[Report This]Date: July 18 2022 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Big is Good
A very nice and hot story! Brilliant idea for the title and growth.
I loved how she swallowed the guy at the beginnging and the pussy crush! Those buildings going down her later were really hot too. Now, I read it quite a while ago, so I can't list everything I liked, but it was a great quick city rampage.
I would personally love to see some perspective from her throat when she swallowed and maby the massacre inside her stomach!
Weren't there more reviews here before? Well, hopefully mine will help!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.
Looking back, I think you’re right, I definitely should have added a few more perspectives from the people entering her body. I’ll keep it in mind for future stories!
Date: June 15 2022 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Big is Good
Yes! Please continue
Hope she grows to giga size
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm considering this story concluded for the moment, but I'll introduce even larger scales in some other stories I'm writing.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2022 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Big is Good
Great wordplay and smut. The plot's structure has some confusing bits. Got stuck wondering who's David, and did she swallow the short blonde guy at 10ft? Overall, a good story nonetheless!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've tried to keep this story as short as I could, so there probably isn't as much explanation as there could be. The next chapter may help explain things a bit more though.