Date: May 16 2020 8:03 AM Title: Bursting Her Bubble
I really enjoyed this! Your form is superbly easy to follow, and the content is delightful to ingest. It’s never occurred to me what a good vehicle for unaware vore boba tea could be! And the fact that Elizabeth “blessed” unwilling tributes to her beloved is just so tantalizingly twisted. I love it.
The arc of this story kept me guessing until close to the end, and I rather enjoy that. Way to steer clear of being to predictably formulaic. While I was able to guess who would end up drinking that last tea based on your reuse of the epithet, “the prettiest girl in the cafe,” I did not guess who would end up in it, and that was quite the satisfying surprise to say the least. What a darkly poetic dose of justice!
Your descriptions are compelling, the characters interesting, and the plot and execution stimulating. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Please write more!
This comment means a lot to me! Thank you very much. I have another story in the works so you won't have long to wait!
Date: May 15 2020 5:55 AM Title: Bursting Her Bubble
I love this! Partly due to the uniqueness and how well done this story is. I kind of have a bubble tea fetish so I would love to see my stories like this. Personally I did not like that the woman shrinking others was shrunk too and died, but that’s just personally preference.
Thank you very much! Bubble tea is fun because you can totally picture where all those spheres are when the cup's empty!