Date: July 07 2024 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
Keep things more intimate, without major destruction or anything similar, involve other characters but don't go into absurd situations, I think what's cool and different about this story compared to "growth potential" is this more intimate thing, but right, this It's just my opinion, you're the author I'm just the reader
Date: December 02 2020 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Cheers
Really like what you've written so far. Growth potential was one of my favourites and I echo the previous reviewer's comment that my favourite scene was Ben's dream of the giant couple having their way with the tinies. Hope we can see some similar action in this story!
Author's Response:
Well I'm not sure. This one's a little more gentle, though I really prefer darker themes. I might just toss a giant couple having their way type story in "One Shots." I'm not even necessarily against doing a non-canon Growth Potential chapter in One Shots that continues to explore that territory. How does that sound?
[Report This]Date: August 28 2020 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
Sorry it took me so long to get to this, considering I'm the one who kept imploring you to write more. You'd think I'd be more on top of things like this.
Anyway those chapters gave me exactly what I was looking for. Some nice and sexy playing around with the tiny one, and Kat reveling in her power. And I like the direction you're eventually going to take it in, with Kat outgrowing Blake and being the most powerful of the two. I hope she doesn't have the same kind of god-complex Heather had in GP. I enjoy it when giantesses enjoy their power, and get turned on by it, but I stop enjoying it when they stop seeing the tinies as people. That's where the gentle giantess lover in me takes over.
Once again I'm not going to tell you how to write your story. Only you can write it as best as it possibly could be, so I won't even try. But I would like to mention something from GP that I absolutely loved that you could possibly include in this story, or maybe not. It's all up to you. My favorite chapter in GP was the one where Ben had a dream that Heather and Jason were mega giants and had sex while using tiny people for pleasure. I love the descriptions in that chapter. Very well done, and hot. If you're ever debating with yourself what kind of fetish material should be included at certain parts as you're writing this, maybe that could be one of them. I'd like to read something like that again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. It is a gentle story and these two are not living weapons. It'll take a long time to get this one written but I think you'll be mostly satisfied with the direction it goes.
Date: July 13 2020 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Cheers
Love the story, especially how playful Kat is. Also not sure if anyone's ever mentioned it but I love the little bits of humour you sprinkle into your stories too!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: July 13 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
'Hope you're enjoying this so far. Lemme know what you think! How crazy do you want this thing to get? Keep it small, keep it intimate or go all out NWO hijinks?'
Why not both? Maybe they could decide to mess with exes and / or have an 'ant farm of people. Realize that day dreaming about killing is different than actually doing it and decide not to... until they get caught shrinking people and the only way out is to get BIG. And then its all in.
I'd like it if they don't develop an adversarial relationship with each other over time and if more time and size were spent on Kat. Goddess Queen of Earth and all she surveys, first of her name. Growth Potential always gave way too much time and size to Jason for my taste.
Author's Response:
Yup, yup, all good ideas right there.
Date: July 13 2020 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
Keep it small. But I would love a threesome between the two. With Lucas stuck in the middle. Or him stuck with kat and Blake while they work out. Love this story
Date: July 08 2020 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Breakfast in Bed
Yay glad you are back. Looking forward to more of this great story.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2020 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 - It's All Real
Any chance this is going to continue? i can't wait to see what kind of action comes out of this story
Author's Response:
If I get an opportunity I would love to post some updates. Thanks for checking in.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2020 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 - It's All Real
Always love some couple content, very much apperciated. You've got my attention man, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2020 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Cheers
I think this is a good set up to a story with a great premise. I really enjoyed your story Growth Potential. Your writing quality is some of the best I've read. Everything is detailed and laid out like it's coming from a book. The descriptions paint a vivid picture making it easy to follow along, and your fetish scenes are highly attractive. The only complaint I could bring against it is less of a flaw and more of a personal thing. I like gentle giants. Playful is one thing, but I still like all parties involved to be willing and able throughout the whole thing. THIS story looks like it's going to be right up my alley, so I'm looking forward to what comes next.
As someone who writes stories on this site I don't like to push things on other authors because I know that you have a set vision in mind for your story, and trying to mess with that would only detract. I can't write your own story better than you, so don't feel like you have to include anything I bring up. But I like in depth characters to balance out the fetish material. And these characters raise some questions in my mind. Blake and Katherine seem like they could be the kind of couple who could have anyone they want for a toy, even without shrinking powers. What's their history with Lucas? Why are they such good friends with him when normally they'd seem like the kind of people far out of his league? I love it when characters like Blake and Katherine aren't superficial and are friends with quality people rather than shallow people, but I'd like to know why he's so close with them. How much do they really care about him? Was Katherine genuine when she said that Lucas is like family to them? Was she just manipulating him? Would they be at all concerned if his life was ever put in jeprody?
I only ask these questions because I like to put myself in the main character's POV and if I were Lucas I'd want to make sure beyond all doubt that the people whose hands I'm putting my life into genuinely care about me.
Anyway I'll try to keep the comments shorter in the future. I just like high quality stories that are both really hot, and make me think about things. When I start thinking I can end up rambling. Keep up the good work and I'll keep my eyes out for more chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your thoughts, feel free to be as long or short as you like. It honestly gives me a lot to think about as a writer, seeing how people analyze what I've put out. Granted, this is a fetish site and not a book club, but I do like to put thought into what I write.
Anyway, yes, I plan to unfold details of their friendship as the story progresses. That said, I don't want this story to devolve into "they were sociopaths the whole time," which is VERY TEMPTING TO DO of course, haha. They care about Lucas. He cares about them. Their friendship is real. That doesn't mean there aren't ulterior motives though...
Thanks again for feedback. Always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Cheers
Potential. Thank You!
Date: March 26 2020 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Cheers
This may have nothing to do with the story, but the three worst places for a tiny man to be in a threesome are
3. In the girl's butt
2. In the girl's butt while she is getting anal
1. In the guy's butt