Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed
Date: April 08 2022
Title: Chapter 1: The Invasion
Hello. I’ve been trying to get into writing lately and I wanted to know if I could set my story in your life in your universe.
Your ideas are very well fleshed out and the whole world building thing is something you clearly do well.
I was imagining it could have something to do with the people who were captured, frozen and sold.
This way it wouldn’t impact your story in any way while also setting a good set of rules (such as the aelmari taking a role as peacekeepers, Glalans being troublemakers and war-mongers, and weaponry being just futuristic enough for recoil to still be a concern)
anyway, before I write too much or go on a tangent I really do appreciate your story and I wouldn’t be offended at all if you wanted to be the only one in control of your universe, as I can see having multiple writers in it being a concern.
Author's Response: Just go for it, treat the existing story as a basic canon and if you need to make up technology or species to make your story work then go wild. The only thing I ask is don't touch the Archons since they're mind "endgame" plot if that makes sense. Other than that I'm looking forward to what you come up with, I left the series as "open" so I think anyone can add to it, unless I've misunderstood how series work on this site.