[Report This]Date: August 14 2023 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
The stories where a country is defeated and then sold as a war trophy to the victors are not very common unfortunately :(
There are two details that I personally would have changed
1 - the name Imperial City, since if China, Mexico, etc. exist, the logical thing in my opinion would have been to use the real names of the defeated cities (although it may be controversial)
2- The temporary location; Instead of 2155, perhaps it is better to introduce a parallel universe to ours and not specify the year they are in, these invaders come from their own 21st century and that is why they have more advanced technology than ours... also if they can invade and shrink countries in many universes there will be a greater offer of cities and more women like Camila will have what they deserve :)
Date: September 16 2022 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Starts bc 4
[Report This]Date: July 31 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very nice! Please continue!
The people of the city might not be happy with Camila taking all their food, but at least they can get some of that food back after it has worked its way through her guts. The city should be producing a lot of food which Camila can sell and make a lot of money, but a small amount of it she could eat herself, and then give it back to the city in the form of her waste.
Of course this first load she dropped on them is her own food that she ate and her body digested for them. You wrote that she ate Cauliflower. Hopefully the citizens of the city like pre-digested Cauliflower because that will be there meal now. :)
Date: May 24 2020 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
love this. i hope she keeps carelessly doing things like spiting and leting her family play with them.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and her family interacting with the City is also planned!!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2020 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Looking forward to the continuation of this story. While Camila gradually becomes a business tycoon by leveraging the city, maybe one of her first business ventures is to open up the worlds most luxurious spa, staffed of various sized workers and of course a full service mani/ pedi projects that rival the pyramids. Her clientele having a divine satisfaction knowing their rivals are toiling away and eating their toe jam. Her citizen could also construct a massive advanced dildo capable of receiving all her recycled bodily functions including cum when the mood strikes her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback, these are some nice ideas to progress the story in later chapters for sure.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2020 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so happy you're still writing this, I was afraid it would be discontinued. I'm especially excited about the idea of the city as a toe ring, I hope that becomes a reality from time to time. I imagine Camila should be able to adjust the sizes of the individual citizens as a way to punish and reward them. I have this thought of her appearing as a hologram in some guy's bedroom and demanding he jerk off to her while she gives him a striptease, shrinking him little by little the more he refuses and the longer it takes him to cum. On the other hand, she could enlarge some lucky women who play along to serve as enforcers for her rule. I'm anticipating at some point that Camila will be taking people out of the city and have them servicing her, performing chores and exploring her body as she resizes them at will.
I'm not a scat person myself but I do enjoy the humiliation and how she's already demonstrated just a tiny fraction of her immeasurable power. I also like how she's so far shown herself to be a relatively sensible human being towards her formerly fascist and racist subjects, not simply outright obliterated everyone like a psychopath. I think she should keep it low key from the public at first, try to remain anonymous, but I also really hope before long we see Camila shrinking down people from the regular world and humiliating those who once towered over her with her godlike power. I'd love to see lots of slow, gradual shrinking step by step, already having control even when her victims are still giga giants compared to the tiny city, and making sure they know just how small they're going to get by the end while realizing they're powerless to resist. Maybe some gentle erotic stuff too if she has friends into boobs, feet, butts and other stuff, while showing them what she does with those who displease her.
I like how Camila can resize the city at will. She should find a big open space and enlarge it to a few hundred feet to host a yoga class in there, maybe shrink down some perverts who come to harass and make them tiny pets to the little Imperial citizens. Maybe in the very late game she discovers her city is glitched and she can conquer the whole solar system? Start off discovering she can grow herself and go out as a tall girl a few times, then start experimenting with how big she can get in isolated places until she figures out there doesn't seem to be a limit as long as the city grows with her. In the meantime, perhaps she can start mounting a crusade against lawlessness and criminal cartels, shrinking down seedy bars full of rapists and entire compounds to add to her collection or dispose of at will.
Sorry if it feels like I'm trying to set the narrative, I just want to toss out some ideas in case some of them stick, I think you have a really great setup here.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for this great feedback, I am glad you enoy the story so far.
And indeed, theer are lots of similar ideas to the ones you exposed that I also have to continue the story; shrinking people from the outside and place them inside the city to force them to serve her, as well as enlarge some of her shrunken slaves to serve her in the real size world is definitively in the agenda for later chapters.
Also, if the story has a good reception, I plan to make sequels, just like Batman Arkham Games, if Camila already have a City, she can later find a way to own a Country or a Continent and so on.
Date: May 20 2020 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for this great story!
I love the scenario and the attitude of the giants! It's wonderfull! Shrunken cities a really hot and there aren't a lot of stories like this one. The best part about it is the focus on scat and piss and even the spit part was awesome!
I hope their will be much more destruction and humiliation by mumdane and gross acts. Sweat, piss, shit, cum can't wait until they have to deal with this at their size:)
Please keep going! I can't wait to read more from you;)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your support and good feedback, glad you enjoy the story!!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2020 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this so much!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot!!!
[Report This]Date: April 24 2020 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
The story is going in an excelent way, the world building is very consistent, I can't wait to see how evolves Camila's attitude towards the city.
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the positive feedback. Next episode will be more giantess focused
Date: April 23 2020 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
The third chapter was absolutely excellent, I can't wait to see the next part. Hope you are enjoying what you are doing, because it is really great.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the great feedback!! Hope we all enjoy the story!
Date: April 17 2020 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is a great start. I am hoping She will be God to her new city. I think the whole deity angle is the best. Maybe she could refer to herself as God? I think that is the perfect name to represent the power she will have
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot.
In fact this is exactly the spot I want to reach, and this is why the name of the story is a "pun" between the name of the protagonist "Camila" and "Kami" = "God"
Date: April 16 2020 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi!, I'm very excited for this story, I agree with the previous commentaries, you are giving it a very plausible background story, I can't wait to see how it evolves, I would like too to know in who you are basing Kamila character ;)...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive feedback! And well... every muse is inspired by reality at some degree...
[Report This]Date: April 15 2020 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Before I forget, might I also suggest that Kamila be able to interface with the city and its surveillance apparatii through some sort of neural uplink, since it is the 22nd century after all. She should be able to project holograms of herself at various sizes to interact with and taunt her tiny captives. Imagine an ant-sized hologram appearing 50 feet tall to a bunch of little specks on her toenail, commanding them to lick its surface while the real giantess gloats over them miles overhead!
Author's Response:
Of course theer are several fantastic licences we can take due to the technology available in the age of the story, there are plenty of chanaces for that, and of course I will take in count your feedback
Thanks a lot !
[Report This]Date: April 15 2020 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad you're taking it slowly, I love it when the story attempts to build a whole world around the scenario. The setup you describe seems a lot more believable than most shrunken city stories, you're doing a good job making it seem plausible. I imagine either Kamila is an extremely wealthy girl, or else she's an ordinary middle class girl who won the city in a lottery of some sort. If it's the latter, it would be awesome for her to surprise her friends and start shrinking them down to various sizes, threatening to transfer them to the city if they fail to cooperate with her plans.
It looks like the action is picking up, I can't wait until Kamila gets her city!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great feedback!
As a matter of fact, I already had some of these planned!!!
[Report This]Date: April 14 2020 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued. Please continue!
Author's Response:
thanks for the support
[Report This]Date: April 13 2020 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
The premise seems very promising. I personally hope Kamila has a device of her own to mess with people's sizes, so she can grow slaves to more manageable sizes to worship her, or shrink annoying people and ex-boyfriends to be tiny slaves to the microscopic New Yorkers. She could enlarge the city to a few hundred feet and romp through it like Godzilla, then shrink it down to a toe ring size and make them watch some 3 foot guy making love to her feet before she makes him even tinier than them! I especially like the concept of her being able to observe and communicate with the citizens through her camera system, hope she fucks with them a lot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback I appreciate it