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Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2021 4:46 AM Title: City in a Box III

Love the concept of 'City in a Box' esp now that Sophie has met Maria. Wish there was more.

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2021 8:09 PM Title: City in a Box

Wow, these are lovely roleplaying logs - thank you for sharing them! It's definitely interesting seeing how both of you compose solo prose and how that contrasts with collaborative writing like this. Thank again for sharing!

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2021 8:45 PM Title: City in a Box

@Anybody thats because your attention span is too small to appreciate these well written stories.

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Date: January 22 2021 8:43 PM Title: Black Silver

Out of spite to the jackass who review bombed these like a fag, im giving these awesome stories 10/10. Keep up the great work fellas. :)

Reviewer: Asterisk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2021 1:21 AM Title: Black Silver

Was a good time writing these.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 9:51 PM Title: Black Silver II

"The 60-meter tall woman slid her boot[...]" So the duo grew, even if it were merely six meters, since their city-smashing sex in (or rather upon?) Farcay?

Annalisa watched the impact and the castle fall. "You know we technically have to return the princess alive." I thought Jezebel is supposed to be the (occassional) voice of reason in their relationship?

Eating the Princess would've been more impactful if they couldn't ressurect her, but then Jez would probably have merely chewed her near death's door and healed her from that point of total agony.

"And we will return you to the King. Well, at least a copy of you. Its a simple enough task to wipe some peasant, change her appearance and graft a copy of your memories onto her. A copy will be back, safe and sound. Meanwhile you, get to service us for the rest of your natural life." - Wow that's soul-crushing, especially for someone as arrogant and convinced of her own irreplacebility as Princess Astrava. And it just got better until the end.

Given the Princess' rotten personality the replacement will probably rule Reston better than the original would've eventually. The chances to find somebody with just as little empathy seem slim. And neither Anna nor Jez talked about copying her personality into the random peasant girl.

 

I liked the first chapter but I liked this one more for two reasons:

These are:

1. Showing sheer dominance (Arsekaslyx |as I read his name I was certain he would get introduced to some giant's arse btw| and his troops) and mental torment (Astrava) > complete disregard for the others caught up in their imtimacy.

2. I felt a little "cheated" that they didn't leave for their mission of bandit removal, even if the fellowing porn was absolutely worth staying in the city.



Author's Response:

Anna and Jez tend to be pretty delightfully lewd to write whenever we do it. As a personal note, not enough stories do the whole giants fighting other giant creatures and put them in their place. So its always fun to do.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2021 8:47 PM Title: Black Silver

"Many still speak of your grand victory of the great shadow dragon Selithrax in these parts." He said. "I was hoping you could assist us with an infestation of bandits that have set up in a ruined castle nearby...

So they have slain the Shadowdragon? Were was prince Marth if you need him? Or did Annalisa carelessly crushed him and so they had to take over his destiny for a moment? And now they are stuck in New Game Plus totally overpowered hired to take care of some bandits...  I know that's unrelated but the situation just lent itself so good to this joke.

Otherwise, solid giantess couple sex.



Author's Response:

I mean Annalisa steps on a lot of humans carelessly, so its certainly possible Marth was one of them haha. Happy to hear you enjoyed our nonsense though!

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2021 12:25 AM Title: Black Silver

I love Anna's casualness, first when she stepping on marketplaces and fruit carts, then later when she is stomping on homes and families without measuring her footsteps. Jez's courtesy in the beginning was intriging... her winking at the child was unusually hot. But of course, when she casually dropped her sword on some guards... that was awesome... And one of the best parts had to be the victims between Jezebel's legs toward the end. Fantastic work guys, great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it! Honestly weren't 100% sure if we should post these up but hey, even if the format is off figure some folks might enjoy it so went ahead with it.

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