Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2016 10:22 PM Title: Origins, Continued

Not bad! But, I still like "Convenience Store" a little better.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2015 8:34 PM Title: Origins, Continued

Wow, hot story! Now thats how a giantess should treat a tiny man. Bravo, loved the mental domination as well as physical. Don't see enough butt play in stories either, not well done like this anyway.

 

Great job!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2015 2:31 PM Title: Origins, Continued

What I'm about to say isn't exactly everyone's cup of tea, but if she wanted to fully dominate him, she could always castrate him at some point.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2015 12:13 PM Title: Origins

I was hoping it'd keep going...

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 4:13 PM Title: Lollipop

muito bom !!!

continuar ...

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 1:07 AM Title: Lollipop

That was just brilliant! :-). O how i wish, she would do that to me. loved that story!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 12:51 PM Title: Lollipop

Very nice.  I felt like I was editing one of my own chapters,... Ha!  ;`)

...only,  your's is formatted much better.  I too, enjoy this type of tale.  The readers imagination, can form their own image of the perticular character/ s' , and we could never do that to the full extent for everyone who reads it,...?

Leaving certain discriptions 'open', and allowing the reader to 'picture' themselves, as the protaginist; creating the set up, and drawing up the scene, performing...

Great job! 

P.S.  I think you might want to change the rating to at least an 'R' rating, might be a good idea.

Author's Response: Changed the rating, thanks for the heads up. And cheers for the review, so glad you liked it :)