Date: August 19 2019 7:05 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I feel bad for Max. I would really like to see Ashley realize how bad Alexis really is. I do have a qerstion: if Max went with Maggie then would Alexis get board with Ashley without a tiny and just leave her? Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Haha yes, Max has had a pretty long string of bad luck, thats for sure. As far as your question goes, please stay tuned, because I think that question will be answered very very soon and I would hate to ruin the plot by saying too much..
Thank you so much for reading, and I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2019 7:08 PM Title: Smelling Salts
Kinda a cliffhanger chapter lol. I hope you’re no where near close to finished with this story. Sooo many avenues to venture in this story. I feel like you’re just getting started. I wish there was a way to DM you or something. I can’t wait for the next chapter. I want to see more stories from you too. But I’m not ready, no where near ready, to leave this story. 😍🍑🤤 thank you for writing!!!!
Author's Response:
I would say that we are nearing the end of the second act. So still about a third of the story remains to be told. However, if it seems appropriate, I have no issue coming back and adding side stories, either into this story or ass separate one-off adventures of their own. As far as DM's go, I've started a twitter account @Omanahan88. Feel free to shoot me a DM if you like.
Thank you so much for the support on the story. Hearing the feedback makes it much easier to fight through the creative blocks. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 7:18 PM Title: Smelling Salts
Hell YESSS!!! More more more!!!!! Maybe he’s going to find out he loves being tortured and used. Atleast his body does. You’re an amazing writer. Last 2 chapters have been fantastic!!! Please don’t stop. Love the LONG detailed chapters and your constant updates! DONT STOP!!😍🍑🤤
Author's Response: Well thank you Spider-Man! I really appreciate the feedback, as I was hitting a bit of a dry patch with my writing, but over the last day or so I’ve been reinstated to steam this story onward!
I’m glad you like the idea of Max being at war with his own carnal desires! It’s something I wasn’t planning on doing when I started but it just seemed like it fits.
Stay tuned to see what happens next, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2019 1:48 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I've really enjoyed reading the story so far, you have a talent for this sort of thing and it's refreshing to see someone with your tastes writing a story surprisingly quickly. You really know how to sell the relationship between the characters and it was a joy to read the story. And as of the latest chapter, I loved seeing the mother interact with her shrunken son, if you ever wanted to write a whole story like that I think most people would love it.
Author's Response: Hey thank you so much for reading! I’m very glad that you’ve enjoyed it thus far. I’m able to write so much because this community has proven to be so very supportive! And as for the mother chapter, I’m glad you liked it. I wasn’t sure about it so it’s nice to hear that it was enjoyable and not too dark. And if you haven’t read it “Mrs. Riesen’s Son” by dirtyoldbukowski on this site is a fantastic story that inspired my chapter. Anyways, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you stick around to see how things turn out!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2019 8:43 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I really like this story and where it’s going. iMac actually had an out by going with Megan but her past cruel antics made her unbelievable which was delightfully amusing. I hope Max continues to get broken down and that Ashley continues to use him as a mere toy with Alexis’ help. The development of Ashley from sweet and caring to active participant in Max’s torture has really made this very interesting. I like the aspects of being used by sisters. I really look forward to reading more. This is an excellent story. I have already favorited you as an author so that I can keep up with anymore stories you may write in the future. I also love that you constantly update the story. So much of the time I get really into a story only for the author to not update in 2 weeks and I get everyone’s busy but then I have to at least read the previous chapter as a refresher. I love that I can follow your story day by day. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yes, the notion of Ashley transitioning from a loving and perfect guardian, to just another evil giantess is the whole premise that this story was built on. And it’s a bit of a cliche but I’m hoping that I’m able to approach the scenario in a fresh way that people will enjoy reading about.
Stay tuned, you’ll enjoy where the sisters stand by the end of the story.
Thanks for reading and thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2019 1:17 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I love this story! Everything about it is perfect. I'm not big on the sister stuff but I pretend it's his stepsister but who cares its your story, not mine. I wish I could write and update as fast as you but I like to take my time to make sure Its exactly how I want it.
Eventually this story has to end, but theres still a lot of room for flashbacks and other details so whenever you do finish it I hope you begin another story.
10 stars!
Author's Response:
I'm flattered to hear you say that you are enjoying the story despite it prominently featuring a fetish that you dont necessarily subscribe to. I guess the whole "sister" thing is easier for me because I don't have a sister myself.
And as far as the story updating goes, I actually have about 4 or 5 chapters written that haven't been published at all times. This way I can have some time off to think, and still keep my story at the front of the "Most recent" page. Obviously the quality of the content and the author's enthusiasm are most important, but I find that having a good amount written before I start posting, was incredibly helpful for me.
And you are correct, this story will absolutely come to a conclusion at some point. I subscribe to the theory that it's better to let a story end with dignity rather than just continue to push out garbage forever. That being said, I can definitely see myself working on some spin off short stories based on some of the characters featured here.
Thank you very mush for the support and I hope you stay tuned for the rest!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2019 10:16 PM Title: Smelling Salts
PLEASE.. NEVER STOP THIS STORY! Love how long each chapter is and I love every little gory detail. If you ever stop writing this story.. there better be a part 2 and 3 and 4 and 5... do ya SEE where I’m going with this?! Lol the fact that it’s MOSTLY ass related is the absolute best part! Never stop with the ass... there is never enough. Thank you and please continue.... I’ll be watching 😈
Author's Response:
Well I am thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the experience so far! And while I am a firm believer that all things must eventually come to an end, I think that we still have a number of chapters to go. And I think with how much people are enjoying this story, I might end up writing some spin offs. Also I'm glad that you appreciate the ass content as much as I do. While I am going to try to feature some other material in the next couple chapters, there will always be time for more ASS!
Thank you so much for the words of encouragement and thank you for reading!
Date: August 05 2019 6:01 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I love this story! You are a great writer. There’s new twists and turns at every corner and it’s not easily predictable. Wish I was Max
Author's Response:
I think we all want to be Max!
Thank you very much for the compliment, I am trying very hard to keep the story from getting too boring and predictable.
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 05 2019 3:55 AM Title: Smelling Salts
This story keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to read more please keep going your are already one of my favorite writers on this page.
Thank you
Author's Response:
That is incredibly kind of you to say. I was a rwader on this site for years and I never thought I would enjoy writing my own story this much. Thank you so much for reading and I hope you stick around to see how things pan out!
Date: August 05 2019 12:17 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I'm really enjoying the progression this story has taken so far. Would love to see some more foot related action, especially given that we haven't seen much with Ashley yet. Regardless, can't wait to see what happens next. Great job
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoy the story! I'll be adding more foot content in the upcoming chapters because I noticed that the past several chapers have been lacking. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!
Date: August 01 2019 7:14 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Fantastic stuff! Any chance of the mother getting involved?
Author's Response:
It's possible. That isnt something that I am into and it probably won't come into the main story, but I think i can probably write up a chapter or two in the "flashback" sort of format.
Keep an eye on the story and see what I come up with!
Thanks for reading and I'm thrilled youve enjoyed it so far.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2019 4:20 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I really like the direction this is going. Hope Megan and Alexis will be successful in slowly convincing Ashley that our "lucky" hero is into smelling and tasting any kind of female body odour, and of course especially Ashley's. No matter how nasty.;P
One thing concerning the treatment of the MC. I wouldn't go the way of the Females torturing him in ways that could severely harm or kill him (like throwing him in the toilet or threatening to crush him under their feet).
I think it would be more powerful if they show that they care about keeping him "intact". So that they can keep him long term as nothing but a slave-toy, subjugated to worship their sweaty feet, armpits, butt cracks and pussies for many, many years to come. :)
At least imho that is a way more humiliating and damning prospect to look forward to.
Author's Response:
I'm in agreement with you there my friend. In a recently posted chapter we learn that an RP (reduced person) has an awfully high damage threshold. Too bad that resilliance doesn't protect his sense of smell!
Thank you so much for reading and I very much appreciate the review.
Stay Tuned!
Date: July 26 2019 3:38 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Really nice story!
Thank you for the good work. I can't wait to read more of you.
I really like the focus on unpleasant smells so far!
Maybe he will have to take a dive in a toilet in some time.
Keep doing you thing.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2019 3:23 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Love the frequent updates, the story so far.
I hope that there will be some more scenes where Alexis/Megan tortures Max using the body of Ashley(or each other) while the other is unaware(like the scene in chapter 5)
And can’t wait to see Max face Megan’s revenge though it might be way too big for him to handle in his current situation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll keep that in mind for future chapters. Stay tuned for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2019 1:42 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Good starts. Like the relationship dynamic if the characters and the focus on female body odors. ;P
Going forward I hope that the older sister gets influenced by the younger sister concerning how to treat the little one.:)
Doesn't have to be full sadist like another review said, but maybe have instances where she would observe him actually getting excited about certain humiliations and body odors. Maybe have him sniff dirty socks and panties of them while he thinks he is alone, and have her secretely watch.
So it wouldn't be one sided, but a progression from her and his side towards him becoming their somewhat willingly sex toy and fart sniffer. ;)
Author's Response:
I think you'll enjoy where this story is headed then. Def not full on sadist, but there is a particularly evil character on her way and she will definitely making things difficult for Max.
Thank you for the review and I'm glad you like it so far!
Date: July 16 2019 8:15 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I think it´s a good start. You have laid down the focal points of the relationship between the 3 main characters. You can work from there, going more deep into their stories and personalities.
I just hope you don´t make the young sister a full sadist. You can work with her fascination on the power she has over her brother, her recklessness in handling him and the consequences of her action. Just a sugestion for the future. it's just sad and boring when a character is made evil just because and acts as a psycho.
Thank you for your for writing and rewriting the text. Hope to see more soon.
Sorry for any misspelling. Although fluent, english isn't my primary language.
Author's Response:
I don't want Megan becoming a sadist either. She's mean but she does in fact love her brother. However there is a new charcter on her way who will have a pretty strong influence over the sisters, much to Max's dismay.
Stick around and watch how things develop and I think you'll enjoy what comes.
Thanks for reading and I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2019 7:44 PM Title: Smelling Salts
So far so awesome! Keep the chapters long and detailed and LOTS of booty! Also don’t be afraid to add farts 😂😂. Again keep the chapters LONG and DETAILED. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Oh don't you worry my frined, ther will be farts a plenty.
Glad you've enjoyed what has happened so far!