So so good.....u can't spank me lil daddy ! Like to have seen an accidental erection that she may or may not saw which is in her wine haze.....but somehow she feels the power from not being spanked...please write as much as u can when u can ...thanks so much 

Just perfect....wonder if some one will get a spanking hehehe ! 

Please write more soon this is the best story on the site !

I finished catching myself up on this. I know I haven't commented yet, so I'll be changing that as this story updates more often. For now I just want to say you have an incredibly detailed and well developed writing style. Your descriptions are spot on and paint a vivid picutre of everything that's happening. I especially love the characters, and how likeably they are. I've always loved character development, even and especially in fetish stories. I'm more invested in the actual kinks when I know and like the characters. 

Your story is a slow paced one, which I can't fault you for. It's whats allowed me to like the characters in the first place. But I am itching to see what action will come of this later. Feet action has been teased, which I'm eager for. And I'm very interested in the slave tag. Now let me be clear, I love Jessie's personality, and I don't want to see her lose that. However, that's what makes her the kind of character I want to see be served by others. The gentle and graceful Queen. Someone who smiles down on her tiny subjects as they kiss her feet and pats them on the head and tells them good job. I don't know if that's what you have planned for her and her dad, but you have it set up perfectly for that outcome.

But in the end it's your story, and you need to write it to be the way that you want it to be. I know there's a few stories of mine I wish I could go back and redo, but they are what they are, and I've only learned from it. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what becomes of Jessie and her dad by the end of this.

The birth of a Queen

Great chapter. I loved the difference between the friends and how they treat a shrunken person. Can't wait to see where that goes 

Excellent ! 

Oh darn I was so hoping she was blossoming into a D cup lol

Sore back cause somebodies breasts r getting bigger n heavier !!!!!!!!!

Ur the best ! 

I dont see a pic or illustration just a box n the word "description" is it just my ipad or is something up.....would love to see the illustration

Story is definitely a slow burn but is written so well that I'm hooked. I would like to see a little more suggestive material. I think some interactions that would be good would be dad doing the laundry and picking up laundry from his daughters room. Would be fun to picture the messy room as he navigates his way through huge shoes and piles clothes adding to the laundry basket. Large leggings and shorts and then very large bras and undies. Would live to see tye daughter come in while he's staring at the large underwear before putting it in the basket. Would like to see how she responds, does she say something, is she mad or does she think it's funny, or does she say nothing and just take note mentally. 

Down the line when he is smaller I think a cool way to move things would be for her to catch him masturbating. She could be mad at first, but maybe she the realizes that he has needs and she is the only female he can be around other than her friends. Because she will not trust him with anyone else. So maybe she cuts him some slack and throws him a peek every now and then.

Just my thoughts.