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Reviewer: BenX21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2022 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 31 The Event Part IV

this is mega cool, just stumbled upon this story, it looks like watching a TV series

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 31 The Event Part IV

Just finished the event chapters.

whoa, now that's a new change of pace. We actually have some drama going on. The previous chapters were all I guess character development and we got to see some relationships form over the course of the story. Now they are put to the best with the course of this event.

Interesting event to include some disaster that I have not imagined. I mean, I thought this was some small event, but I didn't even know all the heroes would be there. Kinda interesting to see heroes have some extra VIP treatment even at hospitals. Will getting that special treatment and he deserves it after taking a bullet like that. 

If these heroes lose their power, will they also lose their status too? Now that would be sad. Heroes wanting that VIP treatment but will be forced to live just like everyone else. Nothing will match the power of privilege being taken away. Now that's touch. First you got Will who started from nothing and rose to the top and on the flip side, we got heroes that were on top and are sort of at the bottom, with everyone else.

Wow, I'm not sure how the story will progress from here but I can bet Cindy will love Will even more after this. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

@LittleRomance,

Thats awesome! However, my story was made a whopping 6 years ago, and it's not exactly a story with a gentle, playful giantess. Are you talking about the story called "Tom's story" instead? It's marked in your "favorites" list. That story has some playful giantesses in there, but I didn't make it. I'm only asking because my own story features a giantess kinda similar to Ms. Eve in TinyJosh's other story. 

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

4 years ago not 2. Sorry

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Nice! You had me worried for will and Cindy tho! 

I'm glad they are both ok and very proud of will to risk his life for her like that. I wonder if will might get a power from getting shot or something?  Dunno lol. But they are a great couple who really care for each other.  And lucy really cares about gemma even tho I still dont really like them very much. I fear gemma's mind is getting a little stressed with this tho. I understand her wanting to help people and get rid of men and women who sexually harass victims.  But she also loses a lot of points by kidnapping innocent people and torturing them.  Not cool for a hero to do.it would be ok if they had some people who actually wanted to be shrunk down and used but they are abusing there power on innocents. And that is what I really dont like.

Great chapters as always.  Keep it up! Hoping for a very Cute Ending for Will and Cindy. 

 

P.s. Tomspeedy if you read my review I want you to know,your story is the one that got me into this site. I was curious and looked what stories you made and yeah yours is the very first story I've ever read on here 2 years ago.  You were the one who got me into the sexy,gentle and playful giantessess. Thank you man! And God Bless!

Reviewer: Aquanid Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2020 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Maybe I havent been checking on the story fast enough, but you seem to be pumping out chapters left right and centre. 
"Hey, need suit for friday, whats best place - Will" said a text, which he sent to Agent. 10 minutes later, she replied. "Super Style, (Street name here), show your card before you order. You will see"
Obviously it can be difficult to catch stuff like that, but yeah otherwise the story is great

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Experience

 Just read all 27 chapters. 


Wow, what a story. I think my favorite duo is the Gemma/Lucy combo. Lucy is easily my favorite character. Her confidence is oozing sexy and I love how she has many tiny toys to play with. 

Love how her panty pet was Tom. I actually laughed so hard when Gemma saw Tom for the first time, I was practically choking with glee. 

The people with super powers kinda feel like infamous celebrities. Like it seems that most people know about them, but don’t gloss over them like usual celebrities. 

Interring to see how Lucy treats her fans like slaves. Also interesting that people she likes, becomes her lovers such as Gemma. It’s kinda cool to see Gemma blossom into a more dominant character. She was so shy and naive in the beginning, but lately, she has been in control for a while, much to the dismay of the tinies around her. 

I really like the beginning of William’s story. The whole “dude has nothing, but ends up with a rich girl” is one of my favorite themes, and it’s cool to see your twist to it. 

I really liked how desperate he was and how he even has to sacrifice his camera just to pay rent. I was kinda hoping for a humbling moment from the girls so they could appreciate their wealth as they hear William’s struggles. However, they kinda shrug it off and welcome him to richness which I guess means they don’t want to even think about being poor. 

For the contract thing, I’m not even sure if it’s needed. I feel like the fear of exposing a person with powers would just have the powered person hunt and destroy them later on. I think the contract is more of a scare tactic since there seems to be no punishment from someone breaking that contract. It’s the trust of the super powered person that you gotta be aware of. 

Cindy is a really fun girl. She is kinda like the teasing girlfriend that is like your female friend at first that messes with you, but you’re not sure she’s flirting but eventually you get together and it works out since you don’t have to guess if they are flirting or not. Also, she likes video games, so that’s a bonus. 

Jessica in the beginning was really interesting. She kinda gives William an orientation of living rich and was the one that introduced him to her powers as well as her sister. She even changed that one guy into socks which was cool, but we never got to see more of that.  

Is Tom one of Lucy’s cousins? I’m not sure if I read that right. Also, is he still in that cage as Gemma’s earring? Would love to see him back against Lucy’s pussy again, but that’s ok. Haha. 

I gotta agree with Gemma on that bank scene. 50+ innocent people taken is way too much. It was hot to see them used as toys, but still, Gemma even made the point that it was simply bad timing for those other people. 

(Also, do people have cell phones in this universe? Because I feel like at least 1 person in that group of 50+ people could have made a vid and uploaded it before Lucy walked to touch all 50 of them. Lol).

Anyway, I think those are the main points that I’ve wanted to mention throughout this story. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! Especially all 27 in such a small time, it means alot to me!

Glad you enjoyed your little cameo and you should expect him to appear again soon, he is a core part of Lucy's 'costume'.

And it depends on how popular they are, some heroes are better or more well known then others.

Lucy is a pure bloodied dominatrix, she loves being in control and dominating people. However she is the worst kind of dominatrix and uses people against there will, they are 'effectively' her slaves. She takes a liking to Gemma as she sees this darkness inside her that is like her own and is 'grooming' her in a way to be as nasty as she is.

I enjoyed writing Will as this hopeless, poor individual. Especially since he runs into Jessica, the complete opposite.

The girls don't really understand how 'poor' he was and I felt 'cliche' to write anything around that. But I do add hints of them going 'wow, this is so normal for us but rare for you' from time to time.

The contracts are more a government/safety thing. Heroes started breaking rules, but the government needs to make them happy as the poeple love them. So they made these contracts that give heroes almost immunity as long as they follow strict guidelines. It allows me to go as rough as I need without people going 'wait! Thats illegal'. As for punishment for breaking a contract, nobody has broken one in a bad way or publicly, so there has not been a 'punishment' yet, but there is one if somebody does break the rules and will appear at one point in the future. Having Heroes hunt people is why they exist, technically in situations, they can. Thats what the bank situation was, just in a twisted way because nobody was given the chance to actually not talk.

I love writing Cindy, she is this ball of energy who takes the world like a game, while still having a serious side and secret side.

Jessica was a character I wish I could have done more with, but I found both her powers were limiting in terms of constant creative stories (for me at least) and there was this kinda of dark side where she could not be quite sadistic as Lucy, but finding a reason to transform people became hard. But there will be times in the future she uses her powers still. Its just slowed down to allow any ideas to be fleshed out.

No, Tom in a latest chapter. He is Lucy's personal panty pet, like her boot and bra companions. That dialouge was Gemma mis-remembering what Bondes cousin was called. He is currently being worn as an earring by Gemma, as seen in the next upcoming chapter! (While Tom is currently in Lucy's panties). Because Lucy was not in costume alot and messing with Gemma, Tom has unseen for some chapters. But he is back!

The bank scene was a bit twisted and a bit far, but I wanted to show how far Lucy had turned and have a moral dilemma for Gemma. I am curious however what people thought of that scene, glad to see some input. I won't make another one anytime soon (or ever), it was more just to show her insane dark side.

And yes they do, when the alarm does off in the bank, it blocks all transmissions. This does impact people inside but is more to stop the robbers from communicating (it also blocks radios). The exception is Lucy who had access to the banks network due to being a hero. Its why I choose a bank, so I could have convoluted ways to avoid the people being discovered and they could get away with the shrinking of them.

And thanks again for reading! I always love your reviews and I hope to see more in the future as chapters are released. Also feel free to ask as many questions as you can, I do enjoy answering them and they fill in gaps I fail to address in the chapters or could not fit in.

Thanks and hope to hear from you soon!

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2020 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 Truth

So Cindy just told Will about Lucys powers without Will having signed a NDA with Lucy? XD

 

Still a very good story only the kinky parts could get a little bit more detail :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

I had a re-read of Chapter 10 (which I assume your referring to). They mention Shrinker but not Lucy. Shrinker is a well known hero with the ability to shrink people. They do not reveal her identity is Lucy. And her powers are already known, so its not much of a reveal.

The NDA has two main sections. 1 is use of powers and it applies to any 'powers' they person sees or hears. So he cannot mention that Shrinker does use shrunken humans like that if he has been told that or seen it in person. (Not to mention he only heard it happens, which would not hold up much in court anyway I would assume without evidence, which the NDA makes hard)

2 is identities, which is why most people sign one per Hero. You cannot learn a heroes identity without signing an NDA and if you learn one, one must be signed ASAP, or the Hero gets in serious trouble and the person 'may' go missing.

Thats why Cindy got Will to sign her NDA as she knew eventually he might learn hers from being around Jessica, so she got him to sign it. Which is also why she did not reveal what her powers were, as the NDA was more for the indentity then the powers (but its still a core item in the NDA)

Hope that makes sense.

And I do apologize for that, I try my best but I am not as great as I know some writers are. (Some are insane with details).

I however do leave things to your imagination or have them as 'off comments' as a way to really sink in the deed. So instead of saying a person was turned into a cup and decribe the process, I might mention they are a cup, who the person is and then continue, mentioning how the cup is used. letting the process of the person being a cup be a simple and mindless thing for the user of said cup. I find less is more in those scenarios as just thinking of the consiquences of the act is better then trying to descibe it. Like describing a monster, sometimes your imagination can think of way worse details.

However I do my best to write long chapters filled with details around specific kinky parts, since I do like describing some facts. Most of these are in the Gemma chapters over the Will chapters, but he does get some.

Anyway, thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy the future chapters!

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2020 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Ok this story isnt all bad lol. I do like will and cindy together way more than him and Jessica. Very cute and romantic.

I wonder if it's going to come to cindy and will vs Gemma and lucy. And I hope will and cindy win if they do.

Keep it up! 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for giving it a try, glad you liked it!

I thought you might enjoy the Will story, glad I was right.

And Can't reveal much but its not a planned storyline at the current moment. While they exist in the same universe, there is only little crossovers. The stories are seperate for now.

Glad you liked it and hope you continue to read and enjoy the latest chapters!

Reviewer: Omanahan88 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 Sisters

Loving this story! It's an awesome balance between the two storyline and I absolutely love the use of their powers. I'm not sure if you've watched the Amazon show called "The Boys" but there's a scene in there where they go to a superhero club and one of the super's ability is to shrink himself. So he runs down the table at a couple inches tall and just dives headfirst into some chick's crotch. This story feels like that same premise spun out into an entire story and I love it. I wish William had chosen Jessica, but that's more of a personal preference than anything else. Can't wait to see where it goes!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

And funny enough, 'The Boys' is the single reason this story exists. I was binging it again for the upcoming season 2 and two scenes stuck out to me. First was the amazing shrunk guy scene and the second the collateral damage group. I found it intresting a world where Heroes could use and abuse people but still love them, making me wonder if a person was shrunk and used, if they enjoyed it enough...would they stay?

And that evolved into the story. With the world around heroes being just massive celebs and getting away with so much. Gemma's story is pure celebrity power and Will's is the personal side of a relationship with a hero.

Good guessing on the inspiration!

Thanks again for reviewing, it means alot! And I hope you enjoy the future chapter releases.

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Oh thank God.  I was getting worried about you man! Glad your ok!

As for the story ehh...not my cup of tea. Gemma is a little to cruel for me. And I'm not sure about Jessica and william. I would gate to be turned into some object losing my freedom and will. No thanks lol. Good Story writing tho.

I hope you beat your writers block.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for thinking of me! I appreciate it. I would post I had writing block but no real system for that.

And I understand. Gemma's story is more a look into this twisted world and it influencing her while Will's is a more tradional story with less intense scenes.

As for the object turning, its like a fetish thing for most people in the world. They get a kick out of being turned into objects and used. Almost all are consensual and when turned back, return for more. Little to no malice.

However I understand if its still not your thing.

Thanks for the praise and I hope to return to my other stories soon. I did write some chapters but felt they were not up to scratch, however I am finding this new story helping me think of ideas, so I should continue soon.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, hope to see one soon on my others when I continue!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2020 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Whoa, didn't even realize you are back. 

I was wondering what happened, but it's good to see you again. 

You are quick with making new stories. I admit, it's fun to start new ideas. 

I haven't read this story yet, but when I do, I will let you know. 

Also, I can't wait for the Ms. Eve story to get an update. ;)

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes, I am back! I apologize for the silence. I got major writers block and kept re-writing chapters for both my stories. However I saw a TV show that inspired me to write this story and hoping it kicks some ideas for Ms Eve's story.

I hope you enjoy this one. Ms Eve is coming soon, I just don't upload a story chapter until I am confident its the best I can put out.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2020 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 Gemma

Read the first 2 chapters. Will read the others tomorrow. Great start I'm interested to see where this goes !!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.


Let me know what you think when you get around to reading more, always love to read reviews!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2020 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2 William

Well in Gemma's case, of course shrinker is going to insert the litrle into eatch of thems least once. 

Wno knows with Jessica.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Nice predictions!

 

Hope you enjoy the future chapters!

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