[Report This]Date: November 15 2020 2:06 PM Title: Carnival Games
I'm interested in this story. It's an odd mixture of gentle and cruel giantess aspects. But you have a lot of character interaction between the giantesses and the regular humans, which I like because it's more in depth than just having big girls smash things. Personally the gentle aspects are my favorite, but I like the playfulness of the girls as well.
Maybe I'm in the minority in this, since I don't just read gts stories to get off, but I'd like to know a little more about the girl's views on humans. Something I'd like to see explored within the story, probably between Joe and Katya, is having her explain exactly how she as a giantess views humans. Earlier Sofie said that she wanted to be friends with the people of their group. Why is that? It's clear they're superior to humans in every way. They could easily be worshipped as goddesses. So why do they want to be friends with humans? Why are they gentle when they also enjoy eating people? Why do Sofie and Katya like Lizzy and Joe at all romantically?
I'd like to have this explored because I like knowing how characters think and feel. It gives a lot of great depth to a story. But I also like the fetish material. For example, if you're not at all opposed to it, I think some foot action between the girls and some humans would be hot. I also very much liked Sofie using some random appartment tennants to help her get off. Add in some more of that. Katya too, I hope she's a squirter. One thing I've always loved most in gts stories is when a giantess (regular or futa) dominates over humans just by cumming on them.
All in all you have a really interesting and entertaining story, and I'll be reading more updates to see what you do with it. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
That you so much for this indepth review. It means a lot of me!
I think that's good advice - building deeper characters is definitely what helps make better stories. I wanted to play with a story that could be both gentle and cruel. I like writing stories where giants have always existed, so they have to interact with people in a routine way and have those base relationships. I like your idea and I'm going to play more with this concept. My plan for the next couple of chapters is to lean hard into cruelty and that it shocks the tiny characters to create a conflict that drives the exploration of how giants can be both violent and nice.
Also, yes for the fetish requests. I should probably do more feet service. I'm more indifferent to feet but I feel like it should be included. Also, I wrote this story for that first scene where Sofie cums in the apartment and then tried to stretch the concept. I should definitely come back to that.
Cheers!