Date: December 29 2022 11:53 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
Not a review, just a reply to your reply, haha.
Thanks for stumbling across my old work. I'd taken most of that story down at one point, but you reminded me to put it back. Consider it thanks for your story, haha.
Author's Response:
Woah, there's way more than I would have expected, awesome! Already read through a couple more, good stuff. Thanks, more than a fair trade~
Date: December 29 2022 2:14 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
Absolutely great. Both chapters are wonderful. I would like to see more like chapter 2, even a continuation of the story of those trapped in the gum months down the line.
All I can say is "more more more!"
Author's Response:
Wowsers, I'm hearing from all kinds of good writers on this one~ I actually just found your story 'the greatest plans' this month, it was really good even at only two chapters!
Glad you liked it! If other people do too, I think I'll do a similar chapter following at least two more characters, have a pretty good idea what will happen to the first one... I love the idea of continuing the gum part after they're really beat up, definitely potential there. Might be fun to have little check-ins with any tinies that get... trapped somewhere, after a while... Bwaha
Don't think I'll run out of steam for a while so you'll get your wish ^.^
Date: December 28 2022 9:02 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
Glad I could be of inspiration! And am looking forward to more if you decide to contine it :)
Undeserving carefree with massive power over tiny germ sized people is best
Author's Response:
Wow, wasn't expecting for you to read it, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope one day you'll enjoy it as much as I've enjoyed yours~
Totally agree! I want to keep her totally carefree, playfully wrecking their lives without even thinking about it ^.^
[Report This]Date: December 27 2022 11:15 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
Absolutely loved this!!!!! I half expected AV/CV given the name, but maybe we can see that in the future!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it so much! ^.^ The name is mostly a reference to her theme song in the newest game, but if it continues I have a feeling they'll be trapped inside more than just her foreskin bwaha
[Report This]Date: December 27 2022 8:14 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
I would like to see a sequel actually. This was really nice and I feel like I don't see stories get this nasty often lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, glad you enjoyed. I feel like there haven't been many nasty stories on here, it was always a small ratio but it feels like it's decreased a bit recently... Glad I can fill the role, been a while since I posted anything.
I like your small mishaps story BTW, it's nice. I wonder if I read something by you on writing.com, might have been just a similar name though.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2022 6:15 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
Move on over a tomboy’s planet now we got a transgirl’s planet. As someone who loves both of the two inspirations, I love this story soooo much! Would pretty much be a crime not to continue so please do. As for suggestions hmmmm would be interesting if she shares her world with her friends or finds some way to communicate with them. Those would certainty be ways to enhance the playtime. :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha, glad you enjoyed it so much~ glad you like the inspirations as well, I think they're pretty sweet obviously, tomboy's is one I found myself coming back to thanks to the simple and teasing writing style, hopefully I captured that a bit. Maybe I should do a bit more detailed sections about the perspectives of some of the people on the planet too...
Anyway, wouldn't want to be a criminal so I'm leaning towards continuing :) I do think those ideas are good, might save friends for a bit later but some way to communicate can definitely help, I'll have to think of how I'd like that to go... and how she might respond if they do get a chance to talk back, of course. Thanks for the suggestions~
Date: December 27 2022 3:03 PM Title: The World Inside... My Foreskin?
I definitely love this story and hope for a continuation:3
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading~