Date: February 24 2022 6:29 AM Title: Break Off
Hey this is a great start, hope to see a lot more before I can give a proper review.
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! I'll look forward to that review once I push this story a bit more forwards!~
- Ellenoire <3
Date: February 23 2022 5:40 PM Title: Break Off
Again, great work! I can tell this story will probably be a killer one. The thing I like most is that there seems to be a proper focus on the characters themselves and they seem to act and react relatively realistic given the situation. And without that realism, I wouldn't really care about any graphic/lude stuff that comes next (anyone can write semi good lude stuff alone).
I hope you continue with the realistic approach to the characters, cause if you get that right, you're bound to have an amazing story!
Author's Response:
Hah! Great to see you've stuck around! I'm pretty happy to see someone appreciate the effort I've put into the realism as, I was assured it would be my downfall. Didn't know if the development of the characters would truly interest anybody, or if they'd rather a story that swiftly gets to the point, but as you can see I'd opted for the former. As I see it, getting a feel for their personalities is what makes the further lewd interactions that much more intriguing. I hope not to disappoint with what I have in store for the future of this story~
- Ellenoire <3
[Report This]Date: February 23 2022 10:51 AM Title: Break Off
Hey Ellenoire, I just read your story and I simply HAVE to give you these five stars, I'd give more if I could!
I mean, your world building is exceptional, and made me feel everything the characters are feeling. The descriptions are just fine, showing me anything you wanna show me in its finest details (but without being too detailed it would get boring, like some stories I'd read made me feel, despite well written too...). Your work is just thrilling, and I wish I could write THAT well, like you!
I can't wait to see what happens next and how their relationship grows from now on (considering it'll relit).
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad to see you like my work to that extent~ Having read a good bit of your own beautiful writing, it certainly flatters me for you to hold what I've written so far in such high regard. I hope you stick around to follow the story along, as I'll certainly keep an eye out for pieces of your own!
- Ellenoire <3