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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2020 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

Writing is no easy task, it demmands time and dedication. I myself tried to start a story here on the site and ended up stuck in the middle. That said, my writing is nowere near as good as yours and this last chapter was amazing. I urge you not to give up.

I am also in the team that hopes Allison and John will grow closer. Loving every gentle interaction between them.

Thanks for sharing and, please, don't give up!

Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2020 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

Another great Chapter! Writers block happens to the best of us but really love the directions you have taken with this story. Really love how he’s pretty much ignored while the family talks over him and now is treated kind of like a doll/pet. I think it would be interesting if John has some one on one time with the grandmother, maybe she has to do some errands and while out possibly starts giving too much information of About how lonely she is and things that her late husband use to do.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Slacker28 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2020 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am glad you are still writing this even though you have writers block, this was a nice chapter.  I hope you make this gentle with John's family treating him more like a person.  Giantess stories that end badly for the poor little man are a dime a dozen.  I hope this is one of the rare sensual but gentle stories and not just another dominate all men stories we all see.  

 

Also if you are having writers block I would recomend talking with openhighhat over on deivant art.  His stories are similar to yours and he does talk to fans who comment on his work and discusses ideas and takes input.

 

I hope you keep writing these stories, I keep looking for your updates when I surf this site, but only if you feel like it.  Don't force a story out of you just because fans like me ask for more

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