[Report This]Date: May 24 2020 9:08 AM Title: A Sudden Enemy
I really love the relationship between Cris and Kris. Friends (Maddy and Claire) and foes (Richard and Jas) are presented, and I can't wait to see the development as Maddy also seems to be romantically interested in Chris
But the most interesting element so far is Kat, she adds a good element of suspence and conflict to the family chemistry. Why did she suddenly changed when Chris shrunk? Does she really think of her brother as a worm now or there is more to it than meets the eye? I can't wait to see how you will develop her character and her relationship with Chris.
I am adding your story to my favorites. Thank you for finding time to write this story and sharing with us. Five stars :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for supporting the story! It has been fun to write so far. I love giving Chris a voice and seeing where the adventure takes him. As for kat, I definitely have some ideas for how thats gonna go. Poor Chris just wants whats best for everyone, If only everyone were like Chris lol