You know i'm not the kind of person who skips books but when I read forcefully together. I thought it was so good the first one woudn't matter so I could skip it. God was I wrong. This maserpiece is so good I could read it again and again for hours. Which I already did for 30 min not a hour. (Yet)

As said before In 20+ comments I like your story

"I am also on the discord server" (godspeed-sama)

Have fun with the break

This is a very noice chapter. get it? no-ice

Also i read love in the depths i didn't comment but it was very good

to answer your question I have three things
First Lyza, Maya, and Aiden don't die
Second Lynette dies (I dont care when I just don't like her)
Thirdly is a idea/concept (Theory) if people can shrink then people can grow

"Let's have a lil fun here"
If I was in this universe would I be Alpha or Beta?
Follow up question if i was a Beta what size would i be?

Thats it and hopefully you will have "a lil fun"

PEACE/Bye!

Author's Response:

Growing is a concept I've thought about. Might be implemented in the future, after Forcefully together has reached its end. As for your size question, I'd leave the answer up to you. Sizes range, so it's a matter of how small you wish to be. 

Character Development - 10

Chance of lyza falling asleep - 50% (I don't know when the time frame is but most people get of from work before nightime)

Si-Aiden's injuries - 40%

misspelling - 2 (letters) out of 47583738

Lyza gonna be mad - 100.1%

This story is rated i for ice likes it

Hopefully laptop activates GigaChad and doesn't messup again

Also if this is to long of a comment "FITE ME!"


[IMPORTANT] Will part three be on this page still or on a new one? (Very excited for a new name)


Did I mention that I like the 3 parts? "Hm, must've slipped mah mind!"

"Anywhoooo, you know the rules by this point" A response and chapter "are always appreciated." -And happy writing

Author's Response:

Part 3 will be on the same page as 1 and 2, though do plan for it to be the smallest of the 3 parts. I imagine maybe 5-6 more chapters for 2. It's proving to be the lengthiest of the 3 XD. I do plan, however, to go on something of a minor break before beginning part 3. Giving myself time to plot it out, work out what I need and focus on school as well as other stories I work with. 

Drawing a blank is the best. Unless your actually drawing, in which you leave it blank.

I love how aiden is getting the totally wrong vibe from maya. Mentally preparing for death in all. I mean being mental prepared can be convenient.

Also it's great how you described the stomach. Most people over describe it and make it inaccurate but you gave the right amount of detail to make it seem very realistic.

One thing tho how did the suit get on him when he was growing and how did she make it fit properly?

Excited to see the sushi situation though. Very excited indeed.

Also your story is cool and I love it!

red and blue make purple
Mental wars is what I named this bookmark
I havn't read that series yet but I will try it
Theory
You saw my comment on how maya would act being shrunk but turned it into what she would want if she got shrunk
I was right part two did not have six
Also I got a dogo
His name is Bobby
Question: Is six Bi or Straight?
My lucky number is 3
The story vibes be bi-polar negative then postiveish at end.
Does Lynnete die? It's been killing me I want to know what happens.
Also I understand your pain with school it's hard to do anything on the side.
Is 07 your lucky number?
Blue and yellow make green
ƒorever = Word version of infinity
My friends name is aiden
Also did not expect her to be a red head.
Happy writing and heres a free 10 star review as long as you continue writing

Author's Response:

You weren't lying about the comment ragnarok XD 
To answer some questions and reply to some statements
Being shrunken does indeed interest Maya. 
Six is straight. It's Maya and Lyza who are bi. 
Wish my lucky number was 3. It ain't seven I can say that much. 
Can't say anything about Lynette Juuuust yet
Aiden is a more common name then I realized
And Maya is indeed a red head. The time of blue is at an end. Long live the red. 
Ever a pleasure to see you here Ice

Alpha Beta in a Nutshell:
Maya Kills boyfriend. Boyfriend shrinks, is invincible and has new name Six. Maya and girlfriend torture Six for a while. Six fights maya and lives with roxxane. Roxxane fixes six to be taller. Six makes horrible plan to get info from Lynette. Lynette is Psycho. Maya finds six.

Alternate story ending:
After maya spotted Six he screamed. Lynette then looked down and saw him. Thinking he wanted to cheat getting to her room she raises her foot and slams it on him as hard as she can. Despite his partial Invincibility He is crushed. After this Maya snaps and kills Lynette. Maya then kills every beta in the building. Right before killing the last one she looked at the beta. As she smashed him she saw he looked like six and had a mental break down over the fact her one and only was dead. In her Depressed state she kills herself. After which Lyza takes lynettes place of power and kills roxxane.
Alternate ending:
Maya takes back six after shrinking lynette. After having some "fun" she returned six to Roxxane. Roxxane then used the grow formula to grow back six. Lyza then filled Lynettes place of power but is assasinated. Maya trys to get Six's forgiveness but he doesn't forgive her. In her foolishness she shrinks herself and gives herself to him. Six takes care of maya. Over time they started to bond and six unshrunk maya. After not being able to kill people for so long Maya doesn't get pleasure from it and doesn't kill anyone else ever again. Six gave maya a second chance and maya took it. After about a year of dating they got married and had 7 kids. Each one and a half years apart. They were Gentle like there father, confident like there mother and were venomous, like a viper, when mad.

Happy writing and a free 10 star review.

Author's Response:

Those are some well-thought-out alternate endings for the story. As it is, things ain't ending quite just yet though for the group. Each one of them is subject to some rather substantial changes. We're at the halfway point now and things are only liable to pick up from here. 

There is two plans. One a mystery and another, less but still, a mystery. One involves maya and the another may or may not.

Your story is amazingly entertaining. It's right up there with Harry Potter and Star Wars.

Your name is viper07 so should I start giving 7 stars and not 10?

As always, your chapters and responses are greatly appreciated!

Also is that last phrase copyrighted because I have no money for getting sued.

As you can tell or maybe not I have a loooot of free time and i'm very bored.

Free tip: For the salt thingy twist it don't shake it.

Is there a word limit for comments?

I'm not gonna test that so happy writing.

Author's Response:

You're ever kind Ice, but don't think I can come close to comparing myself to those icons XD. Not even halfway. But always glad to see you enjoying the story! Also, if I remember it correctly, there is no word limit. Not sure if that something I should have said or will regret in time...
Ah, it's probably fine lol. 
As always, hope you enjoy what's to come. 

Is she gonna shrink maya or is she gonna try to get her to kill lyza's sister? What ever it is, I am very excited to see what my favorite author comes up with and as a bonus I will give you 10 stars, again.

Happy to see that the plan is in action and hopefully it will work out. Anyways 10 star review for my favorite Author.