[Report This]Date: November 08 2021 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Prowl
Incredible, super love it. Suggest an X rating though, anything sadistic or cruel often warrants an X rating since everyone has a drastic idea of what an X rating should be for. That's what I do, at least.
As for the half star review, seems unwarranted. I re-read your summary and pretty accurate to me, also, the summary isn't an "advertisement" it is a "summary", so that seems like a POS move to leave a half star because someone simply has the opposing interest of your stories topic.
That being said, Viper, I suggest posting TAGS FOR THIS CHAPTER in the notes for every chapter, so if people see something they don't want to read, they can opt to not read the chapter and you can avoid other morons from leaving ridiculously biased reviews based on self centered interests.
Keep on writing, you're a very good author and I love seeing how much you improve every time I come back! Makes me want to keep working my bunions off myself haha <3
Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2021 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Prowl
This promised to cut down on the sadism, at least from the description.
Nothing of the sort happened. It might not be bad, but it's still false advertising.
Author's Response:
Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.
Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.
Author's Response:
Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.
Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.