[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 1:16 PM Title: Getting famous
You've got a talent for this. I really enjoy your writing style and attitude descriptions so far. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Comments like this keep me going;) I do have some other plans for future stories after this
[Report This]Date: December 07 2019 10:19 AM Title: Getting famous
very well written so far.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2019 6:07 PM Title: Natalies new fan
The story is still really interesting. :D if your thinking of other ideas then one that comes to mind is a guy places a request for his city to be shrunken to nano size and trapped in a girls thong string. However when he sees the girl who accepted the request it’s his own mom. What do you think :)
Author's Response:
The next chapter is half done. So it will probably be online today or tomorrow.
Thanks for your review and your suggestion. There will definitly be quit a lot of butt stuff in the near future. As the characters resemble people from my own life I don't think there will be much play between relatives.
As said before the next maybe 4 - 5 chapters are already planned out but I am glad to get suggestions for the chapters after that
Date: December 05 2019 9:43 PM Title: Natalies new fan
Keep Going
Date: December 04 2019 5:43 PM Title: Start
The concept is solid and the writing is pretty good.
Can´t wait for, when you put that futanari tag to use though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
Every tag will be used but some of them later in the story as more characters get involed.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 4:29 PM Title: Start
Fantastic work so far! Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
There is a lot more planned. I think the next 5 to 6 chapters are almost finished in my head.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2019 2:45 AM Title: Start
I like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: December 03 2019 11:18 PM Title: Start
This is an awesome idea! I liked the first chapter so much I actually made an account so I could leave a review. I'm really excited to see where this story goes, especially with the feet tag. Hoping to see some foot action with one of the "grain of sand" sized cities 😁
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. I do have a lot of pöans for this story because it's my favorite fantasy. There will be feet content as well as socks and different shoes.
Date: December 03 2019 8:35 PM Title: Start
This is an excellent scenerio. Please keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to see just how far she would go for that extra play money.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Natalie isn't really the main character just the on I started with so there will be a lot of other girls torturing the city aware and unaware.
[Report This]Date: December 03 2019 8:06 PM Title: Start
Very interesting. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Date: December 03 2019 7:43 PM Title: Start
Liking this so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: December 03 2019 6:25 PM Title: Start
Good start. Looking forward to more wierd and interesting requests.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
There will be lots of different scenarios and natalie will get desperate for money so there will be more weird and interesting requests in the future