Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2019 2:18 PM Title: Jessica's Night

This was a really fun read! One of the most tantalizing aspects of unaware is the enjoyment of really willing the victim to be successful in their desperate attempts to gain the attention of the unsuspecting devourer while knowing, as if watching a cliche horror movie, that their fate is sealed. I loved the part near the end where he almost got her attention, but I love vore endings even more, so I’m glad he failed.

I enjoyed the originality of the Aztec Idol, as well as the pun in the title which played into it. It was a really fun and concise method for getting the ball rolling on an otherwise straightforward “unaware mischief” story. It was well-written and easy to follow. Thanks for writing!