Great so far, when can we expect to see a new chapter?

Ypu can't fathom how excited I was to see this story updated again after a year or so. Sad to see it end, but I am happy that you returned to it, and I look forward to anything you may write in the future!

Looks promising, I look forward to reading more!

Sorry for not leaving a review sooner, I think it's finally time that I let you know I've been greatly enjoying this story. 

I have to admit, I haven't read any of the other stories in the series, but I am familiar with your work. I've read A Fine Day for Chelsea and Those Damn Yankees and I enjoyed both of those stories immensely. 

That being said, reading those stories always left me wishing there could have been more focus on feet, and this is exactly what this new story is delivering and I absolutely love it! Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing where this goes as new chapters become available!

I don't want this to seem like a negative review, because if you, the author, are satisifed with how your story has been wrapped up, then that's all that really matters. But I have to be honest and say that I as the reader believe this story had so much more potential that it does not have a chance to live up to by ending this way. So many great possibilities ended by a blossoming tale cut short. I thought there were likely a few more unaware chapters coming, with the main character possibly getting to become familar with Carly's fetish as he watched from below, still too tiny for her to notice despite his best efforts to become discovered, learning that they share so much in common when it comes to their interest in feet. And eventually he could have been discovered by her, and you would have had an incredibly unique opportunity to tell a story where these two characters are able to share and enjoy their fetish together. I'm very tired as I'm writing this, hopefully it's all making sense.

Also, some of this ending feels rather rushed. For example, the item inside the package that Jason's girlfriend tells him not to open, which he does, leading to his shrinking... this was never really explained, but I'm assuming his girlfriend had ordered it for them to enjoy together, so that he may shrink under her supervision? And if this is the case, wouldn't she have noticed it had been opened, and know to look for her now tiny boyfriend?

Again, please don't take this as a negative review. I've enjoyed the story as it has progressed, there are just many unanswered questions that we're left with her, and I definitely feel great disappointment seeing it end without coming close to reaching its full potential. 

You're a good writer, your stories are always improving, and I'll be looking forward to reading your next work! 

By the way, if you're ever looking for someone to bounce story ideas off of, chat about story details with, feel free to send me an email, I'd be happy to talk :)

I don't want this to seem like a negative review, because it's not meant to be, but I didn't really enjoy this latest chapter, Chapter 6. It wasn't the content or subject matter, it was more of the speed at which it was presented. It felt like it didn't really fit with the way the rest of the story has been written up to this point, and a bit rushed. 

I'm almost always opposed to this, but in this case I'm actually hoping the next chapter begins with Jacob waking up and realizing the events of the last chapter were a dream, haha

But whatever happens, it's your story, and you've got to write it however you feel is right. I'll still be along for the ride, whevever it goes, and even if I don't like how things end, I'll still be appreciative for the chapters that I did greatly enjoy!