Date: March 08 2024 11:26 PM Title: Start
I would love a new chapter so much
Date: January 11 2023 5:36 PM Title: Start
This is great, another fan that would like it to continue. Really like how she had the friend complete the request unaware. More from the original girl, unaware, scat, pee, feet. Please don't let this story die
Date: November 25 2021 4:36 PM Title: Start
Will this stoy be ever continued? I really liked it!!
Date: February 14 2020 7:41 AM Title: Start
I have really been hoping you'd continue. Love so many of the evil elements that also cause her pleasure. Looking forward to even more, would love some more details of the tinies' horror and her excitement.
Date: February 13 2020 11:56 AM Title: Start
You may be being a bit to hard on yourself. 26 reviews is a pretty decent amount feedback for a story of this size. My advise for helping to gain more traction is to make sure your story satys on the first two pages of "Most recent." Whether that means posting smaller chapters more frequently or spacing them out so that it jumps to the top just as it's about to move to the next page, is up to you. I hope this is a little bit helpful!
All that being said, I really enjoy the story that you have here and I'm happy to see youre posting again. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
I do enjoy your stories as well so your review menas a lot.
I thought about releasing shorter chapters but I know that I dislike that myself when I am following a story.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2020 6:05 PM Title: Start
Brilliant stuff. The more deranged, humiliating and outright pitiful the actions, the better. I'd really like to see some of her requests going on for longer, things like putting a whole city on her toenail and having it be broken down and destroyed throughout her day, or projected onto the back of her panties and be slowly annihilated between the threads of the fabric.
All the bodily fluid stuff is great, btw. Some ear wax or navel lint or underarm sweat or something could be good.
Date: January 02 2020 5:29 PM Title: Start
Absolutley love the bratty girl evilly & horny snuffing out micro cities. My favorite was definitley the couples scenario & wish you'd make more but with them obliterating nano cities with sex.
Date: December 09 2019 9:38 AM Title: Start
One of the best stories I've read in a while. I love when a woman discovers and revels in her cruelty. There is a popular "unaware" category of story, but sadly no "aware" category. Nonetheless I am always seeking out intensely aware stories such as this. Love when she uses her ass or gas to torment tinies, and really looking forward to when she inflicts horror and carnage with her #1s and #2s.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for you review the opinion from all of you means a lot to me!
There a definitly more scenes with Scat and Watersport planned out. Both aware and unaware!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 7:37 PM Title: Start
Finally! It has been such a long time since i read something that grasped my interest like this. The premise is simple but effective and at the same time original. The story has a plot element, but isn't bogged down in too much story telling itself and gets to the good stuff pretty quickly. Which is great since well this is erotica for a macro and shrink lover and sadly too many writers add too much story when all I really want is something quick and arousing. I love the over all diresting this story has been going and as I write this i have only read three chapters. I am giving this max stars, but would like chapters to be a bit longer and more heavy detail, but that is just a bit of criticism to a story that i am over all loving.
I am constantly going to be looking forward to this series and heck I like it so much I would even like to write something within the same universe of this story, maybe a spin off or even contribute a chapter with your blessing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much that review.
I really enjoy reading from you guys what your thinking about my story. And it is especially great if its coming from and author which I really like.
I loved all of your stories so far!
I'm a little concerned that all of a sudden everyone wants to write a story with this concept because I think it could influence my own progress. Although I I'm excited that you are gping to write something like this because I really enjoy your writing!
I will try to be more detailed but I just want to get the story to the good stuff:D Sine most it is already planned out.
Anyways chapter 4 will hopefully be to your liking and chapter 5 will be posted soon as well
Date: December 07 2019 4:00 PM Title: Start
Hey straight up do you mind if I borrow this idea and write a story or two? I'll give full credit and a link to your story. I am in LOVE with this concept man. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Yeah I suggested that story to another author once but he didn't use it.
As long as you give a link to my story and explain the origins I am fine with it. I am looking forward reading your version
Date: December 04 2019 5:43 PM Title: Start
The concept is solid and the writing is pretty good.
Can´t wait for, when you put that futanari tag to use though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
Every tag will be used but some of them later in the story as more characters get involed.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 4:29 PM Title: Start
Fantastic work so far! Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
There is a lot more planned. I think the next 5 to 6 chapters are almost finished in my head.
Date: December 04 2019 6:35 AM Title: Start
I love this story as it cleverly opens story lines to any scenario. My concern is that it may shortchange character development and plot development. That being said, I really look forward to more! A few ideas...I would love a footplay story where it goes beyond just crushing. Maybe the tiny people in the city fly helicopters up to explore her giant sole and toes before she uses her feet to play with the tiny buildings. A second is to have a cruise ship scenario while she is taking a bath. It would be like a little bath toy for her. Finally, I'd love a story where the tiny guy requesting the session doesn't realize until it begins that he knows the girl. Maybe his girlfriend or sister? Just some thoughts!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I am working on chapter 2 and it is almost finished. It will probably be online in a few hours.
The next chapter will be heavily foot related but you can expect a lot of different scenarios than just crushing but at the start crushing will be the main focus because that is what the app is for.
But soon natalie and the other characters will get creative with its use;)
I also have the overall plotlines for 4 characters ready so there will be some parts were the clients meet some familiar faces!
[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 2:45 AM Title: Start
I like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: December 03 2019 11:18 PM Title: Start
This is an awesome idea! I liked the first chapter so much I actually made an account so I could leave a review. I'm really excited to see where this story goes, especially with the feet tag. Hoping to see some foot action with one of the "grain of sand" sized cities 😁
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. I do have a lot of pöans for this story because it's my favorite fantasy. There will be feet content as well as socks and different shoes.
Date: December 03 2019 8:35 PM Title: Start
This is an excellent scenerio. Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to see just how far she would go for that extra play money.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Natalie isn't really the main character just the on I started with so there will be a lot of other girls torturing the city aware and unaware.
[Report This]Date: December 03 2019 8:06 PM Title: Start
Very interesting. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Date: December 03 2019 7:43 PM Title: Start
Liking this so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: December 03 2019 6:25 PM Title: Start
Good start. Looking forward to more wierd and interesting requests.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
There will be lots of different scenarios and natalie will get desperate for money so there will be more weird and interesting requests in the future