Reviews For The Micro City
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Reviewer: JinchuurikiJay26 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2021 5:20 AM Title: Prologue - The Set-Up

A thousand apologies for being so beyond late in giving my reviews for this story. As you already know Skulldeath50 both your micro city stories has been my all time favorite story on this site. And this 1st chapter exemplifies why. Starting off with the character of Mabry who like Kate from your original Micro City story was EASILY the best thing about it. That type of girl who is pretty but her body functions, eating patterns, manners, and etc are anything but is just AWESOME ! Having that overwhelmingly fat ass that jiggles from absolutely everything, her farting literally 24/7, and her colon being a wasteland that now harbors New York City is why your the best ! 

Giving some comments on the other subjects of this first chapter, love that she shares a bed with her two other roomates, love that Amari is another big butted girl who reacts terribly to dairy and other food items, love that Danica is a sweaty girl with bad gas. Super love that Mabry watches friends while eating chilly with her chubby stomach out. All that is the reasons why you are the best ! 

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2020 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Shows We Watch, The Farts We Brew

great!!!

Reviewer: Brosus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2020 2:41 PM Title: Prologue - The Set-Up

Man, I keep coming back to this. This is one of the best stories on the site, I really hope you continue it. If you need any help or want to chat feel free to send me an email. Great shit man, your first story was great but this is even better man.



Author's Response:

Thank you, the encouragement means so much to me right now! I've been having some medical complications, which is why I haven't been able to upload recently, but I've been given enough time now to continue and end this story in the near future. Thank you once again, and alternatively, if you have any specific scenarious you really want to have in this story, shoot me up an email and I'll see what I can do. The more ideas the better! :) 

Reviewer: nononon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2020 5:38 PM Title: Prologue - The Set-Up

Very good plot and situation
I hope you write more unaware butt focus story

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2020 12:50 PM Title: Prologue - The Set-Up

I love this!

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2020 12:50 PM Title: Prologue - The Set-Up

I love this!

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