Sarah has me hooked!! She's such a dominant amazon in charge!

Jen and Carl seem to be the next next ones who will fall under Sarah's thumb (or feet XD)

This story is sooo good, I love the content and dominance of Sarah and how she's broken down Jeff, and now his parents seem to be her next targets. 

I love this story, and it's one of many great ones from looking at your profile, please keep up the great work. 

Dissapointing. 

In one word, dissapointing. 

I saw you respond to another review saying this has been a learning experience for you, but I have to doubt that. People have been reviewing for months now, expressing their distate and giving you thought out and lenghty responses as to how they felt about how you were choosing to remain in a cycle of abusive behaviour and pandering to Cassie's character instead of holding her accountable for her actions.

Months of people expressing their desires for Nick to have a positive end. But yet here we are. 

Your argument over choosing not to go with a happy ending is not valid, there are many MANY stories on here with bad endings. But not all of them have people grow so attached and loving to a character like Nick, and to dangle a happy ending like some carrot in our faces (with Jenny) only to fall back into Unaware Content with another weak excuse over Nick's loss of control again. 

Your explanations as to why you chose to go this way aren't very compelling. This story struck people and got them attached to your characters, despite the many many glaring issues with Cassie, despite months and months of people hating her and wishing for Nick to get his happyness, you didn't listen.

And this may come back to bite you in future, I know I'll be reading whatever stories you post now with a detached or distant attitude, as I would be fearing to fall back into this trap.

To give my time, energy and attention to something that fails so hard in the ending, to give my reviews and thought out feedback to something that winds up giving an abhorrent character like Cassie the last laugh, just was such a punch in the face for those of us who stuck around.

And no, saying that Jenny moved on and married someone, but still held a spot in her heart for Nick.

And that Cassie lived with her guilt for the rest of her life....no, that was a let down.

You turned what could have been an ending your readers rejoiced and found clossure and satisfaction in, into a sour and dissapointing finale that left annoyed and frustrated people. 

Hi :D

Firstly, I want to thank you for the length of this chapter. A nice long chapter to sink my teeth into was gladly appreciated. 

I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, but was busy with my own writing. 

Now, I am overjoyed that Nick is gaining control of his power. My precious baby is finally getting some semblance of control back in his life, and I am happy for him.

*sighs*

Now, onto the pit of anger and rage that is Cassie's character.

I still find her character to elicit such feelings of anger from me, and her lines and dialog in this chapter did little to sooth me.

The fact she still feels Nick has to be forgiven being a glaring example of this. 

And Nick's almost fanatic reaction to her even agreeing to talk to him.....Nick sweety, you don't need her, nor should you have a desire to return to her.


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While we're here. The the reviewer ConceptorJoe, you have outlined everything that I hate about Cassie in a well detailed insightful character study there.

And I agree with every word he said.

Cassie is not some stressed downtrodden wife pushed to her limit.....she's an abuser.

She mentally, emotionally, and physicaly abused her husband who was powerless to stop her.

And then gaslighted him into thinking it was his fault. This chapter shows how deep her manipulation goes as Nick is so focused on pleasing CASSIE, so desiring to return to CASSIE, learning to control his powers FOR CASSIE.

His whole worldview is eclipsed by his 'wife' (and I use the term on paper only)

Who has hurt him, and abused him, especially like in chapters 12, 13 and 15 like ConceptorJoe said, as well as in other chapters.

Taking away the book because she wanted to 'punish him' was something that made my blood boil....well any of Cassie's action have done that, it's hard to pick a specific one.

She seriously considered killing, or hurting her partner....

And as ConceptorJoe said, it's the same with me. I am still loving this story and your writing, don't get me wrong.

But at the same time I am frustrated and sick of Cassie's attitude, and seemingly no one pulling her up, no one saying she's an abusive character who doesn't deserve her husband.

She should be in prison.

It's so frustrating for me reading (and re-reading this story) with her having no comeuppance, and Nick continuously fawning over her and willing to put his own life and wellbeing in jeapordy just to be back with a woman, who has treated him with abuse and disdain.

I love this story, but at the same time when I saw this chapter had been posted I was a bit hesitant to read it, as I was 90 percent sure Cassie's  behaviour would put me in a bad mood.....and it has. 

Nick's control over his powers did make me smile, and I was happy for him, but thay happyness was dashed when Cassie's content appeared.

Cassie cannot come out on top, or with a happy ending, she does not deserve one nor desevre to be in a relationship after what she's done.

If I was aware of what she was done (and could prove it) she would be going to prison for her actions. 

*Takes calming breath*

Anyway, I hope you have a good day.

(Oh and just pointing this out, you writing font is very tiny, and hard to read at times. I have tried increasing the font size with the site option of 'text size' but it doesn't work?)

Ok uh...wow, first of all I want to say this story got me hooked and I have thoroughly enjoyed binge reading it. 

Your writing and representation of Cassie's body, the scale of Nick's size, their interaction physically and while he's stuck is all written perfectly. 

You really feel the sense of his fear and futility. 

Now, onto the characters. I love Nick, he definitely has grown on me today during my reading of this story. And I think I can speak for many when I say I would love to have his power (albeit....without the loss of control and inability to turn back, etc)

And Cassie....I started off liking her (I avoided reading the reviews as I wanted to come into this freshly)

But....bravo, bravo for making me slowly grow to detest a character over the course of 14 chapters. 

I cannot bring myself to like her anymore, any ounce of redemption I may have felt welling up died in the last few chapters. She is detestible to me now. 

Her treatment of her HUSBAND! The man she claims to love, has pissed me off. 

And at least she is somewhat self aware of this as seen in her scenes in this chapter. 

But I can't even care about that. She's been a mega-bitch (even when Nick is normal size) and her treatment and lack of concern or believing him when he tried to tell her, desperately that he was losing control, only for her to ignore and not believe him.

I am infuriated with her. 

And having now read some of the reviews, am glad I'm not the only one. I'm glad there are others who share my anger with her.

I also see that this was kinda intentional? That you wrote her this way (again, fantastic writing from you! I'm not saying anything against your writing) and it's a testament that you're able to evoke these feelings wihin me.

But fuck Cassie.

Fuck her to the moon and back, (or not back, leave the bitch there)

Nick deserves better, he deserves someone in his life who won't put 'conditions' on their supposed 'unconditional' love, someone who won't ignore him or treat his genuine LIFE THREATENING fears with contempt and disbelief, someone who won't punish her grown man of a husband like a fucking child, or an insect. 

I saw some reviews hoping that Nick gets hurt, to show Cassie's actions in more serious conditions (and while I hate the idea of Nick being hurt)

Cassie needs reprecussions, she needs consequences for her actions. (In my head, she's the villain of this story, or close to becoming it)

She can't go unpunished, nor should she. 

I'd like to see her put into Nick's perspective, shrink her down and show her the fear and terror Nick has felt, the absolute inability to save yourself or change your situation while shrunk down to micro size and forced into situations he cannot save himself from.

Nick needs a divorce, Cassie needs to stop being a fucking bitch and start LISTENING to her husband (but still, no matter what she does from here on out. I won't forgive her treatment, she has fucked up royally)

Nick should have blown up at her and screamed his head off after going back to normal size, as Cassie obviously (and from your own words) doesn't put his considerations or feelings into serious contemplation while he's tiny. He should have blown up at her, forced her to see the truth of his predicament. 

(takes a deep breath)

Phew, sorry for the long winded rant. 

I genuinly love this story, and will be checking out your others definitely :D (as I saw your profile has other content)

But yeah, just needed you to know how much I love Nick.

And that fucking bitch-zilla Cassie can go and get fucked (but not by Nick, she doesn't deserve him anymore, and she should die alone) 

I feel so sorry for retail workers, or food industry workers who have to put up with people like Elizabeth.

Though it's good she got a fitting end, at Kristy's rear end XD

Nice work on this, a great Christmas treat for everyone. 

I wouldn't mind hiring Ines to come and do some 'moving' for me, among other things. 

I really liked how you wrote her character, as well as the scene with her banging Gabriela. 

Carlos might have to take a backseat in his own relationship, if it lasts long that is. I can't see him putting up much of a fight against Ines. 

A lovely oneshot, I really enjoyed reading. 

Going to be honest, I did prefer the original chad scene with the dildo.


I also am not sure if I'll like this "sharp turn" of events. Like the fact Alex is suddenly cool with Ronald after he gives her her job back. Like no, I just don't see her suddenly being ok with giving him back.

After everything he did, and the fact he's still an asshole to her/calling her derogatory and transphobic terms.

And no all of Stephanie's friends are turning against her, and it seems Sophie is going to he revenge/be turned back to normal.

It just seems like everything is being turned on it's head and going against a lot of the themes you established here.

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Foot content wise this chapter was great, loved Xue and Alex. 

But yeah, everything seems to be going in a complete 180 direction all of a sudden. 

Nice !! I loved Maria and Veronica in this chapter, so sweet.

Also from the last chapter, I echo Tiny_Significance when I say I hope Sophie's plans go nowhere, like really anti-clmactic and she's put back under Xue's feet.

And Xue deserves tinies XD

I also think Sophie may be hallucinatng the voice she heard XD She's can't except the reality she's in, so her mind is dissociating. But yeah, hope her plan with the needles is some hallucination (or doesn't work at all)

Chad uurgggh, I hope nothing comes of his leaving. Like he just decides it's safer not to poke the bear that is Stephanie and her friends and just stay away. 

Chad's a dick (and literally was a dildo) 


I'm kinda hoping none of the tinies grow back, except maybe Veronica (who would still be with Maria, maybe shrinking sometimes for fun)

Anyway, another great chapter (and sorry for not reviewing the last one)

Can't wait for more. 

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Oh and I kept thinking a really weird/satisfying AU idea when re-reading about Xue's husband dying due to Sophie's dad. 

I thought what if Sophie's dad was also Stephanie's dad (like Stephanie's 'dad' Xue's husband was infertile, and Xue was working for Ronald at the time and Stephanie was the result of an affair, and when Ronald found out he fired her and later Xue's husband's death was intentional as a warning for her to keep her mouth shut)

So Sophie would be Stephanie's half sister.

Again, just a weird AU idea (I wouldn't mind writing it myself if you were cool with it XD)

Sorry for the rambling tangent here. 

yess!!

I loved Alex's re-appearance, (and again, solidarity with my big sole sister, size 13s!!) 

Putting that asshole Ronald in the place he belongs, below her feet.

Brian again needs to chill, I mean come on dude just have fun.

Veronia I am liking again, she's starting to see the error of her ways, and developing an attraction to Maria. I hope this starts to go beyond physical attraction and the two can develop romantically. 

I am also very excited for the next chapter, it'll be fun! (and I can't wait to see what Stephanie, Xue and the others do to their individual tinies)

I hope Chad gets put through the ringer though XD I still don't like him. 

And hooray for Amy, not only getting some sexy foot play in, but for showing her firmness. 

Yay!!!

Loved this chapter, it wasa great continuation. 

Take that Chad! Your manipulation won't work. Nice to see Amy showing some fierceness, you go girl!

Oooof Sophie really presses my buttons (all the wrong ones! Angry buttons!)

I wish I could go to the salon and give her some prime time under my peds (I don't know whether aware, or unaware would be more of a punishment. Though my big feet might be a biiiit too much for her to handle).

I can't wait to see Veronica.

And OuO Did you write Alex's character based on my previous review!? <3

Trans-Female characters have so little representation her on GTSworld. I've been meaning to write some in my own stories, as they need some size-loving too.

I can't wait to see what happens with Alex. <3