This was a very interesting chapter to say at the latest but I wasn't expecting for Annabelle sister to not be a type 0 as well seeing they both are twins you would think both of them to be type 0 because of it being genetic, as for beth being the commander that was pretty obvious from the start but I really thought she would be like Annabelle as well so that a big surprise, as for bitty I still feel like he going to disobey his commander orders to save Annabelle but learn that her blood already infected a shrink many chapters go aka Rebecca, also i was thinking if Annabelle blood get tested by nami mother which found out about it and Annabelle has a another incident with Rebecca who influenced by her blood, like nami and her sister Nell see a obedient shrink wanting to serve Annabelle because of being influenced by her blood that nami decided to allow Rebecca live as a shrink servant or maid to Annabelle, which would allow Annabelle to have at least one companion even if  said companion is obedient towards her, also i think it would show how danger Annabelle type 0 abilities are to others shrinks and because Annabelle doesn't want any shrinks to die she most likely would use her own blood or her own influence to keep shrinks like Rebecca live if it they get inflection by her, these are just My thoughts.p.s would love to see Annabelle reactions to seeing infected Rebecca again and how Annabelle reactions to her as well as nami and Nell reactions as well 

Would like to write a post where it's more about the story itself than a chapter specifically: 

As for the believability of the story, there is a weak point in my view, but it is very easily remedied by an explanation in the story. 

People take it too easily for granted that the coffins are empty. If the BSA has been running their operation for decades, then it simply can't work that the world takes it for granted that the coffins are empty, no one really asks, there is no research on it. The father is even not really surprised to have lost two daughters in this way.

(But maybe this is explained somewhere and I just missed it)

However, it can be explained by the fact that the same scientists who think that shrunken people are not capable of surviving on their own, also think that the "sudden shrinking" could be intensified by fear of life. With the explanation the world resigned itself why with fake accident places of shrunk ones no corpses can be found. 

According to these scientists, the fear of death should trigger shrinkage, which is why bodies are sometimes not seen at accident sites. However, no evidence can be collected on this, because the experiments on this would be unethical. 

Apart from this, the story seems so frighteningly believable that I could almost believe here secret messages of a person from the upper class are sent. 

Well fuck, we've got quite the little lore dump here.

Artemis joining Jax in the bad ass metal arm club. She was truly brave for risking death amongst drunken sorority chicks to try to rescue her mentor. Many tougher and bigger people have died in that sort of den of terror.

Byte is quite the good kid for being the one to bring Anna being her sister to her attention long before Gray planned to. He's got a seemingly bright future in the resistance if he makes it that long.

The hammer drop was slightly expected by still welcome to see Anna has such a fierce ally in her war against the Foursome. It's gonna take all her sister has to fend off those lionesses when the time comes.

Not sure what she could've done about Zoey though, I don't even think the Foursome would cross her.

As for the dying words I trust her to make the right decision when the time comes. Anna is incredible at holding her own so something tells me she might figure a way out without needing Beth's help or endangering her troops too much.

Beth's a great and necessary character to this tale. She brings the weight of her people's plight vs saving her flesh and blood from a nightmarish hellscape. Seemingly whatever side she choices will come with immense hardships and perils in her life.

Gosh. This one is truly one of the best stories of giantessworld!

I'm really sorry Anna. She has lost so many things already, and every day she continues to lose more and more. I'm starting to fear that in the end she can even lose herself too.

I also really like the way you've done the giantesses. Each of them has an interesting character, and at times you can even feel sympathy for them. In another life they could even be good people, but unfortunately their parents brought up such an attitude towards the world in them.

I really want Anna to have at least one ray of light in this impenetrable darkness... And that's why I can't stop reading. I'm very interested in how her story will end.

Thank you for your hard work!

Hey Guys quick update,

Got a lot of writing done this weekend. I'll be writing throughout the week when I have time. I think you guys are really going to enjoy this chapter. The plot is really coming together.

Thanks as always for your patience :)

--WOP

Monsters is really the best word to describe the governor and it’s friends/family. They fucking ate children! Did the giantesses participate in that? If so, I would prefer cutting my own head off than ever imprinting on any of them. Leah’s chapters managed to really made me understand this feeling of dread and fear Anna has when confronted with the giantesses, so much so she is comming back to some old habbits... not that other chapters didn’t but... they fucking ate children!!

And Toe Jam... talk about being indoctrinated, but I guess anyone would become strange if your own mother wanted to kill you and your best friend enslaved you... Monsters. Oh but Leah cried and she couldn’t get rid of Toe Jam... FUCK THAT! Anna is right, she stripped her of any sense of self, she treated her as a thing!! Monster.

Sorry for ranting, but, as I said, Leah’s chapter was heavy and eliminated any sympathy I could ever feel for her as a reader... so I must ask: did all the giantesses ate children like her parents?

I even wish Toe Jam had touched some of Anna’s blood. She would be better off worshipping Annabelle. On that note, Toe Jam interactions with her and Annabelle scenes as a giantess were the best, the highlight of these last two chapters. The dream scene was as perfect as ever and it made me wonder if the 4 co-ed also ever dreamed of Anna as a massive giantess. The irony: the BSA top dreaming of being the size of a speck.

About Oliver I simply can’t bear to think Anna will end up with a man, and this chapter is a warning: Byte will betray her as Oliver did. No. Anna has to open and come to fall in love with a giantess.  Only then she will really find balance as a tiny – she will feel safe but also free. A difficult task even if she wasn’t the size she is.  

There is more I wish to talk... about Naomi, about Poppy and how Annabelle did not forget her real name during the imprints (thanks God. Annabelle is such a beautiful name, much better than Poppy), but I will leave that for another comment.

Yes, I hate Leah and no, I don’t feel sympathetic towards her because of her mother, since she was also part of the BSA (probably choose to mary the governor because of that).

Great chapter, I can’t wait for Naomi and Nell next. For holding own to her kindness, Annabelle is the true goddess of this story.

Okay so the Leah chapter is here and is every bit as glorious as I have expected. It tell us that Leah, after losing her mother at such a young age and then "losing" her friend, one to a disease and other to what she perceives is a disease, has some horrible trust issues and in general anxiety over diseases so is no wonder that a small person, genetically made to adore her and love her unconditionally who is virtually immortal is a dream come true for her. Despite looking the most confident of the group she is actually the most insecure, and her possessiveness makes a lot of of sense now. She is terrified of losing the people she loves.

And with that it also comes the weird relationship she has with her father where apparently they see each other as equals and compete fiercely over anything and everything which...could be good if you see it as a sign of respect, and I'm sure Leah sees it this way but to me competing with your child like that is just...not good parenting. You are essentially bullying them, and telling them you are not and will never be a parental figure to be trusted, but a rival and for a girl that lost her mother I say she needs a parental figure more than a rival.

I think is interesting that it gives the society of shrinkie haters an extra dimension. They see shrinkism as a tragedy or horrible disease, to the point a mother would be willing to kill her own beloved child over it. Reminds me of people that would want a dead child rather than an alive gay or trans child and it makes them seem more real in a very sad way. The toe jam revelation says a lot about them and how they are and behave.

Also, I'm kind of happy Leah did what she did with whatshisface because I really, really, reaaaaally didn't care for him. As a love interest he is like bland and uninteresting. I'm sorry because I love all your characters and I know you put a lot of effort in writing them!But I really hopes he never comes back. Also, I LOVED that Leah heard Anabelle singing and I dont know if I want her keeping the recording to herself or if I want her to share.

Also like someone before me commented I dont want anyone to get their just desserts. For me the ideal endings are Anabelle imprinting in one or all of the girls and remain more or less herself and actually learn to love one or all of the girls, or for the girls to organize a coup and throw over their parents. That would be fun. But then again I have always vouched for the imprinting ending

     Well first of all welcome  back.  This chapter was amazing.  Leah has been one of my main contenders since i first started reading this story, and this chapter did not disapoint.

     Leah is probably the most selfish and and cold heart bitch of the 4.  I am not surprised that she would use Oliver that way, but damn how that played out still hurt.  I did at first think that he may have hdd, but then even worse i thought he might have leahs sensibilities where shrunken are concerned, damn that he gave up the music for only 5 grand, i get why he did, but damn dude.  I was right about Leah being extremely possive.  Damn girl owns her former best friend ( though honestly i want to really want to know whats in her head, cause i dont know if i fully buy her statement about how she see Toejam ( and damn poor girl has completely bought into their ideas)).  This chapter kinda made is clear that their is very little hope of Leah coming around to thinking of letting her go now, or changing her thinking on shrunken in general.  Damn her dad and prob her mom to. 

    I also caught that statement about Annebells mom, damn that sucks, I really cant wait for Annebells story.   But at this point i dont know how she will react when she finds out her sister is alive (probably), I mean she has thought her sister dead for ten years or more at this point, and her sister never contacted her, yea Annebell is not going to probably take that well at all.  Another person who has either abbandoned her or failed her, or turned on her, and whats worse is it is her sister ( who she has kinda put on a pedestal).  So yea that will be a very interesting encounter that i am looking forward to. 

    You know if the 4 were just a little different Annebell would have all but fallen for them i think, She is so starved for real love.  That is one of the reasons i think she may be succombing and that wierd imprint stage where she is annebell and not, ( also damn Leah for trying to take advantage of that, but fully within her character to),  Is that she has acknowledged on some lvl that these girls actually value her and she is being drawn to that like a moth to a flame.  Damn if they had got her away from the massacre she would belong to one if not all 4 for sure.  Also I caught that statement that she maybe imprinting on all 4 of them, i want to know how the girls will handle that if it is true, which what i have been rooting for from the beggining.  

Well this was a treat.  Up to this point I felt like Leah was my least favorite of the main 4 giantesses, but this chapter may have changed that.  Not because I like her anymore as a person, obviously, but this chapter just hit so many emotionally complex notes that I love in shrinking fiction.  I loved Annabelle clawing her way back from her temporary episode, and I felt for her during that ending segment.  She had me going for a moment, I thought she really was unfazed by Leah's evil ploy, now I just feel for her.

Love learning about Annabelle's past from before she shrunk.  Would one day hope to see her with Zelda or Zoey but not sure if the story will go that way, but I find her old life interesting.

Poor Toe Jam too, I felt a little bad for her before, now I really do.  I feel for her so much, I really hope she gets a happy ending.  I mean, I hope everyone outside of the BSA gets one for that matter.

Anyways, thank you for the update, I look forward to the next.

Glad to hear projects are going well, Thankyou for the update and where u are with next chapter, for me 20,000+ words is fine, one thing I love about this story is the length of each chapter, it goes so fast no matter how long it is.