Date: August 03 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
I want to see them be able to grow him but only to a certain hight like 8-12 inches. Then they can have as much fun as they want and I also would like to se him indestructible yet can feel pain. This gives his mother an idea . THe idea to release her sexual frustration if you know what I mean. Her climaxes should be extrmley violent. This is my Idea on how the story should progress.
Date: August 03 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hey Hollow, here's a thought, ...if Mama don't care about him anymore, then maybe she decides to sell him and make some money. A very muscular, female body builder that normally hates men, sees Jake and realizes that he's the most fantastic little guy that she's ever laid eyes ON. He would be the ultimate answer for her, (as she's always strived to be much bigger, and stronger then her mate, by working out, and building herself up into an giant amazon woman) -with Jake, as small as he already is) She could relax, and use him as she pleases.... She could force him to worship her powerful ass, and massage it, and her tremendous, powerful thighs.
She would become enraptured with his tiny being as she held him so effortlessly within the palm of her mighty hand. Her dream of becoming an actual Goddess could be realized with him....but, just a suggestion.. ;`)
Date: July 09 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have a suggestion that may give you an idea! After you go through the family, maybe he's given to a teenage girl (I'm a teen so i always look for teen stories) at school that he likes. My two favourites are feet and mouth play so I hope to see that stuff! Great job with the story, I really like it! Please don't belike the authors that write a good story and don't finish it :)
Date: July 06 2013 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just spotted a few spelling/typing errors. Other than that great chapter, I think it would be great if she started to have gas or sonething along those lines. I can she jake struggling eit the putrid fumes and Sky loving the feeling in her ass.
Date: July 06 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
As far as I enjoyed this story, I have to admit my frustration and disappointment towards you as an author. Don't get me wrong, this story seems to be great, and I will rate it 10 points, but it mostly ever will finished, like all your other great stories. You seem to write just to the best parts of a story, include really great cliffhangers, and than abandon the story, and begin a new one. So I hope I am just wrong on this, and of course I so damn would love to see this continue. There are older stories of you where I would say the same, but I dont want to begin a talk of ping pong. You should focus on one story, and finish it, then go to another. Im sure Im not alone on this who things that way. Anyway, about this story, and what I would like to see how it goes:
- Im a hugh fan of anal insertion, so the next coming chapters seem to be awesome already
- an idea I got was, maybe he suddenly shrinks the moment he comes into contact with his sisters anus. She wouldnt be unaware about this though. Maybe farts of her causes the guy to shrink every time.
- so he would get shrink to the size of a rice corn or lint and gets lost deep inside his sisters rectum. She would think of you jumped out just before you got inserted and would be unaware about what happened to you.
- at some point his sister would need to use the bathroom, which end in fatality
Date: June 28 2013 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, eonder what sky (skylar) will do. I wonder how she will "play" with him. I think sh should keep him in her but or maybe she can experiment with him. Like maybe he tortured her by farting on her so she gets back at him by making him her ass slave.
Date: June 28 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
How about Jake wakes up the next morning and is grabbed by brooke and she heads to the bathroom. While in the bathroom she decides what to do next with him and decides to pleasure herself and masturbate using him as a dildo. He gets covered in his sisters juices and is left watching her shower. He is then brought to her mom for breakfast and she breastfeeds him. He then spends the entire day as her buttplug then returned back to brooke where he is kept in the front of her panties inside her pussy where he will spend the night inside of.
Date: June 27 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I see a lot of feet/stocking/socks suggestions and thats really fine and all, but there is a lot of feet storys out there, try to be creative!I would love to see some interaction with the mom, like if she keeps him in the back of her underwear and smush him in her ass, or sits on him, or makes him massages the inside of her ass too!There isnt a lot of butt related storys out there, specially with overweight girls. And there could be some interaction with the brother too, maybe him getting on his underwear or something?I see toilet tag on the story so, a little of that, maybe with the mom would be nice too. So far its getting really good, just try to make the descriptions of how he feels more elaborate since that is the part that allows the reader to imagine what it would be like to be on his place. Keep doing it this good, its a really goos sotry so far.
Date: June 27 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
This was great! How about Brooke still decides to keep him, maybe plays some games with him to have fun, like being chased or hide and seek? Otherwise, you could have Jake actually try to escape his prison somehow and try to make his way across the room -- or out of it even -- in the middle of the night, whene everyon'e sleeping, only to find out that Brooke noticed his escape and is hunting him down at night, not wanting to get caught by the family for almost letting him escape? Otherwise still you could keep up the footplay, with more insulting talks down to him, as she gets more power hungry that even she thought. Some of the suggestions form others last time about Brooke were good too, for example, and you could try those!
Date: June 27 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I also agree on brooke being his personal "home" but it could be up to you on how he stays with her. It could either be by insertion (trapped insider her), or inside her socks while she sleeps. I also like the idea of him being scotch taped so he could also be scotch taped to parts of her body while she is asleep like her boobs or her legs or her butt.
Date: June 26 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far, it's actually pretty good! Glad to see that he's at such a small size too, seems pretty appropriate. Although it would be interesting to see if one of them actually revealed to somehow have the power (or even be the cause of) to change his size, and could threaten to make him even smaller. That, or the virus kicks in and makes him unexpectantly smaller specifically on an occasion when he shouldn't have backtalked, tried to escape, or whatever, making things a whole lot worse for him upon discovery.
In all honesty, I'd very much like to see Brooke have him for the day, and enjoy teasing and playing with him underfoot, chasing him around on purpose, and bossing him around a lot. She seems to have the perfect attitude for a bitchy, bossy, power hungry and threatening personality, and all that while showing off how she can control him with her feet, and have him in actual danger -- on purpose or by accident -- would be great!
Otherwise, the same could go for his other sister, only she would be more chirpy, childish and playful, and she'd realize how much fun she could have with him only when she ltierally starts using him as a doll. Even with her I wouldn't mind seeing some foot interaction (I admit, footplay's easily my thing).
I also highly agree on many of the suggestions so far, like being used as jewelry, having turns each day and having Brooke as the definitive "home" (aka her underwear drawer), and stuff like that, so good job to everyone else too!
Otherwise, it's your call, but those are my two cents. Keep up the great work!
Date: June 26 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
A couple of suggestions: 1. At half an inch tall, handling Jake would be a problem, so his family should use scotch tape. It would act like fly paper and allow them to stick Jake anywhere (muscles, breasts, walls, furniture) without losing him. 2. Jake could be used as parts of jewelery (earrings, lockets, toe rings, etc) worn by his family.
Date: June 26 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to see him used as a "bath-toy', and forced to use a small-sized, brush to scrub his sisters feet, and then rub large amounts of lotion on his mothers feet, while she traps him under her toe's, and keeps him inside her nylon panty-hose, and makes him paint her toe-nail's and well you know....Fun Stuff! :0