Please continue this story I just found this and it pretty good, also are the the other stories connected to this one?

This is my first time making a review and I just want to say I really been enjoying this story for a while, I just read this story for the fifth time so far and I got to say I loving the to development of the characters and Annabelle, but I was wondering seeing as you said the story coming to a end soon after the FF background arc, I kind of wondering will this series be ending around fourty chapters then, or will it get to around fifty or sixth chapters before it end just curious. P.s  your story is around my top three spot close to Deliverances by kardo.

Author's Response:

Thanks Nightwatch, as a chronic lurker, I appreciate your review. I'm not entirely sure how long this story will be by its end. The only limit I forced myself to adhere to was the two chapters per FF backstory rule, because if I didn't, I know this whole arc would be over fifteen chapters long. I mostly write based on plot points that I need to hit. Sometimes I'll realize I need to add a scene for a reveal to make sense later down in like five chapters, so then that may add to the chapter--and overall story--length. 

So with that said, when I say coming to an end, I mean I have about five major plot points I need to hit--as opposed to the dozens that I already have. So after the FF backstories there is something else that happens that most can probably guess (the rule of parallelism and what not). Then I'm going to introduce something that has been simmering in the background--and then there's a mini arc/ B-plot that a lot of people will love/hate. 

And you know what? I'm not going to say anything else, because I already feel like I may have somehow spoiled something. 

But congratulations, Nightwatch, your first ever review and you managed to get so much outta me.

First off want to say great work at the started of the chapter with Naomi holding Annabelle down well her mother insert the tracking chip in her body, it was a very scary scene that drive Force that Annabelle was out of escape options now that she has a chip in her body making it permanent for her to remind the girls pet for the rest of the her life, the scene that got me next was the one that showed us Camilla, at first I thought she was going to be a feared and scared girl, but it was the complete opposite, she was confident and brave with the way she acted, but under all that she still misses her dad and doesn't want her dad to get hurt, also wanted to say I'm glad Annabelle used her charms to stop Naomi from killing Camilla, and I hope she can reunite Camilla with her dad somehow without them dying, ask for Naomi's dad thinking about getting Annabelle pregnant, I hope that's just a threat and not something being foreshadowed, for her future, if it is I hope it gets stopped before it happens, ask for the next scene I really do hate spiders, and I can't imagine how Annabelle can feel after that happened it was a good thing Nell saved her when she did, after that happened I believe the cage would be replaces something else so that never happens again maybe a dollhouse for Annabelle? As for the parents I can't believe they're willing to manipulate their daughters by having animal be used as a third wheel between Naomi and Nell but that's just me. P.s keep up the good work and sorry for not getting this review done sooner, I was busy brainstorming a theory on your series for the past few weeks I plan to post it on the review once it's done, about Annabelle and I strongly believe that Annabelle isn't a type zero but rather a new kind of shrink that hasn't been seen before and I hope you see it when it's posted when it's there for to hear your thoughts on it. Pretty good chapter so far and I hope to see more.

Just checking up on you, again you haven't posted a new chapter in five months, want to see you doing All right anyways Hopefully your account wasn't hacked as well.

Just wanted to comment something I just remembered from your series about the immortal peach that increase a person size and strong couldn't mass reproduce them to return everyone to normal size people or at least Maddie who got her size Robbed from her , I mean all Maddie got to do is a eat a few immortal peaches and she be back to five foot nine inches tall in no time just My thoughts thinking about the immortal peach 🍑.

Loving  this story so far it just like welcome to hell but fantasy and with different kind of monsters kind of wondering what came next though, also I have way mircalla story within the cast could go , one they found a cure for vampirism turning human again which would kind of be lame choice or the second opinion is turning her into a day walker like a  vampire who doesn't need blood to survive sunlight, forget what the mythical for a day walker is but they are vampires who don't need to drink blood to survive and only need blood for enjoyment, these are just two ways that I can think of for mircalla for your story.

Just wanted to say, I am totally into this world building and the characters in this story, ava kind of like a low budget batman without the riches and Ultra woman is just super girl, anyway seeing as ava just got recruited by ultra woman will we see more of this hero League next chapter or ultra woman mentoring ava before ava move to the Big City, also seeing as not all villains and heroes are bad in this universe more like actors who fight and talk mostly, will we see more characters or is it going to be mainly these four.

Just wanted to say for starter that I really love the story of this where a kind hearted and gentle demon with a trickster mind set is shown as well as the seductive and  desirable angel who needs to let her feelings out more is shown, other than that I was wondering if there will ever be new chapters with this series also I have a feeling that Aaron Smith need to deal with the killer clown who shares the same name since the guy is a live and not dealt with and people in this universe keep mistaking good Aaron for evil Aaron Smith, p.s loving the relationship that good Aaron Smith is having with Amy, Gabriella and Cydea I also think that now that Aaron Smith is a live I have a feeling his old boss forgot her name going to found out and ended up joined the other three women, also like how the two humans are desensitized to death as they get kill by what ever Gabriella and Cydea like doing to them. Also love your other two stories rise of a supervillain and the conquest of Earth.

Seems like this new story Arc coming to a close soon , anyway I noticed that eir in the last chapter got a thing for Aaron as well  and I was thinking that Aaron going to have to get a hook up clause contract made at some point seeing as more women want him, anyway I looking forward to the next chapter against the dragons sisters, thank for updating this book, hope to see the other books you been working on getting updates as well seeing as they are finished to

Got to say this was a amazing read from start to finish the only thing that missing Is the explanation of what the hell g37 is and how it became to be as for Jennifer she got to get her feelings in order for someone or something bad happened between Vasquez and Trish I mean Jennifer got the hots for both ladies and probably want to be dominated by both of them in a FF/f, outside of that seeing as this unknown organization wants to make super soldiers, I guessing we might meet more female giantess es and maybe a few gigas aka giant Men in the squeal, nurse Cass got a lot of heat coming for her next squeal.