Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2020 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

So glad to see Alisson actually showing signs of love and care for her brother. Most stories just turn the family into a group of narcissist psychopaths  that torture the shrunk protagonist.

I don’t think either Janet or Allison are evil. On the contrary, I believe both deeply care for John, but don’t realise just how powerfull and overwhelming beings they are from his perspective. The same could be said for John, now that he shrunk even the most innocent acts can stir fear and helplesness in his heart, which results in the feelings of alienation in relation to his family (the “goddesses”) that we saw in chapter 9.

Also, judging by the way she was reminescing their experiences together and got aroused by it, I would say Allison is attracted and lust after John (although it appears Allison herself has yet to realise these feelings). So, I am curious to see how their relationship will develop.

I can’t thank you enough for sharing your story. It’s really good and I am invested in the characters. Can’t wait to read more.

P.S. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2020 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

Allison had an interesting response to her friend's behaviors. She has so far been taking liberty and advantage of her brother by submitting him to torments and will twisting the rest of the family to warmup to it and eagerly partake as well. Will her shock at how some men are being treated by the women around them cause her to have some self-reflection the next time she or her family force her brother to do a demeaning task against his will? Or will she excuse her humiliating behaviours and actions and those of her family as simple repayment for protecting him from the real dangers outside the house?