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Reviewer: Panzer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2023 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

I actually really like this concept.  Especially love the casual cruelty.  I hope you add more chapters of this going forward!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I actually have a few fun ones in mind that I'd like to get to. I hope you enjoy them!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

A girl who puts a city within the transparent bottom of a sandal. So all they see is a sole. 



Author's Response:

I may be able to work something like that into a story

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2023 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

I'd like to give you some ideas and even I character I'd like to be depicted, how can I contact you? Do you have DA? 

Reviewer: amerdism Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2023 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

Love this and would like to see more snippets, but in particular it’d be nice to see this little love story continue. It’s very creative.



Author's Response:

I may come back to these two. For the most part, I just thought it'd be a cute "love conquers all" kinda thing for now

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2023 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

Really enjoyed this story! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2023 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

Love it and hope to see more stories in this world!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the new updates!

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2023 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1- Navel Gazing

Reminds me of 'a new kind of carat' by goddess Lucy. Hope he continues describing some people transfer within a toering

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