Penname: breastclimber [Contact] Real name: David
Member Since: August 21 2023
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Summary:

Sir Jacen and his fairy companion Alette have been on countless adventures, but somehow the knight doesn't realize his faithful fairy friend has a crush on him! When a bandit raid gone wrong ends with the brave paladin shrunk to a size that lets even his fairy tower over him, Alette realizes this might be the opportunity she's been waiting for... The problem is she's not the only one who's realized this.

A fantasy adventure story about a fairy trying to un-shrink her friend, and the various other women who try to steal him for themselves.

Complete!


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30811 Read Count: 21107
[Report This] Published: January 23 2024 Updated: March 26 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2024 Title: Chapter 2: The Witch

Heh heh!  I really enjoyed the impromptu orgy.   I can tell you're having a blast writing this one. 

Only 2 errors this time.

It grands the heart’s desire / It grants the heart's desire

bra gain / bra again



Author's Response:

Fixed, yeah these are the kinds of goofy stories I really enjoy.

Summary:

Gaetan is a young man who loves the forest and all of its mysteries. On one of his trips deep within the woods to forage for rare mushrooms and herbs, he encounters a trio of dryad sisters, guardians of the forest. After spending some "quality time" with him, the dryads decide that Gaetan would make a perfect husband for them, the new prince of the woods! He'll need a little convincing of course.

A commissioned one-shot about a trio of dryad sisters attempting to seduce a young man.


Categories: Insertion, Adventure, Breasts, Fantasy, Entrapment, Gentle, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8262 Read Count: 3015
[Report This] Published: January 31 2024 Updated: January 31 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute little one shot.. I quite liked it.


Only one correction for this one


forage / forager



Author's Response:

Fixed, thanks!

Summary:

In a world where magical abilities and beings have returned, Zachary is a specialist for the US military, tasked with evaluating mysterious ruins and dungeons for clearance by groups of freelancers called "Adventurers." While he is preparing his report, his old friend Talia shows up, hoping to sneak into the dungeon ahead of time and beat everyone else to potential treasure! Zachary takes it upon himself to try to get her out in one piece, but after she's exposed to a mysterious artifact her body starts changing, going from a petite woman to a towering and curvaceous creature known as a kitsune. How will Talia handle her transformation? And what does she intend to do to Zachary with all of her newfound magical powers?

A commissioned one-shot about a pair of old friends handling a girl's transformation into a mythical creature, and the associated magical powers.


Categories: Slow Size Change, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10558 Read Count: 3495
[Report This] Published: February 11 2024 Updated: February 11 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 13 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this one shot.   It had a fun charm to it, and I liked the characterization of the kitsune.


have so much fine / have so much fun



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always like when old friends meet up in these stories

Summary:

Let’s all forget about that terrible movie Downsizing (2017) ever existed and let’s imagine what could have been.

Sky-high rent, overcrowding, and high-cost-of-living causes the Rodriguez family to make the tough decision to downsize in order to survive in an increasingly unforgiving world. Mateo will soon learn how to navigate life as two-inches tall at school. How will his relationships change with his friends, girlfriend, and bully? How will he and his parents adapt to a radically different life as downsizers? Find out as we travel to the downsize community of Lilliputian Lakes!


Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34286 Read Count: 15825
[Report This] Published: February 25 2024 Updated: May 11 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2024 Title: Chapter 1: School Days

Great start to the story!  Love the characters.   I love how Beth is so assertive, and look forward to see her feet near Matteo at some point in the future!



Author's Response:

Thanks dude!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2024 Title: Chapter 1: School Days

Yay smut!!!   I really liked the way you handled Hazel and Emma being gay, and yet throwing little Mateo a bone (er sock).



Author's Response:

Smut! Thanks for your continued support!

Summary: Jonas William is a human who was teleported into a world where huge Titans exist.



Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Destruction, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9830 Read Count: 13246
[Report This] Published: February 29 2024 Updated: May 07 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed
Date: April 12 2024 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 6 - Land of the Colossus

I think that putting in more physical descriptions of things would be nice.   For example at the end when the soldier of the queen enters at the end, there is no description of her appearance.   No description of what Jonas saw as she stepped on him.  No feelings of how Jonas felt as she intimidated him with her foot, or how he felt after she made her statement.  Putting in more thoughts of the protagonist helps the reader empathize more with the main character, and draws a connection.   That way the stakes of the main character's success become more important to the reader.

I like the plot so far, which is why I'm trying to help!



Author's Response: I understand. I'm being helped by a great writer who also said that my biggest problem is being too direct when describing certain details. Anyway, I will try to improve this aspect in the next chapters. After all, you need to write a floop to be able to write a hit. Anyway, thanks for your feedback :D

Summary:

The Zetan Empire has invaded Earth, and by orders of the Empress all humans are to be shrunk and made into pets and slaves of their Zetan betters. Lucas Reed is swept away from his dull life when the first wave of amazonian Zetan shock troops captures him. Now he finds himself shrunk and shipped halfway across the galaxy, sold as a pet to a spoiled Zetan heiress named Keva Farash. As he looks for opportunities to escape, Lucas starts to wonder if he even wants to, but will Keva ever see him as anything more than a toy to be played with?

A prequel to my story Abduction, set during the Zetan invasion of Earth.


Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20355 Read Count: 7234
[Report This] Published: March 30 2024 Updated: May 10 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Take Me Away

I love seeing this universe return!   The original story was one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

It's one of mine too, this is going to be about 6 chapters long and should be interesting.

Summary:

Cookie is a towering ten foot holstaur who works as a policewoman in a sleepy rural town. Life is fairly peaceful, but when the town's only two human troublemakers finally act out enough to earn themselves some jail time, she's put in charge of their "alternative imprisonment."

A one shot about a holstaur trapping a pair of delinquents in her breasts, like all the way in, inserted through the nipple. Not sure if there's a term for that (breast vore?) Also lots of milk.


Categories: Maternal, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Fantasy, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10772 Read Count: 2419
[Report This] Published: April 02 2024 Updated: April 02 2024
Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Time Behind Bras

This was a really fun one!   Personally I think they would have gone a bit crazy, as a year is a really long time to be sensory deprived like that.   I also was expected her to suck them out of her own nipples, but hey, it was still a lot of fun.



Author's Response:

It still impacted them obviously, going by their new milk obsession lol