Date: March 08 2024 11:26 PM Title: Start
I would love a new chapter so much
Date: January 11 2023 5:36 PM Title: Start
This is great, another fan that would like it to continue. Really like how she had the friend complete the request unaware. More from the original girl, unaware, scat, pee, feet. Please don't let this story die
Date: November 25 2021 4:36 PM Title: Start
Will this stoy be ever continued? I really liked it!!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2020 12:24 AM Title: A horrible mistake
I hope this story gets continued! I'd love to be back in Natalie's world!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment. I will be continuing the story very few. But first I want to write a shor story to get into writing again
Date: February 16 2020 8:46 AM Title: A horrible mistake
I have discovered today this story and i readed all the chapters.
I have to say that i like the idea of normal woman becoming giantesses at request. The whole idea is hot. The power exchange associated is perfect. Especially how they grow comfortable being giantesses.
Im more a "gentle/playfull" giantess fan, so there are some parts, such as scat, that i havent enjoyed. However, I love feet, so i loved chapter 2. The way that the mere presence of Natalie's feet can change the weather is thrilling.
What i enjoy more about your story is the character building. We can see how Natalie is feeling when she is dominating, how she is concerned about user's reviews. I think that all of these make Natalie more "human".
She is not the tipical character that once embraces being a giantess, stops developing. I hope you keep the "humanity" of your characters, so we can see them losing. I mean, i hate when the main character always wins. I like to see their humanity, so they can be concerned, afraid, happy, playfull and so.
What i like most of your story is the power exchange factor. You have Natalie who's an average woman. At the moment she uses the app she becomes a giantess goddess. But everything happens because a user wants it to happen. And when it ends everything returns to normal.
What i mean is that Natalie is a normal woman, but becames a giantess goddess, but she may be just fulfilling a user request but she enjoys herself but then returns to being an average girl. This continuos power exchange is the best. At least for me.
I dont know if you accept requests, but I hope we can see more feet content. Also more Gentle content. And if we can see a top actress of the app, doing some user request, acting that she is a giantess. Also, if we could see something similar as what Harlod did in Chapter 2, having someone you know to fullfill your own request.
Finally, as an idea, could be some type of event/sizeConnvention where many users request are accepted by many giantess, and they get a score and the winner gets a prize.
Can i ask a question, what would happen if some woman took a request from themselfs. So they can be a giantess and a tiny at the same time.
Anyway, Im sorry for writing this much, but im really enjoying your story. You are doing a great job!!! Keep writing please!!
Date: February 14 2020 7:41 AM Title: Start
I have really been hoping you'd continue. Love so many of the evil elements that also cause her pleasure. Looking forward to even more, would love some more details of the tinies' horror and her excitement.
Date: February 13 2020 11:56 AM Title: Start
You may be being a bit to hard on yourself. 26 reviews is a pretty decent amount feedback for a story of this size. My advise for helping to gain more traction is to make sure your story satys on the first two pages of "Most recent." Whether that means posting smaller chapters more frequently or spacing them out so that it jumps to the top just as it's about to move to the next page, is up to you. I hope this is a little bit helpful!
All that being said, I really enjoy the story that you have here and I'm happy to see youre posting again. Keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!
I do enjoy your stories as well so your review menas a lot.
I thought about releasing shorter chapters but I know that I dislike that myself when I am following a story.
Date: February 12 2020 2:49 PM Title: I have to go
love this scat chapter, and how natalie gets aroused by it! please more like it. and love how tiny jeremy just waits under thessa's asshole for the turd to crush him! be so hot to read about a giantess getting off as she shits on a tiny man!
i know scat isn't all that popular, but there are a lot of readers who are really into it, and if you like writing it, write what you like!
Date: January 02 2020 8:45 PM Title: I have to go
I really liked this chapter. Please continue the story!
[Report This]Date: January 02 2020 6:05 PM Title: Start
Brilliant stuff. The more deranged, humiliating and outright pitiful the actions, the better. I'd really like to see some of her requests going on for longer, things like putting a whole city on her toenail and having it be broken down and destroyed throughout her day, or projected onto the back of her panties and be slowly annihilated between the threads of the fabric.
All the bodily fluid stuff is great, btw. Some ear wax or navel lint or underarm sweat or something could be good.
Date: January 02 2020 5:29 PM Title: Start
Absolutley love the bratty girl evilly & horny snuffing out micro cities. My favorite was definitley the couples scenario & wish you'd make more but with them obliterating nano cities with sex.
Date: December 18 2019 8:18 AM Title: Fame
Wow, great start!
I'm impressed at how quickly you produced multiple chapters right from the beginning. Neat concept, and I admire the creativity with the different ways the cities have been destroyed so far. I'm really liking Natalie but I'm also eager to see what other characters will bring to the table (especially curious about what Tessa will be like). They don't stand a chance against two girls!
I'll be following this one closely, and I'm sure others are too,. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review. This review motivates me to finish up the next chapter hopefully tomorrow!
Thessa will be a different character than Natalie as she is based of a friend of mine. I still have plenty of chapters already planned out I just have to write them down.
Thanks for your interest
[Report This]Date: December 11 2019 6:22 PM Title: Fame
Another great addition! I wonder if Natalie is gonna end up cloned and in a shrunken city...
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
I am sure she was many times but the real natalie wouldn't know
[Report This]Date: December 10 2019 9:29 PM Title: The Smell of success
Great writing! I really like Chapter 4.
Can't wait for more butt/sweat/fart stuff. What would happen if she places the city in the back of her panties and goes about her day?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Something similar is already planned!
There will be definitly a lot more creative ways Natalie and the others will torment the clients if they want it or not.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2019 5:27 PM Title: Different kinds of liquid
Once again amazing!I will admit that farts and stuff is not my thing so chapter 4 wasn't exactly my jam, but holy heck chapter 5 gave me what I wanted, especially when it came to the nose play. It is such a rare thing that I truly love and you handled it incredibly well. It was sexy yet gross, which makes it more sexier if that makes any sense.
Again I will look forward to seeing how the other chapters come out. I am also down for seeing some new characters adding some more variety to the story.
If you are.concerned about others writing in accordance to this idea, then don't worry I won't write anything within this realm. I wouldn't want my contribution to hurt your writing in any way, especially since I am loving what you are doing
Author's Response:
Thank you again for your review!
It means a lot coming from someone who writes stories which I enjoy myself!
I have lot more planned for this story but as soon as this story comes to an end I would really like to read your version of the concept.
Date: December 09 2019 9:38 AM Title: Start
One of the best stories I've read in a while. I love when a woman discovers and revels in her cruelty. There is a popular "unaware" category of story, but sadly no "aware" category. Nonetheless I am always seeking out intensely aware stories such as this. Love when she uses her ass or gas to torment tinies, and really looking forward to when she inflicts horror and carnage with her #1s and #2s.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for you review the opinion from all of you means a lot to me!
There a definitly more scenes with Scat and Watersport planned out. Both aware and unaware!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 7:37 PM Title: Start
Finally! It has been such a long time since i read something that grasped my interest like this. The premise is simple but effective and at the same time original. The story has a plot element, but isn't bogged down in too much story telling itself and gets to the good stuff pretty quickly. Which is great since well this is erotica for a macro and shrink lover and sadly too many writers add too much story when all I really want is something quick and arousing. I love the over all diresting this story has been going and as I write this i have only read three chapters. I am giving this max stars, but would like chapters to be a bit longer and more heavy detail, but that is just a bit of criticism to a story that i am over all loving.
I am constantly going to be looking forward to this series and heck I like it so much I would even like to write something within the same universe of this story, maybe a spin off or even contribute a chapter with your blessing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much that review.
I really enjoy reading from you guys what your thinking about my story. And it is especially great if its coming from and author which I really like.
I loved all of your stories so far!
I'm a little concerned that all of a sudden everyone wants to write a story with this concept because I think it could influence my own progress. Although I I'm excited that you are gping to write something like this because I really enjoy your writing!
I will try to be more detailed but I just want to get the story to the good stuff:D Sine most it is already planned out.
Anyways chapter 4 will hopefully be to your liking and chapter 5 will be posted soon as well
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 11:37 AM Title: The Smell of success
I am loving this! I might make a story with the same concept with credit of course.
I have ideas for ways to destroy cities. Put it on food or in a drink, play music to it, mix it with drugs, incorprate it into a sport or game, role play with it, treat it like dirt, put it in the street, put it in a vehicle, relax feet on it, burn it, put it in zero gravity, use it as a wipe, more butt interactions, armpit destruction, dropping cum on it, breathing on it, spitting on it, leaving it in dirt, kissing it, dropping close at it, stepping on it with shoes, gum interactions or animals or fish interacting with it.
Some types of girls you can use are nice, rich, goth, emo, athletic, overweight, nerdy, food loving, foreign, mean, emotional, tomboy, weird, polite, music loving, actress, enviormental, gangster, meantally ill, astronaut, fashion loving, country girl, farm girl, royal girl, military girl, outcast, yandere or tsundere.
Author's Response:
Hey:)
I'm glad you like it!
I really enjoyed reading your wasted world story!
A lot of these topics will be covered in this story as well
[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 6:54 AM Title: The Smell of success
This story just keeps getting better. Excellent work! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you
I will try to post the next part pretty soon
Date: December 07 2019 4:00 PM Title: Start
Hey straight up do you mind if I borrow this idea and write a story or two? I'll give full credit and a link to your story. I am in LOVE with this concept man. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Yeah I suggested that story to another author once but he didn't use it.
As long as you give a link to my story and explain the origins I am fine with it. I am looking forward reading your version