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Reviewer: Stelff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2023 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Really good stuff here!

Reviewer: LtShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2022 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

This story was sooooooo gooooodddd!!!!!


All the stuff out in the backayrd was incredible, from Kari sliding down Beccas back into her butt to the mother almost crushing the three girls while doing the weeding. This has to be some of the best unaware garden stuff I have ever read! I would really love to see you do another unaware garden story some day as all the little details for the scale of threats and insignificance of the girls was just... perfect. 

You are such a talented unaware writer 

Reviewer: Flagpole_Sitta97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Loved it, especially the chemistry between all six girls, I really enjoyed the stomach scenes with Kari and Marcia also.

Reviewer: Patrocle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2022 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

very good story, I can't wait to read the rest with parents or mature unconscious giants

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Thanks!  Hope you enjoyed! 

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2022 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

I thought Becca’s friends were gonna shrink a second time to really micro size.  Surprised me when they didn’t but being surprised is always a good thing.



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Thanks! 

Reviewer: A Little Bit of Everything Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2022 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Interesting start. I’m curious to see what happens. May I ask, though, if you are planning to continue your “Block Party” story? I was really excited for that one.



Author's Response:

Thanks, and currently I have no plans on adding to Block Party any time soon.  

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2022 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Interesting chapter. With Becca being hit by the shrink way while Veronica, Maria, and Kari were on her body I thought they would be shrunk down even further. Still good job. With all the talk about sex I hope one or more of them gets caught in the middle of a normal size couple having sex and gets pushed into their womb by the males cum.  Then again with a vore tag I also hope it includes full tour vore with the one (or more) swallowed surviving and coming out the other end. Looking forward to the next chapter. 



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Thank you! 

Reviewer: SWlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2022 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

With this stories focus being shrunken women and with those tags I think I'm going to like this story. Also I hope that part about "riding Ryan's dick" is foreshadowing. Looking forward to what's next



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hope you enjoyed the story! 

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2022 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

It's a good start, looking forward to more



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Thank you, hope you enjoyed!

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