Penname: BreeAntm [Contact] Real name: Breanna Munson
Member Since: December 20 2020
Membership status: Member
Bio:

21, new to writing, hoping I can be good enuff that people will enjoy what I create :)


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Summary:

Marcus Tilden, a single father since his daughter's birth, gets laid off from his job one day after shrinking to less than a foot tall. Depressed about his sudden height loss and doubly miserable after becoming unemployed, he feels hopeless about finding a new career and being able to continue providing for him and his daughter. But after the two of them start spending more time together, he starts to develop a kind of job in itself just by serving his daughter and doing his best to keep her happy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Object, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Breasts, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: How to Train Someone in 23 Days or Less
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 179510 Read Count: 544313
[Report This] Published: August 02 2020 Updated: April 13 2023
Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 09 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

"its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too"

We are dying to read it already!  The anticipation between chapters kills us! :)

 



Author's Response:

glad you're excited! you might be the story's biggest fan lol

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

So happy that you are continuing to update this regualrly!  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Hoping he may shrink more, or be subjected to her feet, since he seems to NOT want that :)



Author's Response:

im happy that im updating it regularly too :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Day 17: Tricks

Be fun to see Veronica overpower him..... not necessarily sexual...just to show she has poer over him.  Maybe holding him down until he concedes or kisses her feet or some other humiliation.



Author's Response:

yeah, ive got something like that planned in an upcoming chapter :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: January 31 2021 Title: How to Train Your Dad

Like where this may be headed.....he needs to appreciate her feet more lol.....and maybe his shrinking isn't finished yet either??



Author's Response:

dw big foot stuff is coming next chapter. thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: February 06 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Love how she handled him in the newest chapter....forcinh him to smell her foot sweat will certainly start to make him realize she is in control :)



Author's Response:

glad you liked it, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: February 23 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Day 19: Pinned

Love this..... I have been hoping for her to finally put him in his place.  No better way to subjucate a person than keeping them under foot :)  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you enjoyed :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: March 03 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Love the lastest chapter...... I love how she is starting to seemingly take care of him more and steer him to do things to satisfy her needs.  I also love that he is still obsessed with remembering his time at her feet, she certainly knew how to use them to subjucate him, and I think he may be starting to like it.  Thanks again for sharing!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, glad you liked!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: March 13 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Another awesome chapter!  Love how she is subjucating him to her feet, and then using them to slowly take him over.  Seems he is aquiring a taste for her feet as well while he falls more and more under their spell, and hers.  Her emerging dominance is subtle, but progressing nicely.  Well done!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: April 02 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Love this chapter, she is getting a little more demanding, insisting that he tell her all he heard the boys say about her.

He is clearly becoming more attached to her feet, the instrument she may use to further subjucate him perhaps??  She seems to sense this.

Well done :)



Author's Response:

thank you! and thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: April 09 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

I seriously didn't think it was the ending, I mean why would you end it on a dream?  lol.... its just his fears of how he may end up.

Will he serve he more and more, increasingly?  Will he shrink even more?  Become more dependant on her?  Will he need to be at her mercy?  Living to please her and her feet as he becomes smaller possibly, or more under her spell?

We will find out!

Always looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: April 24 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Amazing!  Best chapter yet......having him submitt (almost totally) to their feet,and be treated and labeled as a pet.....great stuff.....Can't wait to see that progression!

Oh and as far as I am concerned, you can't overdo the foot stuff....

 

Well done, as always!



Author's Response:

i know there are loyal foot fans but i also wanna make sure i do stuff for other people too :P but yeah dont worry i know the foot fandom here is big so i usually have lots of that to go around for u guys haha. thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: April 25 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Also.... meant to add....LOVE how she held his mouth shut and told him to listen!

 

and yes I do understand you are catering to differnt tastes..... not a problem, we love the foot stuff..... but no wrroes, you are doing great.....



Author's Response:

i loved that bit too! subtle lil display of power

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: May 17 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

Seems like she is manipulating him more and more towards total submission to her, her feet, and that of her friends.  Still loving it...can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 05 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

PLEASE update this soon!  Suspense is killing us! :)



Author's Response:

i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 06 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

i've been writing the latest chapter over the weekend! it will probably be finished monday. and i know you especially will like the one that'll be posted here haha

 

OMG we can't wait!



Author's Response:

soon!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 09 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

As you promised!  Another amazing chapter..... Hate even thinking the story is almost over!  Love to see how it plays out now that she has photos of him kissing, licking and sucking their toes! 



Author's Response:

well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 09 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

"well its gonna be a happy ending i can say that lol. cuz i always like a happy ending. this was kinda like the climax and next chapter has some stuff but is mostly typing up loose ends. but yeah then i'll start version 2 which will have a ton of stuff!"

 

Is version 2 an alternate story line, or a continuation?  We are totally sucked into this story, and several others from you.  Thank you for sharing



Author's Response:

its an alternate story pretty much. lots of the same plot points like the halloween party, accidentally getting drunk, inviting friends over, etc etc. just the difference is that marcus will be smaller, somewhere between 8 and 10 inches i think. but also new plot points because of that too

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 19 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Day 23: Infatuation

Another awesome chapter...... We are hoping for a sequel :)



Author's Response:

yep, its coming :)

Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: April 17 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1: Jessie and Marcus

I LOVE how she got him to serve her feet in front of her friends, the fact that he had to smell them and rub them.  He may start to associate doing this with pleasing her, and find it satisfies him to be literally at her feet when she demends it.

All in all, he is sllowly falling into submission.... love it :)

 



Author's Response:

glad you liked it :)

Summary:

A college professor shrinks down one afternoon and gets discovered by one of his students, and he quickly learns just how many people around campus want a piece of him.

Done as a commission so it's a lot faster paced than my usual stuff, and also why it's exclusively foot-focused.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11673 Read Count: 52776
[Report This] Published: April 20 2021 Updated: July 11 2021
Reviewer: BreeAntm Signed
Date: June 11 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

another great story!



Author's Response:

thanks!