Two twins with special gifts play with an unfortunate innocent.
*added just to rate it since he forgot to the first time*
Matt doesn't have much self esteem and his issues indirectly put him at the mercy of his mother and others when a strange purple liquid gets spilled on him and his body changes...
A work in progress. I'm letting the story lead me where it goes.
Solid start, carry on young soul.
A girl with a webcam and a penchant for torture!
I kinda wanna see her punished for this but not until after she cuts off his penis...
Yeah...this kinda had a Saw vibe...We'd do well in a psych ward together.
An impoverished and fragile species, very few people know of the existence of the Calculi. Throughout the years, their kind has survived only by hiding, subsisting on what little sustenance they can find. The life of Nami is a perfect representation of the hardships and suffereing that these creatures must endure which ultimately fosters an unparalleled unity and kinship within their species.
Nice verbage and definitely curious.
Thanks!
Amber a normal high school girl decides to become a goddess at the expense of three cheerleaders at her school.
Wonderful to see it back and looking forward to more.
Amber is quite the overlordess.
Author's Response:
Yes very.
Sometimes the psychological stuff is more fun than the naughty in these tales.
Very good. :)
About 8 years after being rescued, you return back to visit Sarah's family. Everything is fine until an accident brings you face to face with your worst nightmare.
Kind of saw this coming but a heroic journey is nothing without peril.
Good stuff my good man.
At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.
Our little crazy chick is gaining a heart?
Very interesting read.
Yep. Though it's raisin-sized, for the moment.
Thanks again for your review.
--D
Adela has now blossomed from misunderstood psycho to warm hearted goddess...
Martin is a lucky man...a potentially dangerously close to the fire...but lucky man.
Agreed, in part. It's taken me fifteen chapters to show why this story is titled "Adela" and not "Holly." But I'm there.
Thanks for the review, AdamX.
--D
The plot thickens with the once terrifying Adela slowly morphing into a lovely young lady of virtue...well at-least a bit nicer.
I like that: "lovely young lady of virtue." It's totally false, of course, but I almost wish it were true!
Thanks again for reading.
--scrymgeour
I feel for Meri but the it's for the greater good.
Thanks. Sorry 'bout the delay in updating. I've been busy for the past month with other things. Should be a straight road here on out.