm liking this character Janie, I wonder if she will return him or if Maggie will figure it out and come retrieve her toy. Curious to see if Gabby gets her hands on him too.

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Date: December 10 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason

Good stuff, would have liked to see the next 2 days played out but I get what you were doing there. As always, you invent great characters, hope to see them all in future installments.

 

As for which story that gets continued, either Toy Teacher or Freshman, I love F/f interaction so I'd love to see more of Toy Teacher and Freshamn has a great story line going, he desperately wants to belong despite the danger it exposes him too. Plus there is a bad girl in that story that I'd love to see more interaction between him and her, the girl from his art class. I'd be happy seeing either of those stories continued.



Author's Response:

thanks. i have some fun F/f planned for toy teacher and i do plan on having further intereaction with that mischievous girl in freshman

Dish Best Served in Double D Cups by jillianpixie Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Girlfriend gets her revenge on a cheating bastard of a boyfriend.


Categories: Feet, Butt, Breast Enlargement, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18906 Read Count: 50510
[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: March 01 2013
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jillian, you're awesome! I've had the pleasure of reading this on the other site but it was still just as hot the second time around! (I'm Frost over there).

You guys rating, selecting 5 stars is only 2 1/2, you have to go up to 10 to give it a full rating. No way you guys meant this to only be 2 1/2 stars! 

The Decrement of Tom by wildcatman Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

A slow shrinking story, about a man who has nothing left to lose.


Categories: Violent, Couples , Entrapment, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Gentle, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106905 Read Count: 337622
[Report This] Published: January 25 2013 Updated: August 31 2013
Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Ch. 22 Jaclyn's Trampoline

Can I play on Jackies trampoline??? Creative, I haven't seen that done before, just another example of how easily they control him, I love that!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the simple pleasure's are always the best!  Just making it realistic, is the difficult part.......

When the giantess has complete control, and her imagination is limitless,  and her childlike curiousity takes over????

I love that, Too!                                                          Thanks Max!

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Date: March 06 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Ch. 23 Strapped

I thought for sure she was doing that to get him to tell her how he shrunk, I bet he would have sang like a bird! Thrilling chapter, Cindy turned it up a notch!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Tom's getting weaker, and weaker,....and the ladies,....well, their getting a little more casual....

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Date: March 08 2013 Title: The Decrement of Tom

Awesome! I almost wish Cindy would snuff him out with her sex but then the story would be over and that would suck. I have the same question as cary about the dream, we know it was Linda dreaming but did you mean for her to be dreaming about Cindy or was that suppsed to be Linda in the dream? 



Author's Response:

Oh, I just went back and reread it.  'MY BAD!  I see that I put'Cindy', instead of Linda at the end there, sorry bout that, I ment Linda,  I kinda rushed through that dream sequence, I was going to make it a bit longer, then changed my mind, and well, because it was so short I didn't review it very well....

SORRY DUDES!   Thanks for pointing that out,  It's friday night, so give me a break, ;)

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Date: March 14 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Ch. 25 The Stand-Off

I thought for sure she was going to use it on either Sarah or Wendy! I don't think Mike is going to have a very long part in this story, wonder how much he will like being dominated now.And whats to become of Tom? Will he ride off into the sunset and get a happy ending with Sarah or will his decrement continue? Or maybe his demise? Such a great story!



Author's Response:

Mike is in for it!  Cynthia will start off slow, but.......(Oop's, thats all you get)

Tom?  He's in for it, Too!  Ha, hahahahaha....Ah, ha,hahahaha,   Wha, Ha, Ha,hahahahahahaah....

Aaaaaaaaah,  Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,  Hmmmm......

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Date: March 16 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Ch. 26 Bath-Time

"I wont hurt you"

She better!

And I like that Jackie is going to get a toy of her own, at least I hope she does. Oh, and I vote nay for feeding Mike to her snake, feed him to her pussy instead!

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Date: March 17 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Ch. 27 Bath-Time Con't.

Told you Mike wasn't going to have a long part in this story! Do you think you could pick up the next chapter from Mikes perspective? Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how things unfold with Sarah too.



Author's Response:

Great Idea Max,  The next Chapter will be a recap of Mike's part, totally from his perspective.  I thought about that before, but had a really 'good' Idea for the return of Sara, and I kinda jumped the gun, there....Thanks for pulling me back, I still have to 'slow' myself down, and relax a bit,,, Ha ;)

Thanks Max!

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Date: March 19 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Ch. 28 Mike's Final moment

Thanks wildcat! Mikes life really came to an "end" Great job! Now we get to see if Jackie gets a toy of her own and what becomes of Tom. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Just a hint, watch out for WENDY!

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Date: April 07 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Ch. 33 Tweaker's Plaything

I want to be Twilas plaything! Wow, great stuff, I see Tommy boy and these new toys are in for some rough times!



Author's Response:

Thanks man,  it's nearing the end though....

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Date: February 04 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Ch. 8 'Wendy'

Dude! Once again you invent another great giantess, can't wait to see what this wnedy girl does with him, great description of her, have a very clear picture of her in my head and just love that she got up and walked away with Tom.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think that I'll keep this one rolling for a bit longer.  Really look forward to your reviews!  Whenever I read one from ya, it just recharges my imagination!  Just a couple lines from ya', and I've got a whole other Chapter ready to upload!   Now, If I can just select the proper (discriptive words) and recheck my spelling, and situate the time-line, and stay with the overall story-line........

 

                                                                                             Thanks Max!   Keep veiwin'!

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Date: August 31 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson

Great to see this back! Loved this chapter, my favorite scenario, a tiny being used sexually with reckless abandon :)

 

Hailey might be in trouble too, Mindy might just have gotten a taste for missbehaving.

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Date: May 05 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Ch. 35 'Kelly'

Loved loved loved the thigh scene, wow! I guess along with Toms body shrinking so did his intelligence, good plan Tom, duh, glad he did it though, gave Kelly a reason to punish him, hehehee. Probably not a good idea by Sara either, that could have serious consequences, cant wait to see it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Yeah, I think you might 'really' like Mistress Kelly, she's gonna put both of her tiny 'pet's' through it......;`)

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Date: March 21 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Ch. 29 Powder Rush

Wow! Wendys world now. Wonder how she got the upper hand? She's going to have a lot of fun now! Don't think I have forgotten the 2 packets Sarah kept though. 

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Date: March 27 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'

Great stuff! But here's my counter ending to dudes:

Toms is Wendys slave forever or until she tires of him.

Jackie ends up in Wendy or Twilas stomach or one of the other book members belly, otherwise she is going to grow back without her mothers love anymore right? 

Likewise, Sarah and Halley have to stay together or will grow back, Halley throws a wrench into things, she's to young so don't want her involved in any of the action or anyting bad to happen to her. Maybe she has a "freind" her age Wendy can give her and Sarah to. It will be innocent fun and games until she becomes of age muwhahaha.

Wendy uses some of the remaining powder to acquire more toys.

Now that's sound advice! We'll see if I guessed any of it right.



Author's Response:

I like your ending "A-LOT", better!  (But, you already knew that I would, didn't ya?) Ha..   ';`)

Yeah, your right about Jackie,......I'll give ya that much.....

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Date: March 24 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Ch. 30 Wendy's World

Yup, Wendys in charge all right! Things are about to get real fun. Wonder if Sarah will end up in Wendys belly or maybe Tweakers? Now I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep em coming, awesome story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Twila's, (aka: Tweaker) a naughty little minx,  and she's got her own bag of tricks in store.....

Although, I think were done feeding the snake. {{{(That just made my skin crawl!)}}}

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