[Report This]Date: May 16 2020 8:03 AM Title: Bursting Her Bubble
I really enjoyed this! Your form is superbly easy to follow, and the content is delightful to ingest. It’s never occurred to me what a good vehicle for unaware vore boba tea could be! And the fact that Elizabeth “blessed” unwilling tributes to her beloved is just so tantalizingly twisted. I love it.
The arc of this story kept me guessing until close to the end, and I rather enjoy that. Way to steer clear of being to predictably formulaic. While I was able to guess who would end up drinking that last tea based on your reuse of the epithet, “the prettiest girl in the cafe,” I did not guess who would end up in it, and that was quite the satisfying surprise to say the least. What a darkly poetic dose of justice!
Your descriptions are compelling, the characters interesting, and the plot and execution stimulating. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Please write more!
Author's Response:
This comment means a lot to me! Thank you very much. I have another story in the works so you won't have long to wait!
[Report This]Date: May 15 2020 5:55 AM Title: Bursting Her Bubble
I love this! Partly due to the uniqueness and how well done this story is. I kind of have a bubble tea fetish so I would love to see my stories like this. Personally I did not like that the woman shrinking others was shrunk too and died, but that’s just personally preference.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Bubble tea is fun because you can totally picture where all those spheres are when the cup's empty!