[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 5:09 PM Title: Carl
Good stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 4:09 PM Title: Carl
Ahhh! What a surprise :') Well thank you Sir!! Actually I was a little bit upset for that once per week update schedule, so thank you so much for filling in this time shorter. And yay for the upcoming vore chapter! :) I wonder what might happen, really curious already. Maybe the girls will sit with Lexi on the same table even Lexi doesnt want that to at first and wonders where Zack is so long doing on the bathroom not realizing what might happen, and she's giving him a one way trip through her digestive tract, maybe even some ironic conversation of the girl who knows and who put him in Lexis soda maybe. And adding some sarcastic remark on Lexis bowls gurgling knowing the micro would have to listen to this. Maybe even the aware girl tries to extend the moment a little bit by holding Lexi back swallowing by comming up with a conversation. Also Lexi releasing a burp and having a remark of her digestion taking on would be great. Or something totally different :p Thansk again for the shorter update schedule :))
Author's Response:
I won't spoil what's going to happen in the next chapter, but I will said that there will be an ironic conversation that occurs in that chapter for sure. I won't spoil who gets eaten or who eats them, but I will say that somebody's getting a one-way trip to a girl's tummy ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'll have the chapter up on Sunday.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 2:40 PM Title: Carl
Nice little build up chapter, and yay, finally some action hopefully taking place next one :p I loved the rude kind of the girls like "Watch it, you fucking loser!" giving some kind of power over the boys especially when they would become ant sized later on. Also love how Lexis stomach always gurgles :p I can imagine one of the girl gang meeting Zack in the bathroom, shrinking him and putting him in the soda of Lexi who would gup him down unknownigly :p Looking toward Sunday so much now. Youre awesome in writing style and building things up. Lots of autors lack that on here.
Author's Response:
I'm happy that your excited for Sunday. I'm working on the chapter as we speak and without giving away too much, Lexi's belly is certainly going to gurgle! Glad you like my writing style and I will make sure to have some good vore for you guys up this weekend.
Date: September 18 2014 10:31 AM Title: Sex and Food
Awesome :) Sunday is so long in the future though. I am really curious about this story already how it will continue.
Author's Response:
Then just for you, I'll put chapter 3 up right now!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2014 10:50 AM Title: The Ray Case
So is Lexi tha "villain" in this story? I already liked her unknowngly swallowing the other villain in your party story in the last chapter and giving her some nice last moments of anticipationof whats happing next or actually inside next. Would be nice seeing some vore or even unaware vore of Lexi getting rid of at least some of the "detective club" ;) I also thought of what if she would use the dildo again with a micro dust particle sized tiny on top of it and insert it in her ass, would be fun too to read about. Cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I won't confirm or deny who the villain is, but I will confirm that a micro will be "taken care of" by way of an insertion scene in the very near future. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 8:28 PM Title: Sex and Food
Great stuff, do go on.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! I'll have the third chapter up on Sunday.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2014 2:42 PM Title: Sex and Food
Not much to review because it's a build up chapter, but I liked the ending :) Also I like the Lexi character. I would had liked it even more if she had used the dildo in her back instead the front ^^
Author's Response:
Yeah, though it Lexi's a purist when it comes to playing with herself :)
Date: September 16 2014 4:25 AM Title: Sex and Food
I do enjoy both both male and female vore equally, but I understand people just prefring one. I just thought it would had made a great plot twist, maybe even doesnt need to be a full chapter about it just an adding in between, where one of Tommys friends get vored by Tommy and he doesnt even know it, or later is being told by the "bad guy" who put his friend in the situation. Still looking forward for your stories :) <3
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 15 2014 4:24 PM Title: Sex and Food
I dont know if you take requests of wishes, but I think it would make an awesome irony and mind twist, if one of Tommys friends (or the bad guy in the end) get shrunk and put /land in a drink/cereal/onion dip of Tommy himself to swallow unknowingly, and maybe even make some jokes about it like releasing a burp or talking to another person about his digestion making funny noises and that he hes a little bit gasy latly, or that he has to visit the toilet shortly. I always thought these kind of talk the micro has to listen are a great way of irony and sarcasm to put into the plot, like the micro has to listen to them talk about the giant digestion while in a few moments he/she would experience it first person, also making them shiver and sending an eww/gross like feeling through them, already imagining how horrible it would be or thinking about that in 24h hours the only things left of them would be a skeleton, bones and hair to get flushed down the toilet, and the person not even know what he/she did to them. Also hope so that Tommy surives :) If it doesnt fit in this story, maybe in a future one.
Author's Response:
As always, thanks for the suggestion! but the truth is I really don't like male vole, just girls eating people. Just a preference.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2014 4:56 PM Title: Sex and Food
Really nice first chapter, looking forward for the next already a lot. Also reading through the reviews, I would love seeing some unaware too if possible. Thanks for the great stories, I loved your other two on here.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it as well as my other stories, and don't worry, there will be some unaware stuff coming up! ;)
Date: September 13 2014 3:22 PM Title: Sex and Food
I'm liking this a lot. Unaware vore is awesome. I also enjoyed the way you wrote this chapter, in that, you left a lot to the imagination of the reader and kept some elements of the story secret. I'm eager to read more and see how it all fits together. Really good story do far, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Glad you like the whole mystery angle. I hope you'll enjoy the twists I've got coming up and i'll be sure to have the second chapter up soon!
[Report This]Date: September 13 2014 2:08 PM Title: Sex and Food
wow man! I loved the first chapter. :)
As a totally blind reader, I had no trouble what so ever with visualisation! :)
looking forward to reading on as it comes.tr
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and that visualization was easy!
Date: September 13 2014 9:08 AM Title: Sex and Food
I never said anything about Cat swallowing Mrs Watson unawarily :') Where did I say that? It was clear to me already that she knew or someone put her into her drink. Thats why I said it would be awesome to have some unaware in the story too (missing in the tags). And I think you got me wrong :3 I also saw Tommy as part of the main protagonists, and I really want him to survive through all your stories, I like his character. Thats why I said it would be funny if he would consome a micro too by time unknowingly, maybe even the "bad guy" of a story.
Author's Response:
Oh, okay. Sorry. My bad :)
[Report This]Date: September 13 2014 8:25 AM Title: Sex and Food
This looks really promising so far :) Though Im mostly just into unaware, and it's not under the story tags :/ Maybe you can still put some unaware things into there, not knowing what you had in mind. I really liked this part: “Lara?” He seemed to have caught her off guard with the comment. “I couldn’t understand the stupid thing she was talking about with Python’s Theory or something to do with triangles.”“The Pythagorean Theorem,” Tommy corrected, scratching the back of his head.“Yeah, whatever,” Cat said. She finished her Coke in several long gulps. “Ahhh,” she sighed, rubbed her stomach. “Well, see you later Tommy –” She burped and covered her mouth, her face flushing red with embarrassment. “Too much soda in one go, I guess,” she said and giggled. “Yeah,” Tommy said, eyeing her gurgling tummy. “Well, see you later.” :p Great irony. I really love unaware combined with ironic and sarcastic twists, works so much better together. A great example was of your last story, where the mean protagonist booked a one way trip through Lexis digestive tract herself. I love things like, where a micro lands in a onion dip or glass of liquid, full of rage not reallizing what might happen in a short bit, and then his/her anger/confusion suddenly is disrubted by a loud gurling noise, the character suddenly froze in fear looking up, and a tummy is blocking the heavens, and a giant standing there speaking things like "man Im starving", or "oops, did my stomach learn to speak or something", or a burp suddenly appears instead and the giant saying something like "eww gross, my digestive isnt that geat lately, also took a nasty dump before" mostly in a conversation with another person, and having a remark of she/him shouldnt eat that much junk food. A great example this this scenario also was your idea of Lexi saying "hope this will help with my digestion" and lifting up the glass. I also would like for example an unaware vore, where one character, maybe even the mean character of the story who shrunk people, ended in a drink or onion dip where Tommy would eat from and unknowingly would send the bad guy of the story to a one wy trip through his bowls. Also am already happy to hear youre planing more stories and a Halloween one too :))
Author's Response:
Not to spoil anything, but there will be some unaware scenes later, so don't you worry As for Cat swallowing Mrs. Watson unawarily, who said that she didn't do on purpose? Who said that it was even Cat? ;)
I'm glad you liked The Party and are looking forward to my future stories but I actually always viewed Tommy as the protagonist in The Party and Kelsey as the villain, but I guess its up to interpretation. I'll try to have Chapter 2 up by the middle of next week so thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.