Giantess World

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The Incredible Shrinking Brother by tinyman91 Rated: X

[Reviews - 62]

Summary:

It's the start of a new school year, but things aren't looking up for a certain older brother. I decided to re-do this story after I failed to complete it originally. Hopefully I'll be able to finish this one.

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Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19519 Read Count: 441096

[Report This] Published: July 10 2011 Updated: February 27 2012

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: July 22 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Sarah's Thoughts.

please make him shrink mooore >< i want to see him in her ASS ><

but great story!!! keep it up XD

Author's Response:
Haha I wrote that last bit for you, ;) I figured you'd like that little after thought of her wanting to put him up her ass.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: July 23 2011 Title: Chapter 4: No more school and no more books....

all what i can say right now is, can you please write the next chapter asap ><!!

Author's Response:
Haha. XD I'm gonna wait a little bit to add another chapter since I did a double this week.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: August 17 2011 Title: Chapter 1: It Begins

I like your story keep it up.

I am waiting here 24/7, for any new chapters!!

I wish you all the best

Author's Response:
lol 24/7 eh, tell me how do you go to the bathroom if you're sitting at your computer that long? :P Just kidding, thanks for the review I'm glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: September 28 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Shrinking World (Sarah's thoughts)

awesome work, as expected from you XD

i can't wait for the next chapter, XDD

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: September 28 2011 Title: Chapter 1: It Begins

im just rating the chapter XDD

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: September 28 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Shrinking World (Sarah's thoughts)

im rating your final chapter XDD

Author's Response:
Thank you.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: July 10 2011 Title: Chapter 1: It Begins

I liked the begining, can't wait for the next chapters

good job

Luffy's Big Adventure by Cheezo Rated: R

[Reviews - 17]

Summary:

After Luffy mysteriously shrinks his crew must find a way to reverse the spell and save him.

I do not own the characters or anything in this story. The only part that is me is the plot. The rest belongs to Toei Animation and Funimation.

Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Maternal, Toilet, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16574 Read Count: 195330

[Report This] Published: October 12 2011 Updated: January 30 2012

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: October 15 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The curse affects the rest of the strawhats

good chapter, its good to put some realistic events here and there, lol, its better to slow down a little bit. this chapter could be the introduction of strewhat crew being shrunk

I don't like it voyuer, so I would suggest that Nami and Robin discovers them in the next chapter.

its just my opinion if you have planned on what to write next, i recommend you to stick with it XD then take seggustions XDD i don't want you to get confused

kaya would be a realy awesome gentle and playful gaintess, XD ussop is a lucky bastrd -_-"

right now, all what I can say, is GOOD JOB!! im not exprete in writing but i really love your story, PLEASE KEEP ON GOING !!! XDD

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 15 2011 Title: Chapter 9: A new world for the strawhats

sorry i forgot to rate your story XD

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the rating dude. I'm glad you like the story so much :) I'll try to keep you entertained.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Inside Hancock

awesome chapter I never get bored from reading it XD

LOL im glad we share similar thoughts, and I totally agree with you about shrinking margurite, to be Boa's gaintess pet, there are to many hot girls here, and its hard to think of which girl will have a shrunken girl, ><"

I think Nami can shrink Vivi or Vivi shrink Nami since they were close freinds in Arabasta, lol

are you planning on making chopper gets another girl instead of help? XD

I can't wait for your next chapter XD good luck!!!

Author's Response: Yeah I'm thinking about doing Nami and Vivi later on. Also, I'm not gonna give Chopper GTS cuz tbh I'm not into that sort of thing. He's a kid so it's just not my thing. I hope u understand. Also, I want the story to end (eventually) with them finally sailing off to the new world and the only way to have that happen is to have someone save the day. In this case, that person is Chopper. But don't worry that's a long way down the road.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: October 14 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 12 hours underfoot

I really loled at jango XDDDDD

Author's Response: Lol. Glad you like it. I thought I'd do the Jango bit because that's what always happened in the show. Also I'm seriously thinking of taking up your suggestion and bringing kaya into the story. I'll probably have a shrunken Usopp for that part. Thoughts?

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: October 14 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 12 hours underfoot

AWESOME CHAPTER!! and thump up for the ass part XD

your doing an awesome job, i wish you all the best, cant wait for the next chapters XDDD

Reviewer: Devoool Signed
Date: October 14 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The culprit is revealed!

ok, first, good story, seriously i liked it, im not native english and im not a good writer even in my own language, but i'll tell you my feelings,

to be honest, the story felt boring at the beginning, im not sure way, but it gave me this feeling, however, on the last chapter, the story sucked me in! and i was disappointed to see there was no new more chapters XD

I think its because of the change in events!

anyway, if you haven't planned what to write in the next chapters, I personally love to see " Nami, Boa, Vivi and Kaya doing Butt play, Anal insertion, Vagina insertion and S&M, to shrunken people"

good luck with the story, and keep it up, XD one piece is my FAV show!! so please do'nt give up on writing XDD

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it! I can see what you mean about the first few chapters. To be honest I'm disappointed in them myself. I plan to rewrite them when I finish the story. I have some idea where the story is going at the moment but it's not written in stone. As for the butt insertion and everything you mentioned, I'm not sure if I should do that because I think it would be too out of character for them. However, I might consider them doing it to other shrunken men, not Luffy. I'm also thinking of having the rest of the strawhat boys shrink. Thoughts?

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 16 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Hope for the strawhats?

5 GTSs!!! and & shrunken men and raccoon XD, this story is the best thing happened in mylife, thank you god!! and thank you Cheezo, you are the best!!

have you thought about 1 GTS with all the shrunken pets? or one GTSs with a shrunken GTSs who might have a nother shrunken GTSs/pets? just passing on some [maybe] uniqe ideas XDDD

I am 100% loving your story and 24/7 watching you XDD

GOOD LUCK!!!

Author's Response:
Wow, you read my mind. That's exactly what I was planning on doing in a few chapters time. I'll leave it up to you. Hancock will be the main giantess, who do you want to be the shrunken gts and which strawhat should it happen to? Also it will eventually get to a point where they're all sharing the strawhats so I might do a chapter with one gts having all the boys.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 17 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Fun with Nami and Vivi

I didn't want chopper to join the fun, too. but it was clever idea to take him out and make him end the story XD.

LOL four perspectives!! that must be tough doing it XD I can't imagine all the dirty things they'll do to them in the next chapter *nose bleed + pervert smile*

i think you might be tired, from your last chapter it didn't looked like you put to much thinking in it, so take a rest you don't need to post a chapter every day, you've done a really good job so far ^^

Author's Response: Yeah I wasn't happy with that one too. Like I said, I hav. Writers block so I do need to take a break. I'll try to make a good comeback with the next chapter

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 17 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The beginning of Luffy's adventure

lol enjoy your break ^^ I'll miss you XDDD

btw, what is "writer block"? I hear it a lot from writers :/

anyways, have fun & see you later XD

Author's Response: Writers block is when you can't think of what to write, or even if you can, you can't think of a good way to put it. It's also when you can't think of a beginning middle or end or maybe all three. I hope that explained it well for you.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: October 25 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Marguerite joins the fun and the strawhats attack!

awesome return XD, the part where boa left Marguerite in her pussy was hot!

"Won't be posting chapters daily anymore", lol was it that hard? XD but youve done a great job, keep writing until the end XD

Author's Response:
I wouldn't say it was "hard" just that I don't wanna get writers block anymore lol.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: November 12 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Marguerite joins the fun and the strawhats attack!

are you giving up on the story TT_TT it is the best story i ever read so PLEASE!! don't end it here TT_TT im always checking for any updates

take care and good luck with whatever your doing XD

Author's Response:
Yeah sorry I'm not posting chapters at the moment. I've got exams till the end of January. After I'm done I'll definately get back to writing this story. Hopefully it will be worth the wait.

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: November 23 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Kaya has some fun

as good as always ^^ it so sad to here that i won't see any new chapters soon, but you have to do your best, good luck and i hope all the best for you ^^

I'll be waiting for your return ^^

C ya!!

Reviewer: Devoool Signed

Date: December 17 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The battle begins

CHEEZO youre back XD, im happy to see you again, its sad to hear that the ending is near, (TT_TT), well any story most have an ending right! lol, will you keep on writing? I'm realy happy to be a fan of your stories XD, if you are going to end this soon, can I make a request?, its up to you if you want to do it or not, but i feel like i want to ask you and see what will happen ^^'...

my request is, I love One Piece and I want to see someone get trapped in a girl's anus for life(i.e, ass slave) (I prefer Nami).

I am not sure about how you want the story to go and how it will end, I am just a reader, and all I can do right now is write a siggustion, its all up to you, ^^''

I really enjoy your story and I HOPE that is not your last one.

bye

Author's Response: Lol it's good to be back I probably wont have the ass slave thing as my plan is to end the story with them travellIng to the new world and everything going back to normal. But that's not for certain yet ;)

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