Reviewer: JRamos Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2020 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was so good!! Thank you for deciding to give storywriting a go, I'm sure it made a lot of people on here happy.

I especially loved how into it she was and that eating them wasn't simply a means of getting rid of them!

Just like another reviewer on here, I was also sad to see that this was the end of the story! Can't wait for your next one though :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I was going for a more self contained narraive for my first entry here, I'm gonna write more stories like this one in the future :D

Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2020 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well now you've done it. You can't make a story this good and with everything I love and not get my attention. Good fantasy setup, especially for a giantess story? Check. Vore? Check. Elven giantess? X) you're killing me here.

While the concept does seem pretty self contained (this seems to be a freak encounter not a regular occurence) I would love to see more from this world. The subtle worldbuilding in the history, the relationships between elves and humans, a lot of things to work with.

For the story itself, just loved it, straight up, everything about it. Marrick's occupation crossed with his personality was a great use of the scoundrel with the heart of gold while Rhian was just a delight. From her introduction, even the simple line that the look in her eyes said she'd kill them all if she wasn't tied up, coming back to pay off, honestly just kept me on edge for Marrick the entire time cause like him, I didn't know how he'd come out at the end of the story. Really great stuff. I am likewise sad to see this completed but it was a worthwhile read. 

I will admit, I'd been writing something with a similiar premise a while back and so reading the beginning kept confusing me because I was just like, "wait, is this that story I was writing?" XD Excellent first story for a declared lurker. Very much enjoyed it and will now be on the lookout for anything from you in the future.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! I wrote in that world building stuff and character depth because I found that it makes stories more entertaining and gives a lot more flavor to the giantess and vore stuff that I like. I also love writing fantasy stuff because to be honest there aren't nearly enough of them around. As for the premise, I wanted something somewhat unique and I'm glad you see that I pulled it off. I'm writing a new story as we speak and I hope it's to your liking :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! I wrote in that world building stuff and character depth because I found that it makes stories more entertaining and gives a lot more flavor to the giantess and vore stuff that I like. I also love writing fantasy stuff because to be honest there aren't nearly enough of them around. As for the premise, I wanted something somewhat unique and I'm glad you see that I pulled it off. I'm writing a new story as we speak and I hope it's to your liking :)