Omg, what a wonderful story! I really enjoyed it head to toe, but what else to expect from a Greenanon's story?

I had some different expectations when I first saw Quinn and even thought Derrick was being too naive, but the story went showing little by little their reasons and well, the ending couldn't be better! I also enjoyed how Penelope went to jail in this story, it's pretty rare for evil girls to deal with the consequences of their acts in most stories and this was surely something refreshing lol.

I somehow hoped already for Quinn and derrick forming a couple, but Kelly and Iris was new, and also pretty unexpected, as Kelly had so strong traumas...

The only thing I found a bit out of place is that Kelly and iris' relationship grew a bit too fast, considering the level of Kelly's traumas and previous bad experiences. But I can totally understand, given the format of the story. I'd probably do the same if it was me writing that story (if I had a talent like yours to write, I mean lol!)

Aaaaaaaand... the most important lesson this story tells us: “the cops always come at the end.” Hahaha so true!

This story is great, and I'm impressed with how well it's written. I love the dynamic between the four main characters. The dialogue is charming and comes off natural. The characters and their relationships develop at satisfying pace, and it's fun seeing them play into the size fetish stuff (especially Quinn). Thank you for writing this story.

Adding to @greenpeon:

And when Quinn kidnaps Derrek, Mallory saves him from her cruel sister and they live happily ever after. Alternative timeline story ready, now only need someone*tries to wink* to write it.

Oh god, I love Mallory. It's the first chapter she's introduced in yet she already tries to save Derrek from her evil sister. If she will ever have a tiny boyfriend she'd surely be on the teasing -gentle side.

OMG, That was and amazing chapter! Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole read. I actually got goosebumps reading the ending of this chapter. I am looking forward to more from this story. 

Great Story and love this development. Looking forward to see where this will take us.

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Imagine all physical activities the idol could do with all people who adore her and are willing to shrink for her. She also may pick one who performs better to stay after the fan meeting to "improve fan-idol relationship".

I honestly couldn't think of much else to make this better, I'm eagerly awaiting more. 

Your whole character interaction is so life-like and exactly what you want to hear when reading. It's just so natural. 

Great story so far, I especially love the world-building and pop culture references.  As a college student, It is easy to imagine a class surrounding this world's new rules regarding things like consent.  Also, I imagine that some of the college students would use politically correct terms like persons experiencing shrinking, rather than tinies.  I'm also interested in if celebrities or content creators also shrunk.  

In the beginning, it's hard to root for Quinn, since she's doing and planning acts that would be considered horrible by most people.  But since she and Derrick's relationship has reached a new milestone, I expect that too improve.  I like the size of the tinies become.   I really enjoy the pacing of the story, and how it cuts to the next events.

I really like how it doesn't go straight into erotic acts, and first introduces people.  I hope to see more of Penelope, Iris, and the RA girl.  All in all a great story and the first one I read of this author.

I just thought of something. Imagine some F/F couple that is really into size play and both can shrink. They'll probably have history of surviving together during the 'No cure' days.

F/M will also work but F/F should be more interesting